Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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Mahima

@MahimaMV

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wonderful update... It was awesome n lovely❤️... Felt really happy that Arnav got all the informations abt Khushi frm her best friend...it was really awesome.. Thanku for the pm dear😊

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Oh my gosh this was the sweetest thing I have ever written! What a nice Valentine's Day gift to us readers!! This was awesome, usually we see Arnav being insecure, but this was a nice change and that too from Khushi's point of view. Heck even I was surprised because I thought she was going to be with NK hehe. Loved it a ton!

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Amazing OS…

and really sweet and cute. I loved how it was the other way around …i.e. him hounding her friend to get information.

I had this huge smile on my face the whole time I was reading it so very well done.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

cute!

many can probably relate to this!

arnav was interested from the beginning in khushi...trying to extract information about her from kamya...

oh khushi you had heartbreak all over but when a genuine guy walked over to you ...you didn't get it right!

loved how in-spite of turning down his offer khushi still had her thoughts over arnav...

it was comedy of error sorts when she saw arnav nk with kamya...

fitting tale for valentines well written beautiful and fun too...

keep writing ...

happy valentines and good luck!

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Dat was really amaZing...i loved how arnav made efforts to extract info abt khushi n to meet her...
would really love to read a second part of this

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

How cute...

A perfect valentines day gift to all of us... 😳

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey!

Its nice to see that you are experimenting and exploring with writing an OS.

Its not nice being ignored or used as an information centre in order to extract information and for that be used in pursuing the object of a mans affections. Not on in the slightest, though realistically this does happen.

Wow! Arnav is quite the clever man. He extracted a lot of information about Khushi and did genuinely ask her for the dance and not her friend. Adorable 😳😳

Extremely well-written. Please do write more OSs. You've done a fabulous job with this!

👏👏👏

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

tooo gd :) :)

i loved how he extracted info on her... how he insisted upoon her being present.. n hw he still want tht dance.. :) :)

i knw i shud feel wht khushi hd been feeling... ignored... bt all i feel after this is hw beautifully she is being pursued by him...

n tht feels gr8 😊

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Oh yaaar, this is sooo damn sweet, adorable, lovable, cute, aww types! I just LOVED it! I always knew Arnav only had eyes for his Khushi, I mean look at the guy, anywhere and everywhere his eyes are only fixed on HER! He just knows SHE is the one for him! He just can't see the most beautiful, the sexiest, the most appealing, yada yada girls when she's in the picture or maybe at all!

That is such a good feeling, not just for Khushi, but for a person who is reading it all as well!

It is soo beautifully put, Arnav's Khushi!! Aww! LOVED IT!

You should definitely write many more one shots dude, I'm soo in for reading the lovely little things :D

This was just sweet!! Thanks for the pm :D

Keep up the awesome work and keep making all your fans like me smile every time we read your writings :)

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shivani_bv

@shivani_bv

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wow. Absolutely loved it. Sweet and simple. Was surprised for a second when NK turned out to be the one for Kamya.
And the way Arnav brought his pursual intentions all upfront. Truely Made for each other.

Thanks for the PM. Keep writing ur beautiful stories.

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