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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
@anu91, aroojarain, piyarani, devildiva21, aliya, sdhg, life93..
Thank you sooo sooo much guys for liking it and commenting😳
Will definitely update pretty soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Tammy, Alisha, umamah70

Thank you guys for your lovely comments..😳 will update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Leki

Amazing start... Loved it... concept s really different ... online chatting nd long distance relationship...intresting... bt wat was dat disclaimer abt nt doubting Arjun's intention... dat ake me curious... update soon...

Disclaimer was only there bcause I know most of you would doubt Arjun from the start which I really didnt want to happen.

Originally posted by: haruhi26

very interesting start😳

Loved it cause it's an unusual love story, love by chatting😊
But what's with this pain and betrayal😕
continue soon😊

Thank you so much for liking it Tina...😳
awww the pain was ummm you'll find out soon😉
Updating soon,...

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Online Dating..

Differnt concept, love it.
Plz plz update soon , aaj hi kar do na kal ka wait nahi hta..
Dying to read.

Thank you so much for liking the concept di...
aaj hi kar rahi hu update hehe😳
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

As promised I'm here on time to give you update the day I promised 'OMG' Its all you guyz ka magic😳☺️

It's one long chapter please take time to read and do comment😆

Chapter 2

Recap:

Riya gaspingly woke up from the short nap that trailed more like a trailer than a short relaxing sleep!

She wiped out the sweat beads from her forehead, and stormed into her study room where all her books were packed up ready to export back to India.

Riya had recently graduated finishing her degree successfully, and she was flying back home in India for a break and to find an appropriate job.

Continuation of Present:

'Where is this book I swear I had packed it up' she muttered to herself.

Few minutes, later the room was a mess but she had successfully found the book she was searching for.

She gasped loudly holding her breath for few seconds; Riya hugged the book he had presented for the first time. She kissed the hard cover once and hugged it yet again dropping a lone tear that escaped through the corner of her eyes.

Soon she stormed outside, torn the pages and threw in the fire that was lit right in front of her house. She ran inside slamming the door behind her she slid down with her back on the door.

Riya folded her legs, hugging herself with her face dunged in between her knees. She sobbed and sobbed until she fell on the ground unconsciously.

Meanwhile, a little kid saw Riya tearing and throwing the book it had all the princesses on it (for example Jasmine, Snow white...etc)


The little boy was very keen and loving brother he didn't think twice and he took all the pages he found that were unburnt for his little sister. He carried them home.

His mother screamed at him, for bringing someone else's trash home but his aunt said she would fix it for him.

The young lady who was fixing was same age as Riya, but she didn't know Riya personally neither she ever met her.

As soon as she started gluing the papers together she knew that this was a story to read. There was something behind (in the first page) and forward (something for the future). So she payed attention and closely fixed each and every page with right page numbers, and started reading from where the story had left earlier.

It was coincidence that the first few pages were completely burnt they were hardly visible.

This would be through the girls vision, as she reads out the diary.

Past i.e. the young lady's visualization as she read the diary with full of interest and passion.

'Hey Arjun, I'm flying down on 15th dec, so when did you want to meet me' texted Riya as she packed her bags.

'Hii Jaan, I've talked to mom and we all are flying down to Mumbai from Delhi, I'm not sure about myself but I hope to come.'

Riya pouted as she read Arjun's message.

'Dekho jaan, I'm flying from here only to see you and if I don't get to see you I would seriously stop talking to you' replied back an angry Riya.

'Shona, once my exam dates are declared I would confirm my ticket okay?' Arjun handled the fragile situation. Riya soon got excited, 'Okay okay I'll be waiting to see you I love you' she texted back with an enthusiasm that took her to cloud nine that day.

It had been exactly two weeks since Riya had arrival in India''''..

'Sweety, where are you no text no calls from last two days. I hope you're doing fine, I'm worried here babes' texted an anxious Arjun.

'Look babes, I'm here in Mumbai just for you and would be leaving in a week from now. So, I hope we better meet or I'll be super upset hunn' he texted for the second time the same day.

'I'm sorry hunn I was at native place like you know but I had no balance in my cell. I apologize heartily to keep you waiting jaaan' replied Riya.

A smile crept on Arjun's lips with a sigh of relief making its way.

'Let's not delay our meeting, let's meet tomorrow, I'll let you know the location and time tomorrow.' texted Riya

'First of all I want to listen to your melodious voice, secondly can you please let me know in advance as I have to board a taxi babe' Arjun requested with an ease in this tone/ text.

Next day'(5 days were left for Arjun to leave Mumbai)

9:00 am


'Babes, where are you? Please tell me the location' requested Arjun as he sent in a text.

'Ohh honey, I don't have a vehicle to travel in and I'm trying to find a perfect location near you so that you won't have a problem.' Riya replied

'I can understand, but please try to hurry up dear I've to get back home before my relatives and parents arrive' texted Arjun.

Riya an hour later, found someone who could drive her few miles down the city. Meanwhile, she had informed Arjun the exact location with the help of her friend.

Arjun had arrived and he had been waiting for last 10 minutes, Riya's cell phone rang.

'Ohh sh*t it's his call' she whispered to her friend who was driving'


Riya picked the phone up happily as his flashing name gave her peace, 'Riya, kaha ho tum? I have been waiting for so long' Arjun blurted out angrily.

His annoyed tone sent fearful vibes down her spine, she sighed and said 'I'm sorry Arjun I couldn't find someone who could bring me here I'm sorry' she apologized with her voice breaking in sadness.

Arjun took a long pause and said 'Please come fast the sun's too hot for me'

Please NOTE from here on Riya's inner feelings would be in Pink and Arjun's in Blue😳 Sorry for the interruption please continue😉

'I'm almost there, btw what colour clothes are you wearing?' she questioned but bit her tongue.

Stupid idiot you know how he looks then why ask him such a stupid question she cursed herself

1) for being late

2nd for asking such an absurd question.

She requested her friend to drive faster, and they reached their planned location few minutes after the call.

Riya searched all the area for him, but he couldn't be seen at start but shortly she found him as soon he saw her he called on her cell 'Kisse dhund rahi ho jaan, mai tumhare samne hoon, pareshaan mat ho'

Riya stopped as she heard his husky calming voice, she stopped right where she was and turned around to find Arjun smiling at her sheepishly.

She ran to him, but her body suddenly stopped in front of him

Riya in her mind OMG you idiot girl, how can you hug him with your bestfriend and her boyfriend around you. Control'!!!!

Riya 'Hiii'' she greeted him as she blushed just observing his smile.

Hayeee ye ladka mujhe marva hi dega aaj'

Arjun 'Hiii sweety' he replied quickly and softly before her friends could hear him.

Riya introduced Arjun to her best friend Sanjana Kapoor and her boyfriend Rishi Sharma.

What should I talk to him, OMG' This is so awkward'

A: Help me my lord, this stupid girl brought her best friend i.e. a new acquaintance for me along with her boyfriend. How am I suppose to talk to my Riyu alone. How will I spend my time alone'. Ohhh godd'. Grrr'. He grunted inside

Arjun shyly sat next to Riya while Sanjana and Rishi took the seat on the opposite side.

Rishi: Dude don't be so shy'

'Rish, he's not shy Arju is little bit reserved at start' Riya said as she glanced at Arjun sideways. He passed a sweet smile to her, that filled her heart.


The couple had a accidental double date, while they were having their lunch in the restaurant silently Arjun grabbed Riya's hand underneath the table.

Riya's eyes popped out as she choked on her food, and she smiled inwardly towards Arjun. His touch is so magical, the sudden vibes he sent down my spine is amazing. He's an angel who's touch would be a Midas one! Am I gold yet! She thought with a sheepish smile.

Arjun's thoughts:

Her skin is as soft as a feather, lucky I'm left handed I can totally engage my right hand entangled with her left hand. Her touch is so soft that I don't feel like ever leaving her hand.
After a while..
'Damm yaar, I forgot to bring my wallet' declared Rish as soon as they finished eating.

'Ohh no I left it in my vehicle, all because of you' blamed Sanju while she elbowed Rish lightly.

Riya and Arjun both smiled at the couples closeness and jesture, while Riya said 'I'll pay that's alright.'

While Arjun blinked at her indicating that he will pay it. Immediately 'No Arjun I'll pay it dear' Riya replied softly aacidently resting her hand on his on the table.

Sanju and Rish exchanged a glance with a smile, Rish cleared his throat to get Ariya's attention 'Now that you two are deciding we would let you continue, we are just outside' said Rish mockingly with a wink and stupid grin stuck on his face.

Ariya had a surprising look on their face with Rish's words, both kept staring the couples back until the were out of the restaurant.

Ariya exchanged a quick glance once Sanju and Rish were out. Soon Riya got nervous 'Did they had to leave me here alone, I don't know what to talk to him. Neither do I know how and what to say. God help me I'm confused.' Her nervousness didn't go unnoticed by Arjun.

'Hey relax I wont eat you' said Arjun with a slight smirk on his face. Riya's hands stopped from getting the money out of her purse, she sideways glanced at Arjun. His lips immediately curved into a smile as soon he saw Riya's relaxing body language and a small smile making a way on her lips.

Arjun neared her face, while Riya had another shocking expression on her face she backed as he neared Riya's mind: Ye kya kar raha hai' PdA?😲 unimaginable.

Riya's heart immediately debated: Aarey, his slow pace is making me beat faster with his hand nearing my face, is he going to KiSs'.😲

Riya's mind: That's right he might be ready to kiss and make it official? Maan mai laadu fute kya 'Maan ji' questioned Riya mind..

Riya's soul: Ohh shut up you two just see what her eyes are showing we can debate later this is soo intense.

Arjun's hand neared Riya's face, by the time it touched her she had sweat beads on her forehead Arjun quickly picked up his handkerchief from his back pocket and wiped off her sweat beads with his other hand.

'You're feeling so hot in this cold weather' he questioned her with so much curiosity, but there was no reply from her side.

Arjun kept the hankerchief on the table, once again his hand continued nearing her face he touched her forehead softly, and continued to trail with his finger slowly and softly when suddenly he came on a halt near her ears. Riya had opened her eyes slowly by then, she shying looked everywhere but him. Arjun smile widened into a sweet grin, he slowly then tucked few strands of hair behind her ear.

While his eyes were observing her lovingly, Arjun couldn't take his eyes of her he was mesmerized by Riya's beauty.
Arjun neared to her ear but Riya kept backing off, suddenly Arjun halted her shoulder and neared her whispering 'Hey Beautiful, I love you'

Saying so Arjun kept Rs.100 on the table and walked off.

It took Riya few minutes to get out of her trance, she felt it was all her dream but Arjun was observing her from the exit door. She looked at him and shyly smiled, while Arjun winked at her.


To Riya's surprise she only had Rs.100 in total and their bill clearly said Rs.200. She smiled at Arjun's antics inside and said 'Mad''

As soon as Ariya reached outside they saw Rish seated on his bike and Sanju behind him.

'Where are you two going?' questioned Riya

'We'll be back soon, just have to pay a visit at home' replied Sanju with a smile.

'Hey listen babes, Sanju's scooty is parked in the other parking lot, you guys get going and we'll catch you once Sanju finishes her work at home' informed Rish.

'But, I don't know this place how would I go back home' questioned a curious Arjun.

'You're currently staying in Bandra na take a left from here go straight keep going straight until you reach the bridge, continue straight then take a right at the third signal and you will be in your area and then I'm sure you would know how to go.' instructed Rish.

After a pause, he said 'Look brother we will catch up when you would probably reach the bridge so chill' Rish completed it with a smile.

Both boys shaked their hands, Rish put his helmet on clicked the gear and he took off with Sanju.

Riya looked on at their back for few seconds, she was clueless and nervous. It had been years since she came down to Mumbai to visit her parents she bit her nail in curiosity and nervousness.

'I don't know this place properly, what if we get lost' she muttered to herself.

While Arjun in muttered back slowly 'We won't get lost, mai hu na dear'

Both had spoken unconciously.

She walked towards the parking lot slowly, thinking why did they leave us alone. Arjun walked beside her silently glancing at her back and forth.

He patiently waited for her to say something just anything, but there was no reply instead Arjun slowly yet doubtfully brushed his hand with Riya's. In reply he was waiting for a stern look or just another shy smile, instead he heard Riya gasp with her eyes slightly closed and her cheeks were turning crimson red.

But soon her face changed its colours from red to pale as she heard Arjun apologizing to her.

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To Be continued...

Next Chapter Update will be tomorrow.😳

Note: I'm sorry for the fast forward storyline. As you all already know this is just V-week Special😳 So I'm hurrying a little bit. However, I'm extremely happy with the comments and positive response I received from each and every one of you😳 Please keep them coming🤗 Thank you soo much for liking it so far...

Here's the scooty that I imagine Arjun & Riya to ride on as Arjun didnt have a bike😆
If anyone wants a PM just buddy me😊
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
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Awww ... how romantic and cute 😳
Cant stop myself from smiling yaar!
Just love Ariya ... especially Arjun!
Jaldi update kar!
Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
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wow so romantic😳
it is wounderfull concept and intersting
uff ye arjun bi na baat baat pe gussa
todi se kya der ho gayi itna gussa😆
and aur to aur he wanted to be alone with her
arjun brushed his hand on riya;s but no reply on her side,
she is so nervous😳
but aisa kya hua ki present mai vo ro lagi hai😕
aur itna dard hai usse
continue soon dear
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Res!😉
EDITED**
Shruuu ji 😉
Kyaa baat hai 👏
Very Impressive...Itna diff aur interesting concept hai 👏
Loving this Ariya soo much 😳 😳
Arjun aaye haaye...itna gussa ho raha tha...he wanted to be alone wid her 😆
Riya being nervous...cutee 😛
Going to the present... Why is she crying 😲 ...
Loved the chottu kid who took away her diary 😳 ...Ye pakka aapke woh chotte friends mai ek hai na 😉 😳
Againn...Loved it...
Update sooon
Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh wat an awesome job with romance😉

Romance on my spines now😳

Feeling hurt watching riya like this😔

Amazingg scene...boy aunt arranging the pages nd d flashback!!😊...

Riya finally finally finally reaching arjun😛...

Hurdles of being in a completely unknown place😳

Hayee mere bhai ka anger😆

Seriously riya...best friends ko bhi!!..

But kyaaa romancee tha<3<3

Omg!!ye larka tujhe marvega riya😆

Haan haan mann mei laddu phutege hi na arjun ko dekke😉😉

Haha...sweat drops on being him near😳😳...

I thot for sometime...it was really you speaking😳😃

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di 🤗
Want ariya scooty 🤣
Awesum...
kya baat h..
me blushing hard
aapko koi mil gya kya hehe..
itna romantic..
happy wala valentine day di in advance hehe..
loved it..!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Hey Shru..
Firstly, thanks for the PM's.. And then sorry for being late..
I've read the Prologue and the following Chapters in one go and must say this one's perfect V'Day material.. Soft, loaded with sentiments.. 😊

I'm slightly confused between the past n present.. But will wait for u to write more..
The latest one was a treat with Arjun-Riya's nervousness and first date jitters..
Do continue soon and PM me.. Shall reply to them once I'm back..

Love,
Avantika..

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