Kriyaansh ss 1st luv Neva..to be 4getten..updated - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Varun Dhawan. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaaramarhai

Loved it jaldi update plz plz plz plz plz plz cant wait.


Thnx..
Nd l ll try to update today..
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Posted: 12 years ago
di update plz..😊.

update..

update..

update...

i can't wait for next part.. plz update soon..plzzz😊

and" HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY"❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey deepu,
u said u will update yesterday...??????😭

wer's d update???

chalo chalo jaldi jaldi update karo...
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Posted: 12 years ago





Part 4

Va: Am VARUN..

Sw:(smiling)ohh.. so u r varun ...he forwarded his hand..
Am swayam..kriya aur Sharon ka frnd..
(shar has told him abt varun)

Va:(million dollar smile)hey dude nice to meet u..
Nd both shook der hands..

Sw:same here..

Varun smiled..

Sw:Plz come in..

Va:yeah..

Both headed inside d house..as soon as kriya saw Varun..she was so shocked to see him..n looked at Sharon who was smirking..
Girls wer literally drooling over him
N boys trying to gain back deir attention..(lol..)
Rey was thinking..whoz he..?(bata chale ga..wait..)

Varun directly went towards kriya nd hugged her..tight..First she was stunned..n hugged him back..

Va:kriya where were you these days..?

Kr:(breaking d hug)pehle Tum batao tum yaha kaise..I mean Canada se kab aye ho..?

Va:ohh shit btw whoz Sharon here?

Kriya pointed towards Sharon all confused..nd he looked at her who was grinning wide like stupid..
He just went nd hugged her..

Va:thnx Sharon fr everything..

Sh:hey u r most welcome..(smiling)
Both broke d hug..n looked at all (except swayam) who wer hell confused..

Kriya looked at Sharon as 'will u plz care to explain' expression..
She blinked her eyes..saying ok..

FLASHBACK:
In d morning after kriya told tat she will also try to move on..den kriya left fr washroom..nd dialed Varun's no..
Sharon called varun n aftr 4 or 5 rings he picked d call..

Va: hello.. Whoz dis..??

Sh: hello.. Is dis varun...??

Va: yess...

Sh: oh hi varun.. I'm Sharon kriya's sister...

Va: oh.. Hi.. Sharon plz can u tell me where is kriya..??Voh achanak chali gayi..

Sh: varun actually kriya is here in Mumbai wid me...(she told d story of their family) so she had to stay wid me in Delhi nd hum kal hi mumbai aye hai..btw tum kaha ho abb?

Va:Am in Delhi now..

Sh:wow tats great den kya tum mumbai aa sakte ho kriya se Milne?

Va: okk..sure..Actually tht day when I proposed her she told me she needs some Tym..but..He was cut by Sharon

Sh: actually varun wht happened was.. n narrated him whole story abt Rey n everything..

Va: oh but...Again was cut..

Sh: but varun Rey has moved on n kriya too wants to move on in her life..

Va:(happy)thanq sharon.. I ll be der tomorrow..

Sh: yaa yaa thtz fine Kk then bye..

Va: Kk bye..

FLASHBACK ENDS...

Rey nd gang wer shocked to d core tat varun loves kriya..n even proposed her..

gang was happy fr kriya..somewhere dey felt tat if Rey has moved on..so y nt kriya..?especially Vicky..he wondered wt changed him..bt was very happy for her..(I reli like kricky's bond..hehe..especially during shivams party..der couple entry..was d best part)

Re(mind talk):varun kriya se pyar karta hai..bt kriya ne reject kiya..tho ab kyu aya hai..?
soon he came out of his thoughts..

Sh:varun..pointing towards gang..
Ye sab mere aur kriya ke frnds hai..

Va:ohh tho introduce karvao..

Sh:(blushing)as u knw..he's swayam..

Va:yaa

Sharon introduced all of dem..excpt taa...

Sh:uhh

Sw:varun ye Tani hai my sister..

Ta:jai Shri Krishna..((joining her hands)

Va:hello

Sw:nd varun he's Rey

Va:hey dude

Re:hi..

Sh:(smirking ) wait..wait..varun tum kal aane wale the na?

Va:slightly brushing his hairs wid his hand..) yaa..bt I couldn't wait..to meet her...n moved towards kriya..

Kr:(confused) ??

Varun bent down his knees..n took hold of her hand..she was dumbfounded by his sudden move..n he started..

Va:kriya I hav proposed u before also..but tumne bina kuch bole hi chali gayi..so today..I want u to say ur feelings towards me..kriya..kya Tum mujhse pyaar karti ho..
He said..just looking into her eyes..deeply..

Kriya firstly..felt her heart skip a beat..she was soo touched..by his words..n saw so much of love..n care..for her..in his eyes..nd a tear escaped frm her eyes..whch fell on his hand he immediately stood in his place n cupped her face..

All dis while sharon was grinning wide..swayam nd gang was also happy..Swayam d most..coz..he dont want kriya to suffer anymore..n live her life happily..wid whom d person reli loves her..alot..

And.. last but not d least..taa...
Rey's heart skipped beats..after wt all varun had said to kriya..earth has stopped fr him..he kept on staring at both of dem..nd tani was just praying tat kriya says a yes to varun..(now enough of tat taa...pov)

Varun cupped kriya's face..

Va:(concerned) kriya wt happened?? Tum ro kyu rahi ho..did I just hurt you..by saying..all.. He was cut by kriya..

Kr:(sobbing) varun..tumne mujhe hurt nai kiya..infact meine kiya..tumhe bina bataye chali gayi..phir bhi tumne move on..nai kiya..
she said d last line eyeing at Rey..
M sry..varun..sry..for hurting u..

Rey was in urge to cry loudly..for not trusting her..nd her love..

Va:(concerned)plz kriya dnt cry..

Kriya finally composed herself..n said...those words...

Kr:I love u varun..She said..looking into his eyes..

He couldnt believe tat she said dose words to him..he was not able to digest it..He was on cloud 9..infact..

Va:reli...he shouted excitedly..n jumping like a maniac

Kriya blushed n nodded..looking down..
As soon as she blushed..he immediately..started totwiril her..
N said..
"i love you kriya"...

Gang hooted..for both of them..nd Rey..he just dashed out..silently..nd left for his house...

Hw'z it guys?
Hope u all like it..
Plz do hit like tab..n comment..

Surprise abhi bhi baaki hai..sry guys actually meine ek video banayi hai bt system thodi slow hogaya so nxt update mei pakka


Edited by deepshakriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i'm fis to comment
about the update
it was very nice one
i loved it
keep up the good work
Edited by srujanahpvr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
suprbbb...loved it... It was suprbb...loved sharon a lott for doing this...plzzz plzzz dont make kr a couple in this...i m loving varun nd kriya...he deserve her...thanxx4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...kriya accepted varun...ab kya hoga rey ka????
Edited by rhu90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Rey should realize his mistake of not trusting Kriya
Varun nd Kria couple
Kria really deserve someone better than Rey
Waiting for further updates
Continue soon
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
masst updatee yaar...
whooaaa variya confessed!!! osmm...
hmm rey dashed out...apni taa ko chodke! ughh🤢
lovddd itt...waiting 4 moreee

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