Virman-OS-Precious time-part 3

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

omggg

that was so hot and passionate

i loved

can u continue and the add the paris part of it...pplzzz

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Loved if to the core
Was an awesome OS
Sorry for the late comment
And thanks for the pm

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bluebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Amazing OS dear👍🏼.. Its very romantic😳.. Totally loved it.. Beautifully written👏.. the concept is really good.. usual problem of any married couple.. both are right at their places.. Maanvi is longing for her husband's attention and Virat is busy at work.. I loved the way you described their emotions.. If possible please continue with this one.. I would love to read more.. Thank you so much for the pm..😊

Thank you so much..🤗your comments make me smile like an idiot :)

Writing about virman is like going to a happy place for me..yes will continue it when I get the right inspiration..I like Manvi as the silly, crazily in love wife sometimes lol..will keepya posted..thanks again hon :):):)

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bluebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: naina927
wow... that was something that i really loved and have actually read sumthing like this after a long time...
thank u soo much...

if u think of coninuing it, pls pm me...

and thanks for the previous pm as well...

this os was beautifully written dear...

first there was anger, then disappointment, then roothna manana, then love, romance, then paris surprise...

basically it was truly virmanish...

keep writing stuff like this...

hain na, hain na:):) thanks a ton for the lovely comments🤗

this is the virman in my dreamland 😊😊😊 just perfect, so precious :)

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bluebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Sweet Os... 😊

thanks buddy😊

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bluebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: preetipc
Loved it.awesome.SO cute.Wen u take someone for granted , then finally u can expect this reaction. That affair, monk dialogues cracked me up😆😆😆.Sweet and cute.Please continue. Thanks for the pm.

haha..😃

thanks preeti, sorry I keep missing your scraps..always love to hear your sweet feedback.

take care, stay safe 🤗