Ansh os : I love you meri pyari chudail

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys. I am a silent reader of your os/ss/ff and i appreciate the way you all write. This is my first attempt at an os. I also do not know how to write an os. Please bear with me and my errors. Comments and suggestions would be welcomed.

I LOVE YOU MERI PYARI CHUDAIL(A SHORT OS)

It's that look in your eye,
It's the smile on your face;
That makes time slip by
And I know I'm in a better place.


It's the memories of you
That make any grey sky turn blue,
And let me know these feelings I have
Are true.


Getting lost in my dreams
With the mere image of you.
It's hard to imagine it seems
A future lost, one without you
.

So I leave my arms open,
And I'll wish and may pray,
Eyes focused and eager
For your embrace just one more day
-------- Bryce Jennings

Its a hot and humid Saturday Evening. Shiv and Anandi are alone at CH. Anandi is preparing Shiv's favourite Halwa in the kitchen and he is busy in watching cricket match. Suddenly Anandi calls him in the Kitchen. Wondering what she wants he goes into the kitchen. " Are kya hua biwi. Kyun cheekh rahi ho", he says. "Accha to ab mera bulana aapko cheekhna lagta hain. Sare men ek jaise hote hain...Shaadi ke baad apni biwi cheekhti chudail lagti hain !!!" , she rambled. Shiv smiles at her rambling . She looks so cute when she is angry , he thought. Unable to resist her charm he goes near her and pulls her cheeks. She stops her rambling and pouts at him. " Arre mujhe nahin pata tha ki chudail itni cute hoti hain" , he smirks. "Aapko to har waqt mazak sujhta hain.. Cheeni khatam ho gayi hain. Bazaar se le aayiye nahin to bolenge ki chudail ne aapko halwa khane nahi diya" , she snaps. "Ok baba!!! Waise bhi chudail se panga nahi lena chahiye😉 ", he replies. Before she can say anything he goes near and kisses her on her cheek. Blushing profusely she says, " Aaj to aapne wo kaam kiya hai jo koi nahi kar sakta. Aapne chudail ko kiss kiya hain. Darr nahin lagta. Kahin Chudail ne aapko kha liya to". Laughing and pulling her into an embrace , he nuzzles her hair. " Agar aisi chudail mile to main uska shikaar karne ya uska shikaar banne ke liye bhi taiyyar hun", he says. She lifts her head and they both share a passionate eyelock... The halwa is all but forgotten.



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Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳 😳 Awww how cute!! Loved it! Awesome for a first attempt! 👏
I hope you write more soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short, sweet, and cute just like ANSH...Keep writing more...Ansh ke naam par likthe rahooo,,,,,kamiyaabii likhayi mein khud mil jaayegiii...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh... its very... short sweet, cute nd nice os... very nice start... well done..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short and sweet OS...
Edited by saviani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww it's sooo cute 😳 why dont you write more on AnSh? 😳 we would love to read 😃

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