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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

hey its an awesome update3 as usual...and yea a very happy makarsankranti to you tooo...



plzxzzupdate soon next time and there should be more long update...😈...😆


eagerly waiting to know what will happen...


thanks a lot dear... will update within one hour...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..

superb update I loved it 😳

thanks for the PM
update as soon as possible 😊


Thanks dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey all... thanks for liking part-6, here is Part-7 below:

PART-7

I just stepped ahead and hugged her tightly………… She looked shockingly at my face as well as towards the policemen…

Why? why did you do it to me?you know…. how tense I was ……. its ok, you are angry but how could you walk out? I spoke in one breath….. (Now I think, may be I was opening my heart to her on the day)……

Rk…… but…….

Sh!sh!. please don't speak anything . I forgive you for everything. now let's go……. I gave her hand to stand up…… while anger appeared on her face…….

Forgive me? for what?

Before we could talk further…..that policeman interfered…. what is this? why are you outside here at midnight? if anything wrong happens, then all blame the police and couples like you spoil our image, if there was a problem, you could solve in your room. all married couples fight but this is not thw way to walk out alone midnight…you must know this is not your city….

Madhu looked at me just to kill me with her sight…… I pleaded to her for the first time.. and I spoke in hurry…..

Yes sir, I am also saying her same. we reached late at hotel and light were off, due to which there was no hot water in the room. for which she made an issue and we had a fight…… ok, we fought but what is the idea to leave the room at midnight…….. Ok…. now leave the topic. let's go…… I held her hand (may be for the first time )

From your fight, you don't look like newly married. from how long are you together? the policeman asked…

One year, we both said collectively even without looking on each other… its one year since we are together…… (and we looked towards each other)

One year? how come? It has been one year today since we had the agreement……… but in one year, nothing changed, neither her stubbornness, nor my arrogance and not even our relation. it was still the same……….the hate relation……..

I held her hand and ask her to stand……. but as she stood……

Aaa……. she cried in pain.

I turned back…. what?

She was holding her feet. The blood in her feet was clotted due to contraction of veins because of cold….. and she was not able to move……

now what to do ? I looked at her…

You are quite young having good body, can't you pick your wife upto hotel? the policeman laughed….

I looked at her with no other option, she turned her face in anger. while I picked her up and thanks the policemen to help me……….

as we walked to our way and they went to the otherside……..

Leave me... Madhu struggled………

but you are not able to walk……

its nothing to do with you. infect its just because of you………

that's why I am here to help you……

you must be sorry for it……..

not even in your dreams………

then leave me. I will walk myself…….

ok. here you go. and I dropped her………. she gathered all her strength to move but staggered and held my arm……..

what? I spoke naughtily…

She gave me a look….

now can i? I looked with victory on her face….and picked her up when she looked at my face requesting………

on the way to hotel,

why did you tell that we are…….

what?

that we are….. couple? she spoke hesitatingly…

we had two options. either to spend night in Police station or at hotel……….. now what to choose?

she kept quite all the way…. I think she was sleeping…… in my arms…… may be because of the heat she got after too much cold…..

I put her politely on the bed without disturbing her sleep……….. looked her face and could see the effect of cold. her red nose, dried skin……(Now I think… how could she look so beautiful even then…..) I saw her feet, there was swelling…… I took my first aid kit. took balm and applied on her feet carefully without disturbing her………Oh hell! what I did? I applied medicine to my enemy. but she got hurt due to me only…….. without any other thought, I went outside the room…… in the lobby…..

Sir, you may sit here in sofa…. receptionist said…….

now what about your rules? I yelled him. and went outside in the lawn on a table………..

I could not realize , I was punishing myself……… for punishing her to stay outside……. no I didn't punish her….. she herself opted for the wrong option…. but why me now? will think later about it………. may be never…..

Next day, early morning, I called Bittuji…

Yes Chief……..

Bittuji, go in my room and wake up Madhu, shift her to your room and you may shift your baggings in my room till she gets a room….

But chief, where are you…..

I am outside in the lawn……

In such cold?

Do, what I have said……. now……. I frustrated.

After some time, I was on my bed in deep asleep……. which got disturbed again, when she came.

Good Morning……… she said..

It is good for you, not mine….. I showed attitude

I just wanted to thank you for the last night….

It could not happen if you should have agreed before….

It could not happen if you would have agreed before than before….

why do you always repeat my dialogues?

because you make me do so…… I had told you to drop the idea to bring me here…

do you have any other thing to say?

Ya, its ten AM, we have to leave for shoot at Eleven, get ready……

Who are you to order me?

I am not ordering…..

It was not a request too…….

Its your shooting, why should I request? go if you wish, otherwise…. I may go into my room…….

Finally she won as usual. I got up from bed and saw a victorious naughty smile on her face…….(sometimes I was amused, why does she smile without any reason, when she succeeds in irritating me… but truly telling, that smile makes my day)

Get my clothes ready…. I will be back within ten minutes, asked her while entering the washroom….

(Oh! I had become so dependent on her in last one year… why could not I realize the same at that time )

However, the shooting completed in time and we came back to Mumbai…..but I could feel some changes, some softness in her behavior towards me…. I could not be sure why so?


Hope you will like it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
r eally a nyc update, i'm sure madhu had noticed verything. u r giving just rk's p.o.v., that's why we don't madhu knows or not. it is a suspense ahaanmbut both have started to love each other and urs this ff is getting so many likes and comments, but i think ur previous one was better.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice post. please do me pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Thanks for sending me PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice post. please do me pm.


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

r eally a nyc update, i'm sure madhu had noticed verything. u r giving just rk's p.o.v., that's why we don't madhu knows or not. it is a suspense ahaanmbut both have started to love each other and urs this ff is getting so many likes and comments, but i think ur previous one was better.




Soon you will come to know about Madhu's pov too. but you are breaking my heart dear... i think i am working more on this FF... ok. please tell me the deficiencies... so that i may remove...i will surely try to improve in next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
no i', loving this too lol, but the previous one was more emorional and i connected more to that and i'm one of ur best readers, so i told u this. This one is also gud yaar, i don't find any mistakes in it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey really nice post and madhu becoming soft towards rk plz do continue soon...

great job👏👏

thanks for pm.

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