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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheesh: Am I dumb or Am i dumb? Why did I not get C of your comment?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh please girl, as if I can't see that proud smile on your face!
Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

So a strange sort of coincidence occurred yesterday. The sort that makes you pause for a minute and just marvel at its strangeness while thinking corny, life-affirming things.

Basically, there is a place that I have been wishing to visit for a while now and it is a place that I had always planned to mention in this story - soon, in fact. And as it turns out, suddenly (seriously, it was very out of the blue) I have been given the opportunity to go there myself. Now, I don't believe in signs, per se, but if I were to, I would take this as a good one for the story 😊
That does mean that I will be away for a while - roughly three weeks - and that this next chapter will be the last until then. Hopefully, I shall see you all on the other end, fresh and inspired to begin a new phase in the lives of these crazy kids.
Till then :)
(God, my notes always sound so corny!)
(Also, Mariam is the one to thank for me updating before I leave. Talking to her motivated me a lot :) )
Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hours of silence. Just her alone, at the mercy of the thoughts she was to carry close to herself for the rest of her life. It was both an exciting and terrifying prospect.

Sometimes all we say that we need to be left alone but at the end we crave for a company, although we won't acknowledge it. The worst enemy anyone could have is oneself, filled with thoughts that could choke us, make us want to run away from everyone and our self.
The driver's concern had me surprised, since we have a narrow minded impression about Drivers of an alien city in general, and it was a punch in the gut.

Would everything else she touched crumble away before her eyes too?


That was a line which left me emotionally charged. At times of distress, don't we see the whole world through a tinted glass? Where everything we find is a shade darker?

Her eyes widened as she became aware of a creeping sense of foreboding within her.


I believe in gut feelings, I could hence understand her fear and nervousness but I hope the sense of foreboding she received would only give her life an unexpected albeit beautiful turn :)

PS: Me first!😆
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
And the taxi driver's concern reminded me that not all are scheming evils around us... Good souls still exist!

Man is a social animal. Even the extreme introvert people crave company at times. Especially at times of distress and when they're emotionally vulnerable, their thoughts divert towards the negative, just like Geet thought of the loneliness in her life and she believed it will remain with her forever! And at such times, the gut feeling and the instincts are often pointing towards something, in the eyes of the sufferer, that is. Something as simple as losing a coat button can become a trigger of anger towards oneself, just like it happened with Geet.

Okay, just ignore whatever I said in this comment because it's making no sense, even to me! 😆
Thank you, Z! For the PM. And I'm glad I could be of service! 😃
Have fun at your trip and all the best for your exams! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
One of very beautifully written chapters in this wonderful story..Let me tell you few lines that i totally looovvveeeddd...
the refreshing breeze she had loved so many times before took its form this time in a teasing chill...
Even Nature is not saved from our conflicting emotions and mood swings..Have you ever tried to make shapes in clouds..I have tried it alot of times and believe me shapes that are formed completely depends on my mood..I would see a smiling face in clouds when i am happy ..I would see a crocodile opening its mouth,when i am angry..and no experience with sadness as there are very few times when i get sad..usually i am found happy or angry...!!!Enough of my blabbering..😕
An intimate gathering of strangers...
Take a bow from my side for this line. Intimate +strangers=perfect oxymoron...

Would everything else she touched crumble away before her eyes too?
How beautifully you portrayed geet's emotional state just by using mundane accident of loosing a blazer button...

Wonderful chapter.!!!!
Ps-no comments for geet's forebonding ..😆


Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh tearing of button also became symbolic for Geet...it happens sometimes dull, mundane or trivial things looks like its foretelling something😊
Btw loved this bengali knowing Geet...read many MG ffs but nowhere Geet knew bengali
Nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
And this must be what Vidya Balan felt like when she got off the plane in Kahaani... 😛. I loved that movie!

Amun tomoke bolo boshi (did i get that right?? 😆)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Hours of silence. Just her alone, at the mercy of the thoughts she was to carry close to herself for the rest of her life. It was both an exciting and terrifying prospect.

Sometimes all we say that we need to be left alone but at the end we crave for a company, although we won't acknowledge it. The worst enemy anyone could have is oneself, filled with thoughts that could choke us, make us want to run away from everyone and our self.
The driver's concern had me surprised, since we have a narrow minded impression about Drivers of an alien city in general, and it was a punch in the gut.

Would everything else she touched crumble away before her eyes too?


That was a line which left me emotionally charged. At times of distress, don't we see the whole world through a tinted glass? Where everything we find is a shade darker?

Her eyes widened as she became aware of a creeping sense of foreboding within her.


I believe in gut feelings, I could hence understand her fear and nervousness but I hope the sense of foreboding she received would only give her life an unexpected albeit beautiful turn :)

PS: Me first!😆

I bow down to the wisdom of your words. I admit that even when I shout to be left alone, I end up feeling that the only marham for the loneliness is company. But not just anyone. I always feel like the person who can save me from it is not here yet. And how can you call out for help to someone who doesn't exist?
I claim to not entirely believe in signs but write about them and gut feelings as if they're true. Liar, liar, Zarin... It's always a battle between fact and faith. The gut feeling usually always wins.
Has anyone seen Talaash yet? I saw it last night and the state of the couple - not the situation, just the way they are - reminded me of Geet and Maan. There was a very short shot in particular which I thought was exactly like how I feel our pair is/was feeling.

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