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Posted: 12 years ago
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My dear Ariyans I'm back with the 1st Chapter. This is the first time ever that I'm going crazy to write and post my own work. I've been waiting for the 7th i.e Valentine Week to kick off😳
I would like you all to be patient and not doubt Arjun in here😆 he's definitely not bluffing or cheating at least not at the moment! (Thats a huge give away😕) Alright I just want to thank 'One Direction band for singing such an awesome song link added at the end of the post that had inspired me to penn something like this down for all of you & me☺️
Last but not the least I want to dedicate this to Shaleen☺️ and all my IF friends who wanted to read but can't read it at the moment...
Thanks for being patient on reading on my blabbering... Here you go😳 eagerly waiting for Tamatar's, Comments...pls no andaaass okay😆 But please do comment as next Chapter would be up by tomorrowConfused
-Shru
Chapter 1

'Let me kiss you' he politely asked permission

While she nodded her head in a no 'I love you...' he said with a huge grin glued on his face.

She typed Love you too... Delete delete delete...she said to herself as she typed 'Liar don't talk rubbish' 'Baby I am gone mad because of you' he said as he smiled at her through the camera.

Her eyes were shy to make an eye contact, she blushed with his words.

'Ohh mom's here got to go, see you soon' she whispered

'Heyyy please don't go... hey wait baby 'Let me kiss you'... Nooo she strongly replied finally kissing the camera stealing a long distance kiss. ...

It had been few months our online date, we had recently met one through a social networking site, though it's not safe to get close to strangers online.

But I can't help knowing and acknowledging new acquaintances rather than cherishing he old ones.

Her thoughts were interrupted for few seconds with the lyrics she heard,

'And Let me kiss you

Let me kiss you

Let me kiss you'

She increased the volume to high as she visualized her past running on the rear view mirror of her car. She remembered the feelings she had penned down years ago, so she once again she was back to her history.

Yet, here I am in the 21st century where all the brutal murders are taking place I am trusting someone I never met in my entire life.

I and he have known each other for quite some time now, and we seem to gel up really well. I just feels complete talking to him day and night, he has become another part of me.

Though sometimes we seem to have completely different ideas, but still I try to keep up with him just to make him happy.

Finally I think he's the right person to spend my life with..

Being honest is not a bad thing but loving him unconditionally day and night is all I do. I am sure this is love, I so hope its not affection or infatuation.

I have asked him thousands of times if he loved me, where his answer has always been 'Yes, baby I love you loads '

Even the thought of him saying that sends vibes down my spine and I automatically have goosebumps on my arm.

Then again the fellow I love is so secretive about us that its only us who knows that we are in a relationship. Absurd!!!

I know but I think my best friends and his little sister already knows with the way I take his name sweetly and softly. His name gives me pleasure, a feel of being loved, just being someone's. Oh my god! He is so possessive that he doesn't like me talking to his sister... Typical Indian brother tell me about it...

The girl smiled as her thoughts lingered around as she recalled some odd memories of hers.

...She had tears of joy, sadness and love filled in her eyes as the song ended on her radio.

You get this kinda rush.

Let me say yea a yeah a yeah yeah a yeah

Few hours later the girl walked into her house annoyed at herself and her thoughts. She threw her handbag on the couch thumping on it as she slowly closed her eyes trying to find peace.

they still lingered around her unfaithful past.

*Flashback continues

'Hey baby when you are coming here?' questioned the guy.

'I don't know if I could come there jaan' she texted back.

'I don't care I wanna see you samjhi' he demanded.

'Lekin mai parents ke saath aa rahi hu, jo bhi ho I'll try pakka alright' she assured him of at least trying.

A smile appeared on his face.

'I miss you sweety' Can we talk? he requested desperately.

His cell rung for exactly two seconds, it was evident that he was dying to talk to her.

'Hiii' he said out in an excited voice

She gasped as he spoke, and she froze waiting for him to speak another word.

'Riya' he said with some sexiness in his voice. She was frozen furthermore with him calling out her name like no-one else does.

'Riya' he said out again and she moaned as she let out a smile inwardly 'Bolo' she replied to him slowly.

'What should I say, you say?' he said softly

'I don't have anything to say dear' she said teasingly.

'Aarey if you didn't wanted to talk they why make an international call' he questioned irritatedly.

'Aarey baba, why are you getting upset hunn' she questioned him in an upset tone.

'I'm not upset, after a pause 'I'm sorry' he apologized while Riya replied sadly

'Hmmm' 'Ye chodo kaise ho tum' he questioned with a slight smile,

'Tum pehle batao' she said, after few seconds both argued sillily 'First you' 'No you' argued the other.

After what it felt like ages they finally settled in when Arjun finally said 'I know you're good, so that's why I'm good too dear' Both smiled ear to ear as they could sense each other's smiles through phone.

'I love you Arjun'

'I love you too' Arjun replied Riya.

Shortly, another set of light argument was out as they argued over who loved one more than other. The conclusion was always was undecidable .

Hours passed by counting on the most kisses given to her or the one she gave him. In the end, their day had successfully passed by in each other's loving company. The only person they could find peace with.

Finally before parting that day Arjun seriously questioned Riya 'Babes, tell me when you're coming here I'll definitely come to see you from here no matter what happens'

Riya excitedly 'Ohh hunnn I love you shonaaa, I'm coming down exactly in a month and I hope to see you there please convince your mother'

'I'm trying my best sweety, listen'. I love you muaahh' said Arjun in a husky tone.

'Hey I love you too, will talk through text have to go out and please at least today don't bunk college' Riya said out with a smile.

Riya gaspingly woke up from the short nap that trailed more like a trailer than a short relaxing sleep!

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NOTE: Blue was to indicate present and the uncoloured parts is indicated as past... Next chapter would have other colours indicating their feelings... I heartily hope you liked it... expecting some good comments...Please bare me with mistakes and I'm sorry if you didnt like the Romance😭 or if you felt it unreal
Next Chap To be posted Tomorrow...
Too much blabbering today... Happy Valentines Week now Feedbacks time😳

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
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Awsome Update yaar!
As I said before ... Wonderful concept!
You have written it well ... Like always!
And what do you mean my "he is not cheatng at the moment" ... you are scaring me!
But I am sure you wont do anything bad!
Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
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Woww re Shru!!👏
It's such a different concept😉...Online Dating😆...Weird but...Pyaar kaise miljaaye kya pata😳(getting philosophical🤣)
Hahahha😆😆 Arjun and Riya are in college😎...And someone stays abroad...Arjun??😕
Arjun getting so romantic...ufff☺️☺️☺️
BUT!! Ur post about not misjudging Arjun has left me curious😲
Okk so I'll wait and WATCH...rather READ😆😆
P.S. LURVVEEE the song😳
Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Unique concept! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
shru dear i was waiting for ur update😳
first of all happy rose day dear
i felt it real shru dear,
online dating so sweet and intersting 😛
kya likti ho yaar tum ,i loved the way u wrote
and liked their fight ,kitna romance chuoa hua hai 😳
and she is sad ,tum to bilkul SM ho😉
plz plz continue soon dear
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
shru am late *sob*
its just awesome
who told u to say ki Yeh unreal hai...haan
are wig story he kya jisme mubalga arayi na ho dear
sachi aur realistic story mein maza nai aur Yeh to bht brilliant hai dear
kitna romantic hai haye
waiting for more
update soon
thanks for pm
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
di thoda zyada ho gya 🤣
itna dhasu concept haye 🥳
it was like kissa kiss ka 🤗
Di loved it..
happy wala valentine week di..
khush kr dita haye..
p.s. maine pehli baar coment me emoctions put kiye yay..
song sorry
my
mouth closed di yay..!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Super Romantic Update!!!...
Tujhe bas tamatar kyu padhe...ande are good for health🤣
Bohhtt hi sweet update tha...diabetes ho jayegi mujhe...lol...
Online dating..dono..Superb!!!
Loved there cute fight<3..
And romance😳😳😳
Riya gonna meet him!!!
Awesom song👍🏼
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome chap..

Online dating...mushi mushi..

cho cweet...

Loved the cute fight they had...sometime we grow up but love to fight that way...
child at heart...i just loved it...

Present is pleasing and sad right now...
waiting for the valentine special you will give us..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Amazing...quite a new unique way to start..
loved it...online dating..long distance relationship...
Nice read...beautifully written!
Cont soon!

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