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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing yar to good
Kriyansh love bonding
And rey ka such
Update fasta
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aro... Cokkie... Fab work guys !
All the parts were awesome !
Jaldi jaldi update karo next part... Curious to know what happens next !
Update jallldddiii ! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...

finally idiot ne taani ko bola to that he loves kria...

rey ko slap😲

acha hi hua ek aur mil jaye toh maza aajaye...😆

kya swayam ne...😲

kyu??😲

taani k heart breaking k liye ya phir itna late realise karne k liye????😆

jiske liye bhi ho muje toh maza aaya...😆

take ur time n waiting for next part...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chapter..
Kriyaansh's romance was just Wow!
Bt what happened? Swayam slapped Rey!! This is so not cool..
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys we are here with the last update, yes last one, will miss this as this is the first time i have tried my hand on sumthing like this.
Thank you so much for your likes and comments, it means a lot to us.

chapter 5

swayum- WTH !!!!! rey tum aisa last moment par kaise kar sakte ho...?did u ever think tumhare aise karne se taani par kya bitegi...ab tak tum ready the taani se shaadi karne k liye ab kya hua...?achanak se tumhare dil mei kriya k liye pyaar kahan se aa gya??
itne din toh tumne usse yaad tak nai kiya...? aur ab jab woh wapas aa gayi hai u luv her and taani wat about her..?
rey- bt swayum mai sirf kriya se pyaar karta hu, mai yeh shaadi sirf mom dad k liye kar raha tha, kyunki woh chahte the ki mai settle ho jau, i never loved taani, mai sirf usse apni achi dost maanta hu
taani- dost..? aur itne din humare beech mei woh sab kya tha rey?
rey- taani, mai maanta hu k mai tumhari taraf attracted tha but maine sirf kriya se pyaar hai..bas woh pyaar ko maine kahi dabaa diya tha, but ab bas aur nahi, nai reh sakta mai kriya k bina
taani- rey tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho? tumne toh meri zindagi barbaad kardi , ab mera kya hoga..rey atleast mera nai toh mere bhai, mere parents k baare mei socho
swayum- rey maine tumse yeh umeed nahi ki thi..and he left from there with taani
Rey was standing there expressionless, he did not know what to do, he fell on his knees and was crying hard ,this all was heard by 2 persons. Kriya one side and rey's dad on the other...
as soon as swayum left, rey's dad entered the room and kept a hand on his shoulder, rey immediately hugged him and was continuously chanting"I love kriya dad"

dad:
Reyansh look at me, yeh sab kya hai rey?what is all this nonsense, hw can u back-out now, rey saari arrangements ho gayi hai, sab log aa gaye and agr tum ab back out karoge toh humari reputation ka kya hoga? what will pal think about us and humari company u noe is baat se kitna loss hoga?look rey tum taani se shaadi karoge and thats final ok, mai apni reputation ko koi daag nai lagne dunga and tumne socha bhi isse taani aur uski family par kya asar hoga? did u think about swayum? He's your friend infact your best friend rey cum on now get ready and come down ok
and he left from there...
rey was just crying and crying after wat he heard from his dad, he could not believe the his own dad did not support him,at that time kriya entered there and saw rey crying
p.s kriya ne sab sun liya tha
she kept her hand rey's shoulder rey jerked up and saw it was kriya, he hugged her tightly by waist and was continuously saying "I love u kriya, mai tumhare bina nai reh sakta", here kriya was also crying silently but she had to do this...she cupped rey's face, wiped his tears
kriya- rey we are not meant to be...do u get that.
tum abhi jaoge and u will marry taani...hum ek dusre k liye nahi bane rey...we r not meant to be
rey- nahi, mai aisa kch nai karungi kriya, i love u and only u
kriya- rey if u ever loved me den tum meri baat manoge, tum taani se shaadi karoge...tumhe humare pyaar kasam
rey- pls kriya asia mat karo, pls mujhse aisa promise mat lo
mai mar jaunga tumhare bina, maana maine galati ki hai, tum jo sazaa dogi mai woh maanungi, bt pls yeh nahi hoga mujhse pls...
rey hugged kriya as his life depends on it...
rey- i love u kriya and cried harder
kriya- i love u too rey
slowly they broke the hug and were staring at each other, slowly kriya came forward and took his lips in hers and was sucking his upper lip...rey too joined and they were kissing each other passionately, maybe for the last time. They broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen...
kriya- rey pls for me, pls taani se shaadi and ran away from there...here rey was crying too hard
after sumtym rey straightened himself and said to himself
rey- mai yeh shaadi karunga sirf tumhare liye kriya, but pyaar woh toh maine sirf tumse kiya hai aur karta rahunga..
everyone standing in hall around mandap waiting for bride other hand special team looking here and there ...rey all ready take his seat on mandap ... he plaster fake smile on his face ...trying hard to hide his tear ...other hand kriya ... also standing there looking everywhere but not towards rey
kriya : arjun i think mujey upar ek baar check karna chiye ...u take care here nd i'll b back
arjun : ok ...
while walking kriya hear some voices ...
kriya thought "yaha kon ho sakta hey ?"kriya try to see but its not visible only back showing
"yeh log kon hey?"
person : all set 5 min mei rey ko goli mar di jayegi ...
thats it kriya went blank, so rey is the target ...
as soon as kriya entered in room nobody was there
kriya call arjun and run towards the mandap ...that person was about to shoot kriya, when kriya push him and he fell down ... all guest start running here and there, and because of that the shooter escape from there and again start targetting Kriya. In the mean time taani also present there ...arjun saw that shooter is going to shoot kriya ...so arjun shout ""kasey watch out" as soon as kriya turn, the shooter shoot kriya ...everybody went numb ...but kriya bend down at last moment a bullet hit the vase placed near side by table ..
now other goons also enter ... raghav and sia both trapped by them ...
only arjun and kriya ...fighting with them ...
kriya "where is raghav and sia 'while fighting with goon
arjun "i don't know "arjun shot back ...
here one goon runs toward rey holding rod in his hand , kriya run towards rey and push him nd due to the sudden force both fell on ground rey's gone completely blank present time, kriya turn back ..and shoot the goons ...still in laying position rey held kriya's waist ...both start llhh ...there llhh broke when arjun again shout "KASEY CAREFUL" ...one another goon about to hit her but this time rey role while holding kriya and that goon fell down ...then kriya shoot those goons also ...
then kriya stand up and help rey to stand ...
kriya : arjun find raghav and sia ...
arjun about to leave when raghav and sia enter ...
kriya : kaha the tum dono?
sia : wo hum logo ko in logo ne trape kar liya tha
after that special team start fighting ,during the fight, kriya's injury again starts bleeding , but she is just fighting with goons here all goons on floor after lot of mehnat ...
arjun : mujhe samajh nahi aya ki akhir kon hey jo inko marna chhta hey ...
kriya : kyu ki wo insaan inhi mey sey ek hey ...
all : what ??/
rey's dad: app kya bol rhi hey ?
kriya : while looking toward that person khud bologi ki main batau ...
swayam : r u mad kriya she is my sis or wo kyu marna chahegi humei?
kriya : not tum log its only rey
all : what ?
kriya : app khud batayengi yaa mai batau?...
kriya held taani's hand tight ...
"don't u dare come near her" one more voice came all look towards main gate ...
swayum : shivam *shocked+confused*
shivam : ha main don't u dare to touch taani other wise Rey's gonna be dead ...
all look towards Rey
kriya : himmat b mat karna .
shivam : mujhe challenge mat karo and leave taani ...kriya leave taani taani run toward shivam and hug him tight both laugh hard
shivam : what u think ki main tum logo ko itni easily chod dooga kabhi nahi tum logo ney meri itni insult ki and what u think ki tum log zinda bachoge? kabhi nahi
swayam : taani tumney aisa kyu kiya?
taani : oh please u know life main status bohat zaroori hota hey har kisi ko paisa chahiye and rey to itney rich hey and i love shivam what u think ki main rey sey shaadi karungi because i love him not at all ...i love shivam ... mujhe rey ki property chahiye thi thats it but yeh kriya har waqt beech mei aa jaati hey rey ko bachane k liye, poor baby itna pyaar jo karti hai rey sey ab bhughto ..taani about to shoot kriya when arjun shot taani directly on her head and taani dies on the spot
shivam : taani wake up taani please ... how dare u?
anger completely visible in shivam's eye
swayam break down on his place. shivam point his gun toward rey and shoot him ... he fell on his knees not because he was hit by bullet because he holding kriya in his arms ... that bullet was about to hit rey when kriya come in front of him and the bullet passed through her chest but before falling down kriya shoot shivam and he was shot dead,rey was holding kriya in his arms and was continuosly cryin and patting her cheeks askin her to wake up ,soon everybody gathered around kriya..swayum's dad called da cops and asked them to clear the bodies and went to handle the case . Here, rey picked kriya in his arms and rushed to his car and drove as fast as possible and reached hospital. He rushed inside and was calling out for the doctor, soon the ward boys came and took kriya to OT.Rey was also entering when swayum caught a hold of him and stopped him from going...
rey- swayum leave me kriya ko meri zarurat,pls let me go
swayum- rey stop, let them go ,tum chahte ho na kriya thik ho jaaye, humamre paas wapas aa jaaye..toh unhe le jaane do pls
rey hugged him tight and cried harder
rey- swayum, meri kriya ko kch nai hoga na,woh thik toh ho jayega..pls bolo na swayum
swayum- haa rey woh thik ho jayegi , humari kriya ko kch nai hoga...

a girl running faster as she following last ray of shine ,she just kept running, tears flowing from her eyes ,her hairs completley messed up and she wore a simple churidaar suit but present time just keep running ,she also not have dupatta on and behind her one another girl following her she is also in same conditon ,as soon as that girl reach at reception shout for her sister's room no. other girl held her hand tightly and both run toward ICU. While running that girl hit dash into some one but present time ...she's only thinking about one thing that is her sister the girl behind her can't bear her this condition ,so she say sorry to that person and help that girl to walk till iCU "hows she?" as soon as she saw doctor coming out all look toward at that girl..."who r u?" the doctor questioned. M her sister ridhima ...oh m sorry..said the doctor disappointedly'"kya hua usse? doctor please boliye " rey jump from his place and start pleading to the doctor
"The doctor sighs and says "she is alive but".,"but what? " other girl asked "goli unke theek heart k upar lagi thi goli to nikal di but she is in coma" what"' rey shout "no this is not gonna happen'..."sorry we tried our best but now it depends on her ki wo kab hosh mei ayegi kya pataa abhi hosh mey a jaye yaa phir ek maheen ek saal yaa phir poori jindagi wo hosh mei na aye "doctor made his point and walked away helplessly ...
kriya ridhima cry out "vishakha kriya" and cries more harder " vishakha try to handle ridhima but she breaks down
rey run toward ICU and saw kriya she was in bandages with different types of beeping machines around her , Rey could not bare seeing HIS kriya is such a state, lying lifeless there, this was not his kriya, his kriya was joyful, always blabbering one , getting hyper at little things, he ran to her and started shaking her, aasking her to wake up, "kriya, wake up pls baby pls wake up for me, u can't do this to me, pls uth jao" he kissed her fohead, cheeks and all over herface"I can.t see u like this, pls baby, pls..i love u a lott, pls wake up" but all his efforts were in vain, kriya was lying there there like a lifeless body
"why always my sister why god why?" ridhima let out her pain .why did she leave us? Out of the blue, swayam spoke for first time ,gathering courage vishakha narrates the whole story.
WHAT!!!!!! Came a voice from the end of room, it was Rey, he heard it al wen vishakha was narrating the story to others and swayum, he was on his knees crying harder and Sharon was trying to console swayum, but she was too in tears. They were left with guilt for not trusting the person who almost sacrificed her life for them and here they were cursing her for the sudden departure.
They could not believe their lives had takes such a ruthless turn that there's no going back now, they will have to face it
THE END
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-love devils AROMA & COOKIE

Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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ok guys here is the end of this work 🤔
i hope u all enjoy our (me and cookie my sisy) work ...m really very happy after reading ur comment ...we really work hard ...next time we will b back with some another work...some thing new so keep waiting for that ...from now m off for one month as my board exam gonna start from 1march ...gonna miss u all ..miss me guys ...take care luv u all...bhool mat jana mujey🤔
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

loved it
plss epilogue update karoo
Edited by anjali22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey update
Kitna time ho gaya hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey need epiloge plz
show atleast that kriya came out of coma
and that kriyaansh are togrther
but loved the update a lot

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