Arhi Angst SS: The Other Woman COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

wow beautiful story You are more right about Khushi and arnav than the CVS will ever be.Like K said if she ran away he would search the whole world for her and so she took this drastic step of ending her life which is more symbolic as I don't she would be able live a life without him and also see him lead a life with Sheetal to top it off 😭 she may be selfless but not that strong.I had tears in my eyes while reading the letter so emotional and when i saw arnav so helplessly calling out to his love asking her to wake up my heart just broke for them💔😭.Their whole of the hospital convo was brilliant like i said had tears in my eyes.I know its just a story, they are just characters but its just that i am really attached to them thanks😳 to barun & sanaya for their brilliant portrayal of the characters and of course your awesome writing👍🏼😃
PS The ending was brilliant at least you had the heart to give sheetal a graceful exit with her actually repenting her actions and the symbolic slamming of the door and the exit of the OTHER WOMAN was perfect...!!!😊 sorry to take up soo much of your time with my ranting..!!😳😳

Edited by buttercup2292 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: buttercup2292
wow beautiful story You are more right about Khushi and arnav than the CVS will ever be.Like K said if she ran away he would search the whole world for her and so she took this drastic step of ending her life which is more symbolic as I don't she would be able live a life without him and also see him lead a life with Sheetal to top it off 😭 she may be selfless but not that strong.I had tears in my eyes while reading the letter so emotional and when i saw arnav so helplessly calling out to his love asking her to wake up my heart just broke for them💔😭.Their whole of the hospital convo was brilliant like i said had tears in my eyes.I know its just a story, they are just characters but its just that i am really attached to them thanks😳 to barun & sanaya for their brilliant portrayal of the characters and of course your awesome writing👍🏼😃
PS The ending was brilliant at least you had the heart to give sheetal a graceful exit with her actually repenting her actions and the symbolic slamming of the door and the exit of the OTHER WOMAN was perfect...!!!😊 sorry to take up soo much of your time with my ranting..!!😳😳

thanks so much for this long comment. really means alot. :)

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