Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

That was cute and amazinggg!!

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Barkah

@Barkah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

congratulation on your first OS

Awesome OS 😊
Love it 😛

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Rashmi

@Barun83

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Loved the update. I think u should try more OSs. Thanx for the pm.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

loved the os that was so cute and sweet he asked her but she let her insecurities get in the way and gave him to kamya instead so cute he did not dance with her but found out everything about khushi instead loved the os awesome beautifully done thanks for the pm sorry i am late

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Venkata

@venkata

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome update. Both Arnav and Kushi meant for each other. Really liked a lot. Thanks for pm.

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

omg..luved the os..it was so cute... u should so write more os's like this!!! thanks for the pm... luved the update...

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SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

AWW ARNAV AND KHUSHI MEANT FOR EACH OTHER. VERY NICE DEAR. YOUR WAY OF WRITTING IS IMPECCABLE. GERY CUTE AS WELL.😊

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I loved the OS..

From how you have penned down Khushi's feelings of not being good enough, her frustration, need to be noticed

Her loyalty to Kamya.

Her forthrightness when it came to Arnav asking her for a dance.

Her disbelief when she found out later that he had wrung information out of Kamya for her was a nice touch. For him, she is special.

Arnav's confusion when she asks him to dance with Kamya.

His persistence in finding Khushi.

How Khushi wasn't able to forget him or what he made her feel..

I loved it..

Please keep writing!!

Thanks for the PM..

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

wow its really a good one.u have thrown light on different arshi love.god man ur a bundle of wonder.thks for the pm waiting for more treat and joy.loved the way arnac said all the things he said to khushi.

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Sooo cute! Really loved it! its sad how guys bruise a girl's self esteem just because she has a beautiful friend! I mean get the guts to ask her yourself! Don't hurt anyone in the process! Loved your Arnav.. :D