SS:'Let Me Kiss You' Chp7A+B+Note pg40 *FinalUpdte

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Arjunians, I'm back once again but this time I've my *Fingers Crossed** with some Romance for the upcoming Romantic day i.e. Valentines week/Valentines dayI initially had planned to post it on 7th Feb a week before but I learned some of my friends wont be able to read it so I wrote a Prologue for them to read before they dedicate their time to studies😳

Do help me to complete it on Valentines day☺️
I'll stop my blabbering.. Here you go..


ShortStory
'Let Me Kiss You'☺️

Prologue

Let me kiss you...

My first kiss was when I was born

The last one when I would die...

My life in between could go over thousands of ups and downs

But one thing yet was always a hardest to achieve...

Its her one kiss...

A peck on her cheeks

Let it be the one on her nose..

All of them had to be achieved

Nothing is easy,

Getting one deserved peck,

Could be the most difficult one.

Especially when you fail to realize.

The importance of her presence,

Her love and finally her kiss.

Let me kiss you,

Was always had been a question

I hope sometime sooon I could just claim the kiss without her permission...

Even though we had been separated all this long.

Our hearts are beating, for each other all day long.

With an unconscious demand, Let me kiss you..

So, you I could finally make you mine...

So it starts and ends with a kiss, That could make someone just mine..forever😳

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Index
Prologue - Page 1(Above)
Chapter 1 - Page 8 (7th Feb)
Chapter 2 - Page 14 (8th Feb)
Chapter 3 - Page 19 (9th Feb)
Chapter 4 - Page 24 (10th Feb)
Chapter 5 - Page 29 (11th Feb) third last update
Chapter 6 - Page 35 (12th Feb) second last update
Chapter 7a + b - Page 40 (Last and final update)
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Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Yipee
1st to coment..
itna romantic trailer di
me blushing hard..
lol happy wala valentines day in adv in di...
keep rocking di
tc!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shru u are writing another ss🤗
i will be always waiting for ur work dear😳
vo bi valentines day's special update 😳
and SS ka naam pad kar to mai blush kar rahi hoo☺️
shru tumhari SS ka naam mujhe romantic laga re😳
dear kya romantic prologue hai yaar ,

"even though we had been separeted all this long.
our hearts are beating ,for each other all day long.
with an unconscious demand ,let me kiss u"

i loved this line more and more dear😳
prologue hi itna intersting and romantic hai ,
to chapter to mashalla 👏
will be waiting for chapter shru,jaldi post karna😊


Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shru...bahot hi heart touching hai...

Laga jaise arjun want kiss from riya... (its only thinking)...

Update aaj hi karo...please

Lekin mera pm pakka...samjale nahi...nahi tar majhyasi gaath aahe..
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..

this is truly as your username..

"Funckylicious"

Awesome Shru...
waiting for the valentine dose...

Kiss ka kissa😆

waiting for the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haye perfect trailor!!
ab picture bhi dikhao please...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Shru!!
Firstly thank you soo much for posting it today!! 🤗
Coming to your prologue.. It was flawless!! 😳
Kya likha hai yaar!! ☺️
Loved it!! 😳
Im sure "let me kiss you" is gonna rock!! 😉
Will read nd comment on all the chaps once Im active again! 😃
And thnx for the pm! 😊
Will miss you guys loads!! Bye.. Tc! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow
Very nice
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue :) love it
prologue is so romantic ☺️
looking forward to read it
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome.sooo romantic.plz cont soon.the starting is very good.thanks to informing me.best of luck for ur story journey.:)

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