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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Congo can see sum new readers on ur all posts👏


Yeah even I am happy for that... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Yeah even I am happy for that... 😊



Chalo den good luck..it whud take sumtime but now wid dese few..u whud found many more wid every single new person😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yupieee Page 50!!!

My UPDATE NOW!! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...I am updating the next part...and thank you all for lovely comments and also liking my ss...this update I would like to dedicate it to zona(zona_malik)...thanks dear for taking my ss to 50th page...this is for you...


precap : Next thing she remembered was when she opened her eyes she was in hospital bed...set of medical equipments making their beep beep sounds in silent room...she didn't know after how many hours or dayd, she gained her consciousness n opened her eyes...or how she reached hospital bed...she didn't have the answers for all these questions...she slowly scanned the room n there she finds her mom standing in a corner n crying...smriti observes kr looking at her...she takes a step towards kr but kr immediately shuts her eyes n turns her face the other side...n due to major head injury, her head starts to pain...all doctors again starts their work ...shouting on sisters to bring medicines n injections fast...the silent room again becomes the operation theatre n dr sends smriti outside the room...

Flashback ends...


Part 10:

All had tears in their eyes...rey and swayam understood the meaning of their nightmares now...

Sharon : kriya was in coma for almost a week...during that time only armaan came to visit his parents...armaan and kriya are neighbours in deharadun...since childhood they shared a special bonding...armaan stays in London since 4 years...he Is a medical student...final year...so he understood the situation and stayed back taking care of kriya...he was the one who arranged some psychiatric tests on kriya when she recovered from coma...and psychiatric drs said she needs to go out of this whole situation and be independent...let her do whatever she wants to...so armaan convinced mom to take her with him to Mumbai and let her lead her life the way she wants...mom agreed...but kriya had stoped talking to mom...she just gave a letter to mom and came to Mumbai...but once she left the place she immediately called dad and said that mom needs him...she is leaving mom and please take care of her...and in letter (written for Smriti), kriya said she will surely goes back to mom in future but she doesn't know when...and requested atleast to her(kriyas) sister, give mothers love now...let her feel complete parents love atleast now...

Sharon : so as soon as dad spoke to kriya on phone, he went to deharadun and brought mom with him...mom is with me and dad now...

Rey : matlab?

Swayam : kriya aur tum?

Sharon : sisters...we are sisters...

Kriya : (wipes her tears) par Sharon tum itna sab kuch kaise jante ho? I mean offcourse mom ne bataya hoga but mere emotions n how I felt, ye sab kaise jante ho tum?

Sharon :(wiping her tears) your dairy...you wrote everything till you left the house...I read everything...I am sorry I am not supposed to read your personal dairy but I was helpless...I wanted to know each and everything about you so maine padli...I am sorry

Kriya :idiot...sorry kyun bol rahi ho? You are my lil sis...you have all the rights to know about me...dats okay...

Sharon : tum mujpe gussa nahi ho? (Still sobbing)

Kriya : bilkul nahi...(she wipes tears from Sharon's face)

Rey : hold on...aap dono itna sab kuch bata ke aise normal kaise behave kar sakte ho?.. here I am unable to digest the things you both shared just now and you both are acting all sissy sissy...?

Swayam : exactly...itna sab kuch hua aur Hume abb pata chal raha hai...and kriya you ...you...suffered...(he couldn't complete his sentence)

Kriya : I am sorry swayam and rey...

Sharon : why are you asking sorry? Tumne jaanbuch ke tho nahi kiya tha khud ko hurt...? And you both(reyam) please she needs lot of care and affection right now...aap logo ko dena ho tho do otherwise I am there for her now...dont trouble her reminding again and again whatever happened in her life...she is back here to give her life a fresh try...let her forget everything..please

Kriya : Sharon don't be rude...they are not my enemies

Sharon : I don't care...I just care about you right now...you are still weak...

Swayam : even I don't care whatever you say okay?(to Sharon)...I am also concerned about my kriya...just because you know everything already, it doesn't mean you can talk to us rudely...

Rey : your kriya(to swayam)? ...kriya kab tumhari hogai? She is mine...

Kriya and armaan just enjoying the scene...

Sharon : oh please...she is mine okay...

Swayam :(to Sharon) tum ab uski sis ho...aur main pehle se hi uske bestfreind hoon...so don't show that attitude okay ?

Rey : woaww...relax guys...even I am also here..

Kriya : bas bas..bas shanth please...ye kya aap log lad rahe ho baccho ki tarah?

Rey : baatcutter tel them that(pointing at swaron)

Kriya : I am yours(looking at rey with love and affection)

Rey : (was on ninth cloud when she said that...he was arguing like kids but when she said that sentence, understood her deep feelings for him) just stood there staring at her...all the pain and hurt which was there in her eyes when she came infront of him few hours back, is now replaced with the peace and releif...

Swayam : (coughs to bring them back...and succeeds also...) hogayi aap dono ki look look...? Kriya these two are disturbing a lot...lets go somewhere and talk ...I need to know everything like your so called sister...otherwise...otherwise...let me also read your dairy...please...how can she(pointing at Sharon) knows everything and I get to know only the things she says about you?...that too from her? I am your best friend...I should know everything...please

Sharon : haa,,...as if I care...and listen uske sare ab tak ke dairies mere pas hai...main nai dene wali kisi ko kuch usme se...they are treasures for me...I am getting to know so much about her...

Swayam : kriya this is not fair...

Rey : kriya tum in dono ke chakkar mein mat pado...indono ka patch up hote hue der nai lagti...just ignore then...

Swaron : how dare you rey?

Vicky : guys shut up...please...hum log bhi hai yahan pe...

Neha : kab se dekh rahe hai...inka katham hi nai horaha hai...

Vicky :exactly...kriya (puts his arm on her shoulder) how are you now? I mean koi treatment chal rahi hai abhi bhi ya you are still on some medicine?

Kriya : I am fine Vicky...haan medicines hai abhi bhi...but am recovering...but bohot weak hogayi hoon bas...

Vicky : don't worry ab hum sab hai tumhare sath...will make sure tum jaldi se teek hojao...forget about whatever happened...will start everything once again from the beginning...

Neha : han...except dazzlers vs weaklings ka jagada chod kar...

Vicky : sahi kaha kagu...(he immediately realised what he called neha...after long time...)

Neha : (felt happy but doesn't want to show)

Sharon : oh hello...aap log mere sister ke sath kya private mein baatein kar rahe ho? She is mine okay?

Kriya : Sharon please...this is not the way to talk to them...

Sharon : sorry...

Swayam : arre wah...chalo accha laga jaan ke ki sharon rai prakash kisi ki tho sunti hai...

Kriya : huh swayam please...abb tum shuru mat hojana..

Rey : kriya leave them...tell me where are you staying? No...tum chalo mere sath...ab se tum mere sath rahogi...

Arman : oh hero...relax...uska bhai abhi jinda hai...I will not let her to stay with her boyfriend before marriage...

Rey : what ?

All were trying hard to control their laugh...

Arman : what what? Mere hote hue wo tumhare sath nahi rahegi? I have taken her responsibility as her elder brother...and till you both complete your studies and settle in your life, will not let her to stay with you...because I dont like live in relationship...jab tak tum apne ghar mein nahi batate kriya aur tumhare barein mein, I will not allow any extra closeness between you both...understand?

Rey : what the hell? Kriya

Kriya : rey calm down...please...and please dont worry I am staying here..in the guest house...and I am also working here in armaans NGO...so please

Swayam : wo sab tho teek hai...par tum college kab join kar rahi ho?

Armaan : aap logo ka bb match katham hote hi...remember bb match jiske lie aap sab yahan aaye the?

All : wo han...hum tho bhul hi gaye the...

Krisha smile at their friends...armaan to joins them...

Armaan : haan...tho chalo abhi aap sab log jao...kal morning sharp at 5 o'clock se aapki bb training start hogi...

Swayam : what ? Nai main nahi jaunga...I need to talk to kriya...

Rey : me too...

Armaan : try and understand...she needs rest..she is not only physically but mentally also weak right now...aaj bahot kuch she had to face..now she needs to relax her mind...so please guys...

Sharon : only I am going to stay with kriya(hugs kriya slightly)

Rey : kyun? Then main bhi rahunga...

Swayam : han han hum bhi rahenge...

Arman got frustrated...scratching his forehead with his finger

Arman: agar ek aur bar yahan rukne ki jidd kie aap logo ne tho security ko bulana padega muje...samje?(calming himself) guys wo dono sisters itne saalo baad mile hai...let them spend some time alone...and kriya needs Sharon right now..aap logo ko pata hai, almost two weeks se roj Sharon yahan aati hai apni badi behan se milne but uski halat dekh ke, usse aur taklif na ho mentally ye soch kar, door se hi dekh kar chali jati hai ...I saw her tears...and pain...


Kriya : what ? Sharon daily mujse milne aati thi?

Arman : haan...she got my number from Smriti aunty and contacted me...tho she came everyday here from last two weeks...
So guys please give them some time to settle down mentally...

Kriya hugs Sharon from a side and kisses her on her head..

All understood now and agreed to go...

Swayam : okay will go then..

The gang says good bye to krisha and arman and were leaving...

Kriya : rey...

Rey : (was happy) hmm?

Kriya : ek min..she goes towards him...while the gang goes lil bit away giving them some privacy...

Rey : han baatcutter...

Kriya goes lil bit close to where rey was standing...and without saying anything she closes his shirt button...

Rey : ye kya tha?(smiling like an idiot)

Kriya : wo..wo jab maine apko...wo hug...kuch der pehle...tho ye khul gaya tha...(just looking at his shirt button, avoiding looking at him)

Rey : was about lift her face by lifting her chin,

The gang : uhhu uhhhu ...uhhuuu(looking at other side)

Kriya: puts her hand on the button..pressing gently to his skin...- aapko jaana chahie abb

Rey: hmm...puts his hand on hers which was on his chest and squeezes lightly...

Kriya : bye(removes her hand slowly...n looks at him)

Rey : giving sad smile...- bye...




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Posted: 12 years ago
luvly update...😃
luved d way dy were fighting fr kriya..i was laughing thrghout der convo...🤣
good work...👏
Edited by grungta11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved krisha's bond...
the way sharon,swayam n rey fo fightng for kriya was super cute...
loved it wen kriya said mai apki hu ...
totally awesome update...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a cute,funny n emotional update
i like the way rey sharon n swatum was fiting for kria
n then wo armaam ka rey se convo
n krisha s relation
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a amazing chapter
it was emotional
it was funny
it was sweet
it was cute

loved the swaron fight 😛😛 😉😉 OFFCOURSE FOR KRIYA!!!!!
love krisha relaion...
thank you for the pm
update soon nd do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update..👏👏

Loved hw Shareyam fought for Kriya..🤣

Loved Krisha's bonding..👍🏼
in short
Loved d whole update...😎

do cont soon...

n thnks 4 d pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊

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