Arhi Angst SS: The Other Woman COMPLETED

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

your ss has been nicely wound up! though a bit late, thank god sheetal apologised to khushi and arnav... understand arnav's refusal to forgive khushi and sheetal but he understood khushi's fears which is a great thing... in future he might take more care of what he says to her about his past or anything else concerning his life!

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Wow

Really loved it

Perfect ending

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Geet

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Nicely done Zara!

Hopefully, the show also pulls it this fast.

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abika

@abika

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

amazing ending thanks for pm

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Brilliant ending! You've kept it realistic making Sheetal come and apologize of misusing Khushi's suspicions. I mean how can one train a kid to be like Arnav?! He was like that but is NOT related to their family at all. 👍🏼
And I felt like crying looking at Arnav's pain when he got the assurance that Khushi is fine and when Khushi woke up. Hayye, Khushi pehle baat kerkey dekti...you took so much pain and tears just for a lying woman. Even though Sheetal did go through a lot, it still does not justify her actions. Great story overall! 👏

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Awesm epilogue... Lovd it
"You have no right to take something that's mine. YOUR mine Khushi. " Wow... Wt a dialogue yaar...
Well writtn dude...

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

The ending is just so apt!

Beautifully written!

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diya33

@diya33

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

really great 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

hey it was the perfectend
as long as khushiis alive and with arnie it dont matter
wow i did mange to catch your other work too
fantastic i must say

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Oh goodness! I didn't expect khushi to attempt suicide! Love the way you wrote about Arnav's feeling about that, so true and much believable than what was shown in the show, the time khushi tried it.
I love the ending, esp how the other woman was told off.