SS kriyaansh tani kriyam swaron krisha part 13 pg71(10/28)

smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys..i am writing another SS..n yeah my other ss kriyaansh swaron (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3329469/ss-kriyaansh-swaron-important-check-pg112-09-2)i will continue for sure..this SS i am specially writing becoz i did not like the 2days epi i mean where rey accepts his feelings for tani silently..bcoz i thot rey was madly in love with kriya bt he forgot her so easily n so soon..i am not against abt tani'scharacterin the serial but what i am not liking is rey moved on so easily n they did not show much on rey missing kriya also when she left..Tarey fans plz dnt take me wrongly..its just my POV..n i liked tani as acharacter, her acting, herinnocenceeverything..So my ss starts from rehearsal hall scene..everything is same as in original story till this point i mean - avp's challenge, swayams personal reason for not teaching the gang basketball, expressing it to rey, gang trying themselves to learn bb, sharon in delhi wid her father n avoiding swayam, n rey's tension abt the challenge..

Trailer😉of my ss:

Rey kisses tani slowly on her forehead, then move to eyes n then slowly goes near her lips to kiss her.. taniwhispers"i love u rey" closing her eyes..completely surrendering herself to rey..rey also was involvedcompletely, eyes closed nwhispersback "i love u too ...KRIYA..i love u a lot "

so guys liked my SS concept..??😕..if not u guys can tell me to stop..i promise i wont continue..

Part 1 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3348310/ss-kriyaansh-tani-kriyam-swaron-krisha-part-13-pg71-10-28?pn=4
Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3348310/ss-kriyaansh-tani-kriyam-swaron-krisha-part-13-pg71-10-28?pn=7

Part 3 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3348310/ss-kriyaansh-tani-kriyam-swaron-krisha-part-13-pg71-10-28?pn=9

Part 4 :
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3348310&TPN=13&#74078750

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76691632

Part 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77269510

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78073938

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79401486

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81079834

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Edited by smileysmi - 11 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

concept bit confusing... update res soon...

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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

exactly my point...hw cn rey frgt kriya ...so soon
awsum concpt dear...:)
update asap...nd.plz do pm me

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww rey loves kria...exactly hw cn he forget her...

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arshafever

@arshafever

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome concept..!! thats what i m thinking.. how can rey forget kriya so easily..?? do continuee.. n kriyaansh ko mila dena plsss 😳 update asap.. thnks 4 pm..!!

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Oye Hoye😛

super awesome👏 can't wait 4 it😳 plz update soon

n thanx 4 da pm😉

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Omg.. I love u too kriya.. I love u a lot..
I always wantd to hear it from Reyaansh's mouth.. Buh 😭

N My que is same.. How he forgot hr so easily..

Ummm.. Excited to c whts nxt 😃
Update soon !!!