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Posted: 12 years ago
Shika, I'm a Hrithik lover too! Never mind his nose! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I do like his eyes, especially in Agneepath...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Stop it! Humph. Oh please I know about his nose. Reminds me of bows and arrows. Rofl. But have you watched him in Jodha Akbar? Have you? And you're still alive? Oh man I died after watching the movie. I love him for the very movie. Swoons.

yes shikha..
i remember him from jodha akbar...He was very convincing as akbar...His urdu pronunciation and flow killed me..
believe me,after watching the movie me and my bestie had decided that we would talk ,walk like "jodha" {with ada and softness" } so we could find one "jahan panah" for ourselves😆But plan failed quite miserably..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Welcome back zarin...🤗..

After 15 chapters,Finally I am little "adapted" to your writing style,because this time I could guess that the "She" at the starting of chapter is "Heer"...that too before maan called heer by her name..😆

You're going to have to hold on to that intuition. It seems that I can never seedhe shabdo mein say who it is 😆



So maan is searching for her now...Well I was expecting Geet would have told him about her darjeeling trip...Remember these lines from chapter 13..
"She stood in the elevator and pressed the dial button once again.

She wasn't running away and she wasn't leaving him. She was, however, choosing herself. And she needed him to know that."

I thought,Geet had dialled Maan's number here...Anyways,I am glad she had not told him..His "search" kind of conveyed what he actually feels for his wife,after his useless and rude denial of " presence of Love" between them...!!!! Love is still there...

Oh she dialed all right but did it go through? ;)

However,I am confused why he was throwing pebbles at Heer's window???He could have pressed the doorbell and ask her little politely or mannerly..Well their "Interaction" from the window clearly told about their "little less likeness" towards each other...and this line brought a silly grin on my face...

Yeah, they're clearly not each other's biggest fans. But would you be a fan of Maan if you were Heer aka Geet's close friend? I know I'd be biased against him.

"Not a rat but a bas***d of a different variety..."😆😆So Bas***ds have varieties too...🤣I was expecting Heer to tell him geet's whereabouts at last but she chose to talk about more important matter.."Hair cut"...😛Why did she ask him to get a haircut???I am sure his dishevelled appearance had affected her little and she was not letting herself accept that this man{who belongs to a certain variety of bas***ds} could miss his wife..."

😆 As Shika said, free advice. Lena hai toh le lo. And if everything comes in a variety these days, then why not bas***ds too, right? (This is going to spur off its own OS, I can just feel it...Shopping for Bas***ds...😆)

No comments for our sleeping passenger...

I have no idea why the bus got two punctures and why GOD{zarin basically} is making her stay at this cottage..I am sure God has some big plans for her...Hope she would have great time with cracked budhiya and love sick puppies and lappy guy...😆

Waiting for more from you in 2013...

ps-1)just like mariam,i was also wondering what heer was writing on window surface..i think our mayonnaise has guessed it right..Was it "PAPA"???

2)Tracing a water droplet in the corner with her eyes, she watched as it too slid down into the smallpool the other droplets had created. A pity, she thought.

A tight hug to you for this line🤗...It feel "blessed" to get to read such a beauty of words..You are awesome zarin...👏!!!You are going to get alot of breath chocking hugs from me in 2013 too..so be ready...😉

Happy 2013...🥳

Thank you, thank you, thank you 🤗 All tight hugs reciprocated for being awesome and a quintessential part in driving the story forward. And our resident Gyaan Guru, of course 😉




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Hey Z, tell me something, does that cool dude busy with his laptop handsome?😆
Ignore my silly ramblings but it's just that I am curious. Bus break down, cottage, irritatingly romantic dumb head of a couple, very chilled out old woman, and a *ahem* stranger. Wooh, sounds damned interesting. Let me go fetch some popcorn.😆
Don't mind me I am in one of those moods. You know Heer intrigues me. The way she's shows she faced a lot in life, and a small intuition it has her father involved was gnawing my mind.
Something stuck me weird by the way. In one of the previous update, where these are the closing lines.

She wasn't running away and she wasn't leaving him. She was, however, choosing herself. And she needed him to know that.

If she really had let him know, he wouldn't have been standing outside Heer's apartment and would've got a free advice of hair cut now. Is it?🤣

Yes, I loved the hair cut line, so much so that I wanted to give a hug to Heer. Heer definitely is a person who wouldn't disclose anything she isn't supposed to, even if she's breathing her last, and so I was surprised when he called him back, only to have a good laugh later.

Maan, be a man, go behind her Dammit!

Ah, some painfully romantic ghost might have possessed me!😆



He would do well to follow her advice. There's sexily rugged and then there's unkempt and raggedy 😆 Glad Heer's strength of character and loyalty has come across. She doesn't strike me as someone who would turn back on her word.

Lol, I can't promise to satisfy the romantic bhootni in you but I may be able to confirm a few moments of sweet torture 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ zarin...
"Gyan guru"...😲..???
You are embarrassing me now..😆It would be better if you stay away from "crap gyan" of this guru...🤢This chela{pupil} had learned alot from you{especially in terms of "writing"} and wonderful discussions happened on this thread..
Very eager to get more gyan from you in 2013 too..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Acha chalo, gyan guru na sahi, you're definitely our Science Guru! But for the record, I have yet to meet one person on this thread who is not a gyani of some sort!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kharbooza kharbooze se rang pakarta hai Zarin. You're the biggest gyani here who's attracting us lesser mortals! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol Mayonnaise! Mera gyan toh bas luck by chance hai but thank you all the same 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am I wrong for thinking that Heer has a soft corner for Maan... whether it's just friendly or something more, we shall have to see...

Geet tries to escape temporarily but alas, she carries everything with her - her past and present. She's not one of those people who can shake everything off, no matter how hard she tries.

Happy New Year barfi lover 😉 and yes, London's fireworks did kick ass!

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