1st on ur 1st os caught it b4 d pm bt tuk tym 2 edit. Beautifuly written. Arshi is meant 2 b 2gthr. Lovd it. Khushi got hr love nd arnav tried hs best. Cute. Waitng 4 mkm.
Edited by Drkk - 13 years ago
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felt sorry for khushi as she felt used by all the guys previously just so they can get with her friend, and the one guy that actually wanted khushi, she assumed its the same routine and just skipped some steps
but i love how he was extracting information about her for the past month..too cute
That was amazing!! Really like it! But I just wish you wouldn't have ended it there, I would have liked to see Khushi explaining why she said no the first time, her insecurities and all. That was the only thing I felt about the ending, a little abrupt. But I enjoyed it! For your first time, it is really good! If you please continue this, I would love it may be a second part to give it more a fantastic finish! Thanks for the PM!
WOW JUST AMAZING read it first thing in the morning and you simply made my day loved that part the most where Arnav tells Khushi everything about her For a sec I was confused why Khushi using 'YOU' for herself and them it clicked me This is going to be one of my fav OS's hope in future I'll be lucky enough to read more such OSs from you
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