OS: THE BREEZE REWRITES - Page 2

Originally posted by: chicksoup

When the air blows, it not just destroys, it sometimes brings together, which is supposed to be. The wind is soaring and now emotions have been ruffled between Zoya and Asad. I wish Khuda ki niyamat ho aur unke karam se ye ek doosre tak pohanch paayein.

👏 Beautifully written.🤗

Originally posted by: Rushitaa

Your username looks familiar
Believe I have read your work before and I'm no expert in constructive criticism cz I am just learning myself (to write) but lol you write very very beautifully! very descriptive! 😊
write more and pm?

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

Beautiful OS.
I loved it.