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hey guys here i am with my sissy jo ki har kaam ko late kar deti hey like me my llovely sissy cookie at last bohat din wait karney k baad j concept likh rhey hey hope u all like this os ...humney thora alag stor bnanaey ki try ki hey
please is baar to like nd comment
ohk abhi first read it bohat ho gyi meri bak bak
here u go


" no m not a gud person i make ur life hell ...meri wja sey tumharey sarey dreams toot gye ..just because of me tumhey dukh sey bchatey bcaht

y maney khud hi andherey mai dakhel diya ..m not worthy of ur love m sorry ...maney schoa tha jo kuj maney sha tumhey wo nahi sehna prega

but main hi tumharey dukh ka karan ban gyi ... maney tumhari hasi ...kwahishey sab ka glha ghot diya ..bhagwaan b mujey kabhi maaf nahi kre

gey ho skey to mujey maaf kar lena ..nd i a blink she was on flor ...she shot her self ""



no ... ..she wake up with jolt...she look aroun found her self leaning on front of her car banot ..
she touch her head a cleand those beads of sweats ...
again she think about her life nd her thouts disturbed by acall
hello who is it ...ohk m coming ...in 15 min
in office cabing three peoples r sitting in fron of an officer
officer : realax kuj nahi hoga ... nd jo officer hum log appoint kar rhey hey she is the best ...
pearson1 : i hope so we don't want any thing happen to our childs ...
pearson2 : yes our childrens r our life ...
officer : i can understand she is coming ..
may i come in sir
"jai hind sir " she stat her senior officer ...
officer : jai hind ..
kriya ; u call me sir ..
officer : yes have a seat ...

kriya : is there any new case ...whil taking a seat ...
officer : yes meet them there childrens life in dangour nd u have to save them ...here is file ...after three there children getting married so have

to save them .. so they get married safely...nd other iformation is in this file ...
kriya : ok sir i'll take nothing gonna happen to there childer i promise ..i thinki leave noe baceuse i have to study these case ...nd gentelman do

b tensed nothing gonna happrn
officer : i believe that's why i appoint u ...
" jai hind sir"...while taking leave from office ...
offiecer : now relax she will tak care of everything ...
preson3 : we hope so...
hey left frm der nd went to their homes
at hme
man- *phew* - i guess ab humei chinta karne ki zarurat nai hai
man2- yes MR.singhania i think so nd woh log bhi keh rahe the that she is the best kbhi koi case adhura nai raha hai...nd koi criminal uski nazron se bach nai sakta
nd if they trust her so mch den kch toh baat hogi na usme...
Mr. Singhania- yes mr shikhavat, ur rite . i guess we hav done the right thing

boy- dad wat rite u hav done..wat r u guys tlking about..

Mr.singhania- my dear boys we hav appointed an officer who is gonna handle our case

boys- an officer...

boy1- bt dad y we don't any one we can take care of ourselves

boy2 - yes uncle he is rite we don't need any1

Mr. singhania- rey swayum we can't risk ur lives ok


Mr. singhania- rey swayum we can't risk ur lives ok
we noe u cn tke care of urselves bt still..we don't want any problems further so hav
appointed one ok nd no sayin no about it
Mr. shikavat - yes boys nd da officer we have appointed is the best
she is brilliant at her work nd uska koi bhi target aaj tak chuta nai hai
recently new york se aayi hai...
swayum nd rey- "SHE"..??
rey - dad dnt tell me shes a girl ok
Mr.singhania - yes rey , y do hav some problem...?
rey- no dad, i mean wil she be able to handle dis all ??
Mr.Shikavat- yes rey, we hav appointed da best officer nd woh isse bhi tough
situations ko handle kar chuki hai...
other hand kriya sitting in her cabin reading her new case file nd sipping coffee same time two boys enter in her cabin ..
boy1 : hey cheef new case
kriya : yes boys new case nd intresting b
boy2 : i know interesting or dangerous hey tabhi to apko means hamari team ko appoint kiya gya hey
kriya : right four peoples unki shaadi hey or same time unki life dangor mey hey ... who's the enemy koi nahi janta ... eact target kon hey

charoo mey sey hamey wo b nahi pta
voice : means its gonna tough like always
kriya turn her chair nd look at girl gave a sweet smil : yes my dear ...sia its gonna b tough
shaadi hey to bohat log hongey to enmey ko find karna tough hoga
sia : ha j case baki sab cases sey tabhi alag hey na to real target ka pta hey or na hi real enmey ka bu the way ritvik nd arjun tu dono ko koi

kaam bola th maney
arjun : sia maney bola tha ritvik ko kaam karney ritvik tuney kiya nhi kya
sia look at ritvik
ritvik : wo main bhool gya
sia ; what the hell yaar
kriya : guys focus hamey ajj rat sey hi apna work start karna hey or like all case i want ki is baar b is case k khatam honey tak koi garbar na ho

so lets go
trio: but where
kriya : don't tell me guys ki mujey btaney ki jroorat hey off course jinka case hey unkey ghar nd here is case file i want ki tum log wha

pohanchney sey pehley is case ko read kar loo ...nd no fight
they four leave toward their destination ..
in singhania mension
rey : dad app ko kya abhi b lagta hey ki wo girl officer handel kar ley gi
rey's dad : i believe uska record dekhney k baad mujey poora bharosa hey ki wo handel kar ley gi
swayam : but wo hey kha
swayam's dad : meri baat hui thi wo a rhi he apni team k saath to relax
gautam : ha or hum khud us officer sey miley hey she is nice so tum log apni shaadi ki rasmey kro or is barey mey mat scoho
rey's dad : girls kha hey
swaya : ati hi hongi
gautam : acha hey wo b officer sey mil lengi
sharon nd taani enter
sharon ; dad kya hua phir sey un logo ki call ayi kya
gautam : nahi beta wo hum logo ney is case k liye new officer ko appoint kiya hey to wo a rhi hey to i want ki tum sab us sey mil lo
taani : ki hey
rey : ha she is a girl officer
sharon : dad wo handel kar ley gi
rey's dad : hum log in dono ko b bol rhey they ab tum logo ko b bol rhey hey she is the best officer so relax
sharon : ok dad
same time door bell ring
servent open the door
sarveent : g ap kon
team enter in house
arjun : MR singhaniya ko bulyegey unhey kahiye ki SPECIAL TASK TEAM AYI hey
seavent : ok
searvnt : sir wo kuj log kya bol rhey they SPECIAL TASK kuj esa
rey's dad : ja unhey bhej do
the trio cum forward nd greet them...
Arjun- hello Mr. singhania nd mr. shikhavat m arjun..nd we r gonna handle ur case under our leader kasey...
Mr.singhania- hello guys nyc to meet u
pls hav a seat nd btw whr's ur leader ..uum..
Ritvik- kasey sir kasey..
Mr. singhania- aaahh...kasey nyc nme whrs she...??
Sia- she's on her way sir ,actually sir achanak ek criminal prison todkar bhaag gaya so she went after him, actually he was a physco murderer

so he had to be caught asap or else city mein halla mach jata...
nd catching in such a short period nly kasey can do it...u noe...
she said proudly with a big smile or a smirk...
suddenly arjun's phone beeps , seeing the caller id he smiles nd says guys i guess a gud news cumin in our way excusez- moi..
Rey- i see jaise aap uski tarif kar rahe hai waise toh lagta she must be the best but kasey is she indian..?? i
i mean i hav heard shes frm new york soo
ritvik- dude kasey is the nme given to her to hide her identity
as we r nt allowed to reveal our identities nd kasey is an indian actually 4 years back
she left for new york nd now shes back with a bang
u noe she is the best
swayum- ok dude btw whats her real nme.?? if u dnt mind me askin u
rey and swayum were asking questions to them because they felt like dey knew this kasey
they had sum kinds of strings attached to her ...bt cnt understnd it ...
ritvik- dude u r frnds now y wil we mind ...her nme is kr...
b4 he culd complete arjun entered with a wide grin
Arjun- guys gud news here kasey ne usse pakad liya actually encountered
him...and dat too alone
she alone fought with them...
Sia nd ritvik- "THEM"??
Sia - arjun the murderer was alone na..den..?
arjun- arey sia dis all was the gangs plan.
so kasey had to fyt with the whole gang...nd no wonder..no one beat her ...at last
trio- shes one nd only tigress KASEY...
swayum- woohh..congrats guys.
Sharon- must say yaar ur leader seems to be very daring huh...
i mean itne dangerous criminal k saaath fyt nd dat too alone..msut say ...very daring...
Taani- han bhabhi sahi kaha aapne, main hoti toh rona chalu kardiya hota nd akele fyt na baba
Rey- hhmm...must say guyss ab toh milna hi padega aapki tigress kasey se..
Arjun- uum...u will hav to wait fr sumtym as she is in hospital...
Sia (panicking)- hospital??? arjun- is she ok...?? kya hua y is she in hospital...
Arjun- calm down siya usse actually fyt karte waqt haath par zara si chot aayi hai nd issliye usse paas k hospital mei le gaye kyunki usse zyada bleeding ho gayi toh culd'nt tke her till the office
sia nd rithvik sighs in relief
sia- thnk god mai toh dar hi gayi thi ...
arjun- chill guys...
ritvik - dude hw can we chill u noe na jab bhi woh koi case handle karti hai den uske liye the matters all nt even her life nd during da encounters u noe hw is she woh kbhi yeh nai dekhti dat is she ggona die or get hurt kuch bhi o jaaye her aim is to catch the alloted person

sia- he is rite...i mean woh kbhi apne baare mein sochti hi nahi...i mean maana duty is our first priority nd usse criminal se nafrat hai bt
doesnt mean ki khudko aise danger mei daale...

swayum- wwoohh...kaafi dedicated nd daring lagti hai tumhari tigress
Taani- arey aap ne hi toh abhi kaha hai ki woh apne dushman ko nai chodti nd on1 can beat her so y do u get worried soo much i mean to say woh itni skilled hai , itne cases handle kar chuki hai daring hai soo i asked dnt tke me wrong..
Sia- wrry hum uske liye worry kyu na karen...u noe usse death ka toh dar hi nai hai jabse uski mom ki death hui hai she has become stone heartened nd sumtym uski harkaton ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai dat she wants to die, u
noe mujhe yeh ladki kabhi samaj nai aati nd itne saalon mei itne close ho gaye hai ki we cnt afford loosing her..u noe she's our backbone...

Sharon- guys i think u luv her a lot...issliye har choti baat par itna pareshaan ho jaate ho...
Ritvik - pyaar toh karte hai hai hum use u noe jo usne haamare liye kiya hai woh toh koi apna bhi nai a karen nd she luvs us tooo...
sudenly der was a screching sound of a bike frm outside
Arjun- guys here she cumes...
here outside a girl sitting on a bike enters da gate nd stops with a screeching sound
she parks her bike aside removes helmet nd turns nd head frm left to right , her hair sticking on her face nd neck making her look sexy with her



oh -so sexy black short nd a black jacket...givin her a bold touch...with black dark heels reaching below her knee...she got down nd headed
towards the entrance...inside all were waiting fr her nd chit- chatting suddenly *BAMMM*...
the door got open with a thud sound and here enters da mst sexiest officer ever.;) evrybdy had open- mouths seing her,
evn the servants (chuckle)
she came near evrybdy nd saw them starring at her like...umm...owls...
grl- watt..?? kbhi ladki nai dekhi hai kya..?? y u starring like owls? am i lookin like an alien..? aahh.. chuck off the topic nd get to the point...btw lets start with the introduction as i hav gt ur infos in the case file i wuld like to introduce myself..i am
Kriya Ghai, but my team call me kasey nd hope u do it too ...
*to the team*
guys did u collect the info i asked u'll to colect i guess its a NO...TRUE...
Trio- true...
Sia- srry kasey, woh actually pehle intro k chakkar mei den phir tumhare encounter ki khabar aayi nd tumhari chot OMG.kasey tumhari chot hws it ..???
she pulled her sleeve up nd saw a bandage around her elbow..she glared at her...nd kriya gave her idiotic grin...bt soon came back nd said
kriya- ok guys no problem do ur work nd gimme in the office , Mr.singhania nd Mr.shekavat u need'nt worry..we wil do our best nd now i may
take ur leave now
Mr singhania- ok my dear , All the best fr the case
to which she smiled at them
kriya *to the team*
guys collect the info asap nd gimme at hme coz commando mujhe iss chot k saath office k paas hi aane nai denge u noe hw he is soo do it
fast nd gimme nd left
after kriya leave
special team collect all info that they neede n left after they lef
left
4 peoples r in hell shock
they don't know what going on exactly
so they without uttering any thing go toward there respectiver room (jor ka jhatka heye joro sey lga (rofl))
rey's pvo
m completly blank right now kya khoo kya scoho samaz nahi a rha do din baad meri shaadi he or jha mera past merey samnet hey wo b ek

naye ha andaaz mey ...or samriti dead kriya to dancer ban na chahti thi to officer what the hell kuj samaz nahi a rha esa lag rha tha ko ek nyi

kriya ko dekh rha hoo jo mujey nahi janti or main usey nahi or uskey behave sey to jahi lagta tha ki jesey wo hamey janti hi nahi ...kya kroo kha

jao ... meri jindagi kha pohanch gyi hey
swayam's pvo
mujey jakeen nahi ho rha ki i saw my besti per j kriya meri us besti sey bilkul alag hey ..wo jo itni nnocent thi baat baat pey dar jati thi wo ajj kisi

cheez sey nahi darti marney sey b nahi ... pta nahi kya horha hey ..doosri tarf rey k dimaag mey kya chal rha hey i know main kiska saath doo ek

taraf meri behan hey doosri tarf meri best ...
other hand special team discussig about case ...
kriya : j info to kuj b nahi hey means is sey kuj b pta nahi chalta we need more info
u r right in sab cheezo sey kuj clear nai hota ki un k enemy ka real motiv kya hey
: ritvik : ha main b wahi scoh rha tha
sia : guys i think tum logo ney ek baa notice nahi ki
: arjun : kya
sia : in charo k parents bohat rich hey or soon in ki shaadi ho rhi hey to matlab in ki familyes bussiness partner to hey hi ab rishtedaar b ho

ban jayegey to jo inkey rivels hey unhey bohat nuksaan hoga like contracts jo doosro ko miltey they ab nahi milegey u know
kriya : right matlab business rivels kar saktey hey ok guys hamey is waqt un k ghar k ass pass hi rehna hoga ta ki kuj ho na or kisi ko pta nahi
chlana chihye is bare main

whole night special team roaming around singhania meansion

ok guys thak gyi baki ka last part jis mey hoga bohat sara action wo kal raat ko post kregey
lve u all
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love u COOKIE nd AROMA devil sissys


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Chapter 2

special team whole night roaming around singhania mension ... but gud thing is that nothing happen to any one next morning around 7 am rey wake up nd turn curtains if his room one side nd he saw some one sitting on car banot ifront of main gate ... rey thought that its some one related from enemy ...so he rushd toward main gate
rey walk slowly ...caming from back side he did'nt notice that the person sitting on car banot is a girl (u know who is it ...)... rey about to hit that person when that person caught his wrist nd twist it very badely
rey shout in pain but that person is really fast he held his wrist nd push his head on car banot ...
rey : ahhh leave me why u want to kill me
but suddenly he felt that person left him
person : m not here ti kill m here to save u MR reyaansh singhani
rey : i thought some one here to kill us nd why r u sleeping at car banot wo b in this early morning ...while checking marks on his wist
mean time trio also come there
arjun : what happen kasey??
kasey : nothing he thought m killer because m sleeping on car banot infront of main gate ...but what's my fault ...last whol night we r awake ...just because of ur protection (while looking another side whole time kriya looking idhar udhar )
sia : as u know kasey kal injured ho gyi thi to she need rest so that why she's sleping ..
rey : ha i mean wo bol sakti thi na ...or mera matlab kya jroorat thi inhey is haalat mey duty deney ki...
kasey : m fine kuj nahi hua agar itni c chot sey darney lagi to kuj nhi kar paugi or is sey bari chotey lagti hey so u go nd relax ...
after that rey leave nd MR Singhani enter
MR singhania : hello guys maney suna ki app log poori raat duty dey rhey they jha
kasey : yes u r right becasue we promise u ki hum kuj nahi honey degey apkey bacho ko so we r doing our duty
MR S : i know but app log b to merey bacho ki trha ho chalo thori rest kar lo or fresh ho k breakfast kar lo ...
arjun : no we r on duty sir ...
ritvik : jab tak case solve nahi kar letey rest kha ...
MR Singhania : common i know u all r really dedicated toward ur work but energy b to chahiye na so come in don't b like this
kasey : ok we r coming ...app chaliye
MR S : ok m waiting ...and he leaves
kasey : guys like kuj log kal maney jha ass pass dekhey to i think wo log aaj attack zarror kregey becasue ...kal shaadi hey so ...we have to b alert ...
sia : u r right kyu ki aaj wo log shopping k liye b jayegey wo kal bol rhey they to its gonna tough nd hum log best hey hum dekh legey
kasey - ok then chalo fresh ho jatey hey
nd they enter in singhania mansion
soon sia, arjun and ritvik freshened up and we present in the hall
Mrs singhania- good morning bacho... i heard u were petroling the whole night here, must u guys are very dedicated and kasey inspite of her injury she's doing her duty, must say btw woh hai kahan..?
sia- actually mam...
mrs singhania- dnt be formal dear call me aunty...
sia- ok mam...i mean aunty woh she's just gettin her wound bandaged and we noe dat she won't let us cum near her nd help..she does'nt like any1 seeing her in pain...
Mrs singhania- bt hw will she manage..? waiit I'll send sum1 to help
she was just about to call her female servant sia stopped her
Sia- no aunty pls warna yahan par tuffan aa jayega.she does'nt allow any1 to cum near her wound, usse doctor k paas bhi zabardasti le jaana padta hai, aur agr hum uske paas bhi chale gaye..den *she gav a scary exprssion nodding a head in a dramatic way* woh insaan ko bas universe ji hi bachaye and usne humei strict warnings di hai ki hum uski help k liye na aaye wen we asked about it
Mrs singania- ok if u say so
here kriya in her sitting and trying to bandage her hand with gr8 difficulty,sum1 saw this, he entered the room, kriya's back was facing him so to grab her attention he cleared his throat, she without facing started shouting
Kriya- Wht the f**k man sia maine bola tha na, i don't need any help *while stuggling with the bandage* y da hell don't u listen to me
now i dnt need any f***ing help of urs (she turned around to close da door bt stood rooted to the place as saw she sum1 else and nt sia
kriya- uum...m srry i thought it was sia
guy- no problem, umm..do u need help??
pointing towards her bandage
kriya- no no thnk u i can do it myself she said agn struggling with her bandage
guy- i dnt think so..let me help u...
he took the hold of her hand and started bandaging her hand bt she swept it off and said-
kriya- pls Mr.Swayum, u need'nt be so kind to me , i can do it myself ok
(hehehe kya socha tha bacha log rey tha..:P)
swayum- ohh...cum on kriya, u cn't even apply the medicine properly and u say u can do it...
Kriya- kasey...
Swayam- wat..?
Kriya- its kasey u shuld be callin me kasey Mr.swayum
Swayum- *sighs* nd u shuld be callin me swayum only and now let me help u as i noe u wn't be able to do it by ur self
he took kriya's hand and started bandaging her hand...while kriya was lookin everywhere except him
While bandaging swayum asked kriya
swayum- u've changed a lott i mean look at u wen u were in coll nd now everything has changed even ur behaviour evrything...
Kriya- change...hhmm...gives a sarcastc chuckle and says u noe wat swayum When we are no longer able to change a situation - we are challenged to change ourselves.
swayum gav her a confused expression to which she just smiled said a thank u nd left...
here swayum was in deep thought about wat kriya thought, his phone beeped
he picked up the call
"yaa rey m cumin down "
rey had calld him asking him to cum down fr breakfast
soo he too left frm der nd went to the dinning area
here everyone were gathered around the dining area waitng fr swayum and kriya
soon swayum came and greeted evry1
after sumtym kriya entered the dining area...
she came near the dining hall and greeted them, rey, taani nd sharon were shocked seeing that too in such a dress.


kriya and evrbdy settled down and started having their breakfasts
she saw dem starring at her ignored them totally...rey was feelin sumwat hurt nd he didnt knew why..? swayum wanted to tlk to her about everything but due to her ignorance he culd'nt
while eating evrybdy were chit- chatting except fr kriya and rey
while kriya was busy engrossed in her meal here rey was busy thinking about the changed kriya
sia's voice diverted evrybody's attention
Sia- so guys wats today plan..?
sharon- we r going fr shopping today
taani- bt m scared bhabhi, i mean aisa haalaton mei hamara jaana bahar thik rahega kya..?
rey- *squeezed her which was on the table nd said* chill taani kch nai hoga... kriya saw that bt showed as if she didn't cared
ritvik - guys chill jab hum saath den y worry ...???
kriya- ritvik itna over- cinfidence acha nai hai nd here we can't say anything ok
Arjun- she's rite guys so guys we hav to cum with u'll for the shopping if u dnt mind
swayum- no dude y wuld we..?
Kriya- even u guys mind i dnt care'.tum logon ki safety ki zimmedaari humari hai, nd I dnt back off frm my work becoz of any1's discomfort
sayin so left frm there
Sia- srry guys bt woh aisi hi hai..cn't do anything about it
Mr.singhania- no sia u need'nt be sorry, she 's rite in her own way
soon everybody finshed their breakfast and left for their rooms as they have to leave fr shopping
soon they all leave toward there destination
the journey is completely silent no one dare to talk after kriya say those words
while driving rey keep looking at kriya this make kriya uncomfortable
kriya try her best nd keep lookinh infront
at last they reach at mall
they all about to enter in mall when kriya stop them
kasey : wait a min ...
taani : what happend ?...
kasey : ritvik nd sia go with them don't leave hem alone if u sense ki some thing's wrong den call us me nd arjun r here
ritvik : ok kasey
they all leave in different directions
arjun : kya hua kasey hum jha kya kregey
kasey : arjun m feeling like kuj garabar hey
arjun : matlab ...
kasey : jab sey hum singhania mension sey nikley hey some one following us
arjun : what r u sure ...to un logo ko ...
kasey : no unhey shopping karney do sia or ritvik ko message kar k bol do ki alert rhey bas un logo ko kuj nahi pta chalna chahiye
arjun : ok
arjun text both ritvik nd sia ...
after reading text ritvik nd sia chceck their guns ...
rey : feels strange ...guys what happen tum log itney alert kyu ho gye kuj hua kya
sia : ha wo ..
ritvik : kuj nahi kasey ney bola alert rehney ko so just tenion mat lo nd shop
rey : ok ...
everyone doing shoping ...
other hand kasey nd arjun roaming in different direction
while roaming kriya bump into some one one
kriya ; sorry maney dekha nahi ..
kriya notice that guy try to hide some thing nd he just walked away ...
kriya : strange i saw this guy some where but wait what is he doing here kyu if m right agey to girls trail area hey ...o freak this is the guy who following us nd wait a min girls to jahi hey na ..oh no ...
kriya call sia : sia tell me where is sharon nd taani ... kha hey jaldi bolo ...
sia : whatt happen
while talking kriya start running ..
kriya try run fast as she can
now sia also tensed : m kriya wo log to trial area mey hey ...
kriya : bol tha na unkey saath rehney
kriya almost shout at sia ..
sia : hua kya ...
kriya : that killer going toward trail room nd m sure jha poori gang hey ritvik ko apney saath lo or check around m calling arjun or main trail area mey ja rhi hoo go for it guys
kriya then call arjun ...other hand rey saw kriya runnin very fast towards trail room ...so rey also follow kriya
other hand trio seperate in different directions
krya take out her revolver nd take sopport of wall ...then take deep breath ...then kriya slowly open trail room areas door with her right foot nd enter in ...
no one there kriya check whole trail area she found taani on floor nd sharon no where in scene
kriya : oh freak kriya try to wake taani mean time rey also enter
rey : taani what happen to her kriya where is sharon
kriya : take her nd i have no ans present time ...
rey : what do u mean no answer..?
kriya :chup just go ...
as soon as they about to come from trail area some one shoot at them
kriya shout move back ...nd here real fight start
kriya : call arjun
kriya ; guys they attack nd sharon un k pass hey usey kuj nahi hona chhiye main jha sambhal loogi just find sharon wo kha hey ...call end
kriya wait for min ...as soon as goon about to enter in room kriya shot him nd that goon dead kriya : move ...just follow me ok ...
then kriya's cell beep
*text*
arjun: they r in caffe area ...
kriya : tum dono jhi rho don't go any where samjhe ...
rey : no m coming with u
kriya : MR Reyaansh stop behaving like a kid ...just stay with ur fiance
but rey is rey other hand taani still in shock ...
kriya : fine come with me but mind u agar beech mey parey to MR reyaansh singhania
rey : ok
kriya nd rey procced toward caffe ...
in caffe fight going on ...
first arjun giving cover to other
when kriya enter kriya indicate arjun to divert there mind
arjun understand
rey watching this all from outside
other hand one goon held sharon's wrist tight nd sharon crying very badely'.
other hand swayam on floor ...behosh hho gya bechara ...
kriya look around ..nd think some thing then she got something
kriya enter in caffe throung kitchen gate ...
no one notice it because of counter
so its easy for kriya ...
then kriya start crawling in that way ki kisi ko pta na chaley kriya take out her revolver nd hit on that goon nd he fell down kriya pull sharon back then real figt start as soon as sharon run from there one goon cought kriya
nd one mre goon rum toward kriya with knife kriya jump in air nd that knife hit other goon nd he fell down
then kriya shot that goon ...
other hand sia beating a goon when other goon hit some thing on head ...
there is other goon enter who about to shot sia
kriya run toward sia
kriya placed hand on table a jump in air
nd before shell fell she shot at goon nd he fell on floor other hand sia alsi fell down
out side rey really very tensed becasue kriya's wound start bleeding very badly
but she just fighting
rey shivering very badely
kriya indicate ritvik to take sia out of caffe
now kriya nd arjun left
then kriya spot swayam laying on floor unconcius ...same time she notice
goons trape them now real fight bugun
kriya's nd arjun's back facing to each other ...in a mooment arjunt pic kriya in air nd kriya hit that goons they all fell on ground
kriya nd arjun take out there revolver nd
they start shooting after lot of struggle all goones on floor
arjun : not bad ha
kasey : ha but on mstake ...
: arjun : kya ...
kasey : in mey sey to ek ko jinda rkna tha na pta to calta is k pishey kon hey
arjun : koi nahi j sab safe hey bohat hey ...
kriya : right arjun swayam ko
arjun take swayam with him
other hand kriya ki bohat bleeding ho gyi after every one leave rey rum toward kriya nd hug her tight ...
kriya just said one word : ta...
rey : kriya kriya
nd he saw that she fainted
rey wear a white t shirt now its looking like red ...
rey pick kriya in his arms nd teras flowing from his eyess ...
at last all reach at home ...
Mr. Singhani : what happen tum sab itney darey kyu hoo
same time rey enter holding kriya in his handes
MRS singhania : kya hua kriya ko
rey take kriya to his room
while this swayam told whole incident
MR singhani thanks guys for saving our child nd doctor ko call kro ...
MRS singhania : wakya hi kasey bohat achi hey she did a lott
other hand rey crying whil holding kriya's hand nd calling her asking her to wake up
hey guys srry culd'nt post it at nite
well yeh 2nd part than d 3rd part cumng up soon
and we want atleast 60 likes coz we send mre 200 pms
we will updte nly after 60 likes

luv devils AROMA nd COOKIE




Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res
unres
finally u updated...😛 ta--- ka shaadi😡

kria inn baccho ka bodyguard hai,,,😆😆😆

kria kitna hot lagthi hogi uss dress main uski frnds kitna tareefing...👏

rey ko jatka laga hoga...😆😆😆

kria sleepin on bonnet n rey ko laga vo kohi aur hai😆😆😆kria rey ka wrist twist ki🤣

kria dishoom dishoom😲👍🏼

tani griund pe thi...aur kya karegi vo😡😡😡

to be continued😉😉😉
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Res..unres..awesum update...tani n rey..no way..aisa nhi ho skta..hila kriya opsie kasey so bold n strong,a tough officer 😲 great job...kriya toh aisa lagta hai ekdum pathar dil ho gyi hai...no baatcutter..no cute pouts 😭 n short dress mei kriya ko dkh kar sab shock 😆 Me too..bt she'll luk hot n sexy..swayam bandaging kriya,sachi mei jhatka laga..i thought it'll be rey..'call me kasey' firse jhatka..itni boldness..superb...i just luv the fight scene..kya fight ki kriya ne mindblowing..dishum dishum...bt behosh bi ho gyi.. 😭 vo bi rey ki bahon mei.. 😆 bahon ke darmiyan do pyar mil rhe hai 😆 bt ..i'm really tensed aage kya hoga.. 😭 Plz..plz update last part soon plz..both the parts were jst wow..n unique concept...n length dat was double wow.. 😆 ..Thnx for the pm n sory for being update n plz update soon..eagerly waiting..
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res till morn Don
lovly update
baki kriya officer
hell shock😆😆😆
update soon
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
res!!

m 4th 👏👏

sab 1st hone ki khushi mante hai maine 5th aane ki

neeraj 😡😡

tune meri jaga leli 😛😆


~~~unresed~~~
tym for my lamba comment...ahem...ahem...


okay ...umm...i read the half part yest...and half part today...n trust kal ki raat maine kaise nikali hai sif muje pata hai

and tarey W*F!! dude! 😡😡

aaj pelhi baar maine kise pe bomb fodugi! 😎

so b ready kause maine kasey si bhi zyaada cunning hun ! n mere ko toh chot bhit nahi lagti {😆🤣}


next tym length thoda chota...1 chap ka do part karo...

Edited by sweety-reylover - 12 years ago
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#7
interesting concept... update res of the chapter soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
res..
unres..
kriya aur officer!!!😲
kriya is soo dedicated to her works..👍🏼
d fight was really tough one...😉
kriya fainted...noo.
rey carried her to his room... awwiie..😳
update d next part soon..
Edited by cool_star14 - 12 years ago
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#9
Mind blowing start
loved it
plz jaldi update karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
cookie and aroma...faadu tha yaar...

p.s :loong comment chaiye toh lohri k baad milega

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