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Posted: 12 years ago
It was A-mazinggg 😃

Reyam's dreams wer actually horrible !
N dat convo btwn dem.. I lovd it.. :)
Tani is much more smarter in ur ss whch m liking !
Looks lik tani n Armaan wud get into commitment.. Jus a wild guess 😆 😛

Alas,Kriya is thr in front of evryone..

Again,Reyam's reaction wer awesomely written !

My my Kriya hugged Reyaansh.. Woaaahhh 😃

Buh wea is Sharon?? Oh abi toh she's in Delhi.. Hopin to c more n more of Krisha!
Lookin frward to d nxt update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

It was A-mazinggg 😃

Reyam's dreams wer actually horrible !
N dat convo btwn dem.. I lovd it.. :)
Tani is much more smarter in ur ss whch m liking !
Looks lik tani n Armaan wud get into commitment.. Jus a wild guess 😆 😛

Alas,Kriya is thr in front of evryone..

Again,Reyam's reaction wer awesomely written !

My my Kriya hugged Reyaansh.. Woaaahhh 😃

Buh wea is Sharon?? Oh abi toh she's in Delhi.. Hopin to c more n more of Krisha!
Lookin frward to d nxt update :)



Thank u pihu ..
Thanks a lot dear...
Yes tani z positive character in this ss...
N plzzz pihu koi wild guesses mat kia karo...future story ke lie kuch tho suspense bachne do 😉
Haan sh ki entry abhi baki hai iss story main..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unresd on page 24 and 32. .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi



Thank u pihu ..
Thanks a lot dear...
Yes tani z positive character in this ss...
N plzzz pihu koi wild guesses mat kia karo...future story ke lie kuch tho suspense bachne do 😉
Haan sh ki entry abhi baki hai iss story main..


mummy. . . .please smi,
armaan and taani. . .no. . . .a big no. . .pls. .mai tere haath jodti hu,if u r planning to make them 2gethr toh pls drop dis idea . . , .i love armaan. . .m like his craziest fan. . .and agar tune undono . . .no pls. . .aisa mat kerna . .werna i wnt read dis ss. . .mai apne armaan avi kisi bi airi-gairi gal ke saath nai dekh sakti. . .pls aisa mat kario. .pls. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing...
finally kria is in front of gang...
reyam phone convo was awesome...
loved it esp last part...
thnx for pm...
update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari


mummy. . . .please smi,
armaan and taani. . .no. . . .a big no. . .pls. .mai tere haath jodti hu,if u r planning to make them 2gethr toh pls drop dis idea . . , .i love armaan. . .m like his craziest fan. . .and agar tune undono . . .no pls. . .aisa mat kerna . .werna i wnt read dis ss. . .mai apne armaan avi kisi bi airi-gairi gal ke saath nai dekh sakti. . .pls aisa mat kario. .pls. .

ppllzz no armaan n tanni i cnt c dm 2gther nt atleast dm ppllzzz dnt make dm a couple if r thnking plllzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: grungta11


ppllzz no armaan n tanni i cnt c dm 2gther nt atleast dm ppllzzz dnt make dm a couple if r thnking plllzzz



Guys I knew it...
Muje laga tha koi na koi jarur object karega tani n armaan as a couple idea ko...but agar kisi ko prob nahi hota then main jaroor undono ko couple banati...but thank god atleast aap dono tho iss idea ke against bola...
Wo kya hai na even I am ksg ke bahot badi fan hoon. But u c story mein tani ko kisi na kisi ke sath tho pair up karna hai tho I was just thinking...but dont worry ab aisa nahi karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
precap:

Sw : (shouts) has rahi ho?? Maja araha hai tumhe hum dono ko aise dekh kar?? Bata kar...(wipes his tears) bata kar nahi ja sakti thi akhir hua kya tha tumhare life mein??

Rey : laughs (though he was crying) kisse puch rahe ho sw?? Ye tho the gr8 kriya gai hai...jisse sirf logo ki prob solve karna pata hai...logo ki kaise Sath de jab they needed ye pucho...batayegi wo ...khud ki kabhi batayi hai jo ab bolegi...??
Hummesha se aadat hai uski apne feelings, apne dard aur apne probs chupane ka...nahi batayegi wo... puch bhi...

kr hugs him tightly...she was weak already...she could not bear reyams pain n tears...



Part 8:

rey was shocked...for few secs he couldn't understand kr's sudden reaction...he could feel her sobbing against his chest...slowly kr moves her hands from rays back to his chest n holds his shirt in fists..it was then rey too hugs her tightly..he puts his chin on her shoulder n closes his eyes tightly..tears were flowing slowly from his eyes now..all had tears in their eyes..after a min ,

sw : kriya...rey chod usse...I need to talk to her..(with a serious tone..he doesn't wants to ruin kriyansh's this precious moment but talking to kr was also important for him...he had so many questions to ask her)

by listening to sw's stern voice, kr clutches rey's shirt more tightly digging her face almost inside his shirt..reys shirt's one more button opens because of kr's this action..rey senses her fear n sudden stiffness of her body against him..

rey : sw plz...give her some time...

sw : ye tu keh raha hai rey? usne hug kya kiya tu bilkul party badal lia?

rey : plz wo darr rahi hai sw.. try to understand...plz

sw: darr rahi hai? mujse? shakes his head laughingly wiping tears- ryt kr mujse darr rahi hai..okay cool ...main kuch nahi bol raha ab.saying this he turns the other way putting his hands on his waist..

kr slowly free herself from rey n looks at sw..he was standing facing his back to kriyansh..kr slowly goes n stands next to sw avoiding looking at him..sw senses this but he too doesnt look at her..after a min of pause,

sw : q gayi thi suddenly college chod kar? Mumbai chod kar?

Kr : mom ko mere dance ke bare mein aur mere aur rey ke bare mein pata chal gaya tha...

Sw : tho ? Uske lie directly city chod kar jana pada?? Aunty tumhe dance karne se rok sakte the...rey ko leke restrictions dal sakte the...aise sab chod kar(he was unable to complete his sentence...)

Kr: sab kuch kardia tha unhone..dance ban...rey aur mere rishte pe ban...

Sw : tho fir aur kya chahie tha unhe?

Rey : 1 min .. ( turning kr...making her face him) ye sab kab hua tha?now sw too turns towards rey...the gang also come near them...

Kr unable to answer him..she starts looking down..she felt guilty...continuously wiping her tears to stop them from back of her hands..seeing kr's condition, armaan comes n puts his hand on kr's shoulder..

Armaan : don't stop urself today..I am with u...tell them everything...they have the right to know each and everything..

Kr : looks at him n shakes her head slowly indicating yes..

Kr : mom ko sab kuch foot loose elims ke previous day pata chal gaya tha...

Rey : that's why...that's why u were avoiding me during elims...(pauses for few secs) and...and that was the reason u said me all those things on pre Valentine's evening...(he was unable to digest the truth...more than truth it was kr's condition at that moment which was hurting him more...she was standing there looking down...wiping her tears continuously..totally shaken) he wipes his tears ...goes n cups her face...makes her to face him then says - baatcutter look at me... her eyes were shut tightly n she was crying...

Rey : (again wipes his tears with one hand quickly) kr plz ...meri taraf dekho...open ur eyes...plzzz

For which kr just shakes his head slowly saying no...she was crying badly...she was becoming weak by every passing mins...this was the limit...till then the whole gang has saw her as a fighter , as a leader n as champion...they never imagined kr as a helpless person like the way she was standing infront of them at that moment..they all had tears in their eyes...

Sw puts his hand on her head n caresses slowly...she opens her eyes immediately n hugs him...sw too hugs her back..after a min sw slowly free himself n holds her both hands

S w : kr plz...wipes his tears with one hand n then wipes kr's tears...- plz kr aaj nahi..dekho main ya rey, ya fir koi bhi for that matter, tumpe gussa nahi the...haan initially gussa the because kisi ko bhi kuch bhi bina bataye aise achanak se chale gaye the...par we understood ki tumhari jarur koi majboori rahi hogi iske piche...n last kafi dino se I was worried about u..dont know y..kuch ajeeb se sapne aarahe the..I thought sirf main hi pareshan hoon tumhe lekar but today I got to know ki the same thing happening with ray also...tho jab aaj tumhe yahan dekha suddenly tho bas hummare andar ka wo darr n pain aise gusse mein bahar nikla...it was not ur fault kr..we are not at all angry with u...n sry(holding his ears) really sorry for my outburst...maaf kardo..

Kr was crying badly..she just shakes her head indicating dont ask sorry..

Sw : plz kr batado jo bhi hua tha tab...we both were worried like hell last couple of months...aaj rey ne tho ye bhi kaha tha ki iss bb match ke baad wo dehradun jayega tumhe doondne...

Kr immediately looks at rey who just shakes his head saying yes...

Sw :plz...

Kr couldn't not hold back the truth...she tells everything to them..how her mom came to know about her dance n about her relationship with rey...how she locked kr in a room..then next day the condition she put. on kr for letting her to perform in foot loose elims...the way she took kr with her to deharadoon..

All were having tears in their eyes after listening kr's story...specially the weakling team was more hurt because kr had to sacrifice everything for their sake...

Kr was expecting some reaction from reyam...but they were unable to react..they never thought because of them only kr had to sacrifice her dance n her dream city..

It was neha who went n hugged kr tightly crying badly...soon bh n amar join them...after few secs Vicky join the hug...he too was crying...soon simmi nil rinni too joined the hug...they were crushing kr between them...kr was weak...she started feeling suffocating..armaan observes this.

Armaan:goes n literally pull every one from the hug n shouts - chodo usse...guys hug aise karte hai kya ki banda suffocating feel kare...she z already weak don't trouble her..

All feel ashamed n say sorry looking down..but kr was observing reyam only...who were hugging each other n crying...consoling each other..slowly kr starts smiling looking at reyam...she goes near them n says - universe ji kaise logo ko mere life mein bheja hai aapne...khud hi aapas mein hug kie ja rahe hai..muje tho bhav bhi nahi de rahe hai..reyam smiles at her ...

Sw : chal chal jalli..tumhe hug wug kuch nahi milne wala

Rey : aur nahi tho kya...itna rulaya hume..

Kr : makes sad face - bhaad mein jaao aap dono...main armaan ke paas hi teek hoon...saying this she hugs arman's arm...for which armaan kisses her on her head..

Rey : ye arman kaun hai..I mean tum kaise jante ho isse..? N btw y r u hugging him? Come here...

Both arman n kr laugh at reys possessive behavior...

Arm: chill man..she z just like my sister...we both share brother sister relationship since childhood...

Rey feels embarrassed n says sorry...

Arm : thatz ok...ye lo tumhare pvt property (saying this he pushes kr near rey)..bahot paka chuki hai muje ...ab tum sambhalo isse..

Sw : ek min...kr par tum ab achanak se wapas Mumbai mein..? I mean kab se? N aunty maan gaye ...?


Kr becomes serious again..she did not have the guts to answer this question now...she was finding difficult to reply...

The voice comes " I will tell u guys"

Done

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Posted: 12 years ago
who is the new voice in the end... is it taani or some one else... pl clear it...
above the chapter full on emotional ...😭😭😭😭😭😭... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cliffhanger oar kyun chodaa?????
amazing updte
very touchy and emotional
luvd it
updte soon

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