Virman-OS-Precious time-part 3

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: yaminnthida
Wow...wow..great os..really really great..speachless..it was soo good..love the romance..loved it to the core.. 😊

thanks buddy😊😊

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Amazing OS dear👍🏼.. Its very romantic😳.. Totally loved it.. Beautifully written👏.. the concept is really good.. usual problem of any married couple.. both are right at their places.. Maanvi is longing for her husband's attention and Virat is busy at work.. I loved the way you described their emotions.. If possible please continue with this one.. I would love to read more.. Thank you so much for the pm..😊

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 13 years ago

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wow... that was something that i really loved and have actually read sumthing like this after a long time...

thank u soo much...

if u think of coninuing it, pls pm me...

and thanks for the previous pm as well...

this os was beautifully written dear...

first there was anger, then disappointment, then roothna manana, then love, romance, then paris surprise...

basically it was truly virmanish...

keep writing stuff like this...

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Loved it.awesome.SO cute.Wen u take someone for granted , then finally u can expect this reaction. That affair, monk dialogues cracked me up😆😆😆.Sweet and cute.Please continue. Thanks for the pm.