Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Drkk

@Drkk

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Posted: 12 years ago

1st on ur 1st os
caught it b4 d pm bt tuk tym 2 edit.
Beautifuly written.
Arshi is meant 2 b 2gthr. Lovd it.
Khushi got hr love nd arnav tried hs best.
Cute. Waitng 4 mkm.

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

How cute! At least things turned around for Khushi! Loved it!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

res *editted*

this was cute

loved it

felt sorry for khushi as she felt used by all the guys previously just so they can get with her friend, and the one guy that actually wanted khushi, she assumed its the same routine and just skipped some steps

but i love how he was extracting information about her for the past month..too cute

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bikerider

@bikerider

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Posted: 12 years ago

kushi and her monologue , this is also one of the thing i miss 😭
thanks , enjoy your trip will wait fot he FF update

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kshows_fangirl

@kshows_fangirl

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was amazing!! Really like it! But I just wish you wouldn't have ended it there, I would have liked to see Khushi explaining why she said no the first time, her insecurities and all. That was the only thing I felt about the ending, a little abrupt. But I enjoyed it! For your first time, it is really good! If you please continue this, I would love it may be a second part to give it more a fantastic finish! Thanks for the PM!

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mbibi

@mbibi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww that was too cute! Arnav only had eyes for khushi nd here she was being self conscious for nothing!
-maria

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anushkaa.

@anushkaa.

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

This was sooo cute..loved it awhh.
please do write more
loved the OS
thank you

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

congratulation on your first os
Awesome os very well written
waiting for your 2nd os and thank u for pm me

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suchikashyap

@suchikashyap

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

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WOW JUST AMAZING read it first thing in the morning and you simply made my day loved that part the most where Arnav tells Khushi everything about her For a sec I was confused why Khushi using 'YOU' for herself and them it clicked me This is going to be one of my fav OS's hope in future I'll be lucky enough to read more such OSs from you

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