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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey anu(that's ur name na)...how r u? hope u r having fun...i m really sorry for this late comment...i was at home for Christmas and new year...special os from...it was really really good...i liked understanding between virman and virat's surprise...title is nice...write some more na,,,,,I'd love to read...thank u so so much for the pm and take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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***part 2***

Manvi was pacing all mad in the airport; the anticipation of the Paris trip was all that got her through the last month. Virat showed up probably for like a couple of hours in the weekends, even then his huge family surrounded him with the non-stop banter. She kept thinking about all the time she would spend with him alone, it would be like a second honeymoon. But he was nowhere to be seen now.

Everybody else had boarded. She called Virat more than ten times since she came to the airport, but his secretary answered every time, saying that Mr. Vadhera will call back when he gets out of his meeting.

"If you are not here in the next two minutes Mr. Vadhera, mere haath, makki ke maud maroge" she was punching her own palm scoffing fumes while walking up and down, her nostrils flaring red.

The flight attendants were announcing loudly "This is the last and final boarding call for Mr. and Mrs. Vadhera." Manvi looked disappointed towards the entrance 'How can you do this to me Virat, you promised'

And there she saw him come running, wearing his laptop bag sideways over his white blazer.

"Manvi? Why are you here, we are getting late, I heard them announce, let's board already." He started walking towards the flight taking her hand.

"You bloody corporate slave, I hate you, you go by yourself, I am not coming anywhere with you." She pulled her hand back.

"Manvi, it's a long flight, poori flight main aaram se mera band bajana, let's go now." He dragged her as she resisted and went in the other direction.

"Manvi?? Stop it yaar. We don't have time for this baby" he stopped and looked at her, hands on his hips. She didn't look at him. The attendants were looking at them annoyed. 'Manvi!! tum aaise nahi manoge' he lifted her and carried her over his shoulders and she kicked her legs violently. 'Put me down, now!!" she screamed. As he was entering the flight, the security stopped him "Sir, please place the lady down and move away from here right now."

"Listen buddy, she is my wife, and if I put her down, you will have to personally escort her out of the airport with ten other personnel and heavy machinery as she is going to turn this place upside down. Trust me, I am doing you a favor."

The guard smiled and let him go.

The flight was full and they were the last passengers boarding, he put her down and said "Manvi, behave, don't create a scene. The flight got delayed because of us, look how everyone is glaring at us." He dragged her to the seat and put her seat belt on. "chup raho!" he said. She folded her arms and looked away still angry and pouting as he made himself comfortable next to her.

"The flight got delayed because of you, not me Mr. Vadhera" she said stressing Mr. Vadhera with all her pent up rage, "..and can you please refresh my memory, did I get married to you or your voice mail secretary? Why the hell does she answer everytime I call my husband. I hate her, I hate you, I hate this flight, I don't want to go anywhere with you." She was getting up angrily.

He knew there was only one way to calm her down. He pressed the call button and asked the hostess for two pills of aspirin holding his head with his hand.

"Virat? Virat, What's wrong? Do you have a headache? Do you have fever? Baby, why aren't you saying anything?" she felt his temperature worried as he laid back with a deep breath enjoying her fussing over him.

"I am fine, I just have a little headache." He lied closing his eyes. Actually, he was tired, he was beyond tired. He had worked night and day to make this time free for their vacation, for her, his drama queen. They hadn't spend quality time since, god knows when and he had promised himself not to disappoint Manvi this time. He lied down quietly for five minutes and he knew, this was enough; he didn't want to worry her too much. He opened his eyes and saw her holding his hand, her eyes filling up "I am sorry Virat, you must have been struck with something. I always do this. You try to make things better and I always beat you down to it, creating so much drama."

He wiped her tears off before they even got out "Manvi, can't you have normal reactions to things? Matlab does everything have to be extreme? You don't get just angry, you get extremely angry. A little bit of headache and you get extremely concerned. What am I going to do with you? Huh?" he smiled.

"Hum ho hi itne special. Har cheez zyada karne ka maan karta hain." She sniffed.

"Hmmm.." he put his hand over her shoulder and kissed her forehead. "Well, I am all yours for the next two weeks. Tum ko jo karna hai woh kar sakti ho" he winked at her. Why don't we start with an extreme kiss? He leaned closer to her

She looked down blushing and he pulled her face forward holding her chin and gently kissed her lips. She lightly pushed him away; they were in a flight for god's sake. He came back stronger. She coyly opened her eyes to look at him and her eyes fell on his little guy who was watching them with interest from the seats in the middle. "Virat!!!" she pushed him away harder. He looked at her complaining and she signaled him towards the little intruder of privacy.

Virat looked at him and laid back in his seat. He turned towards the boy, who was still staring at both of them. "Kya dekh rahe ho beta?" Virat asked him.

"Uncle, can I sit near the window?" he asked. "You guys are not looking at the view or clouds anyways." He made an observation.

Virat laughed as Manvi blushed and looked away.

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>>>Part 3

Note: Ok, I got a lot of requests to continue this. Honestly, I didn't have a story line or characters in mind when I wrote the first part. But, here I am trying to draw out lines. I know it is a bit short, let me know if you like it. will continue it only if you guys find it interesting.

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey anu...u decided to continue it...thank u dearie...comparatively short update...but it was sweet...manvi's extreme anger scene,virat and guard conversation was funny...hey what's the story line anu...u must be know na...thoda leak kardo mujhe(just kidding)...naughty virat is always a treat to read...i liked that part...virat's drama and manvi's concern...good update...update next part soon...thanks for the pm and take care...


it is interesting...and i liked it...if u want to continue i would love to read...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab Update...! its was hilarious reading maanvi's drama she waited for him n when he arrived she wasnt ready to go with him...n he having option left picked her up and his reply to the airport staff cracked me..🤣🤣🤣...Lovly Anu👍🏼!

And Virat exactly knws how to shut her up...everything to the extreme even their Romance...Thnks for the PM!
P.S: i knew u would update but i though i would b two feets😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok..since I am not 100% sure which direction to take this, some of my more creative readers can suggest something..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nice update...
Specially virats convo wid guard while he carrys manvi to board the flight... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow loved it.pls continue tis soon.it was awesome.virman are always awesome.but little boy spoiled the moment😆THANKS FOR THE PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
please continue soon.liked a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
oh thanku that u cntinue it n keep doing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg u cntnued. Thnx a lot for dis nd it was jst awsum. Cntnu wit nxt part soon.

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