SS kriyaansh tani kriyam swaron krisha part 13 pg71(10/28)

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome
loved it

Thank u... 😊

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: kriapatel
finly u update
update was supab
now i m just waiting 4 kria to meet rest of the gang
plz jaldi unhe milwa dena
n ya next update jaldi krna

Thank you... 😊
Soon kria vl meet the others n rey... 😉
Milwadungi bahot jald...

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Woww. . . .
Awsome-dowsome update smi. . . . .
Loved it. . . . . .
KriNi<kriya and taani> ka convo was awsome. . . . . .
Yuppieee. . . . .
Kriya is gonna cum back soon and also help the lousins 4 bb match. . .
Woww. . . . .
M super excitd 4 it. . . .
So,Watch out Swayum and Rey your bestie and love is gonna cum back. . . . . . . . .
Smi Maate pls,
nxt part super se bhi upper wala jaldi update krna. . .
Egarly waiting 4 it. . . . .
Update soon Maate. . . .

Thank you thanks a lot madhu for such a wonderful comment... 😊
Madhu balike sabar karo(for next update)...sabar ka fal meetha hota hai... 😉 😛

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: _sweetannu_
awesome chappy dear..👏

kriya n tanni convo was wonderfully written..😛

at kriya is ready to go back..😃

kriya ka plan kya hai..😲

waiting fr kriyaansh meeting..😳

great job loved it
love to read more..😊

Thank you dear for such an encouraging comment... 😊

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: MOON_ARSHA
Update was good.
Plz pm me.

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
amazing update

Originally posted by: kanchi01
Superb update...!!!!
Luvd it... 😊
Update soon...

Thank youu... 😊

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: zona_malik
AWESOME..

LOVED IT..

UPDATE SOON.

Thanks a lot dear...
Yup updating in few hrs... 😊

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Haan. .haan smi. . .
Tu naa buss,
sabke coments ka reply ker. . . .
Update mat dena. .thik hai. . . .
Tujhe mujhe jaisi nanhi si jaan ko tadpa ke kya milta hai??
Hmm. . .hmm. . .
See,m online. .toh chal be a gud gal and give an awsome-dowsome wala update. . .
And,a realy long 1 . . .

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Part 6 :

Swayams house :
Tani reaches home...sw was already at home..waiting for her...he was worried about her..as soon as tani enters, he showers questions on her

Sw : kahan the tum tani..? Aur ye chit ka kya chakkar hai?? Tum teek toh hona tani..? Tum kuch bol q nahi rahe ho?
Tani : bhai bhai relax...muje chatter box bolte ho na aap..? Abhi aap kya kar rahe ho?(she had mischievous smile on her face)

Sw thinks "yeh toh bilkul normal lag rahi haI..rey ke baatein sun kar toh laga tha bahot royi hogi...sad hogi..but tani toh smile kar rahi hai..bilkul tension free lag rahi hai..infact itne dino baad old mischievous smile wali tani ko dekhne ko mil raha hai...itnI jaldi kaise yeh normal ban gayi?? Check karu kya ek bar rey ke naam lekar iske reaction ko??" His chain of thoughts was broken by tani..

Tani : shaking her hand infront of sw - bhaiii...bhai kahan kho gaye aap?? Bhaaiii...?

Sw : huh...han?? Han woh kya main jaan sakta hoon ke wo chit ka kya chakkar hai?? Aise heavy heavy dialogs q likh ke gayi thi..?? Tumhe pata hai muje kitni tension ho rahi thi usse pad kar??(he observes her expression changing)

Tani : becomes serious but within no time she composes herself n says - oh bhai...actually...I dont know aap kaise react karenge but I want tell u something...I know ye baat aapko bahot pehle bata deni chahiye thi but darti thi...bhai agar aap dantenge nahi tho kya mein kuch share karu aapke sath? Agar aap bhai ke sath sath ek best frnd ban ke meri small story sunne ke lie tayyar hai toh hi main aapko bataungi...aur agar ek kadoos typical bhai ban kar sunna chahte ho tho sorry I can only tell u one thing that I was feeling low n now I am okay...(she says very dramatically crossing her hands on her chest)

Sw : smiles - okay manjoor hai...I wont behave like a typical brother...u can share anything with me...(thanks tani atleast abb toh share karne ke lie maann gayi...I promise I will definitely make you to come out of this whole situation in ur life)

Tani : okay...she sits on sofa beside sw ...facing him...- bhai actually...baat yeh hai ki...(she was finding it difficult to share with sw but she has to tell him somehow now)..bhai woh main...

Sw : tani gabharao mat...I will be always with u ..main nahi dantunga tumhe iss bar..I promise...plz baat kya hai batado...

Tani : bhai woh main...(closing her eyes...takes a deep breath once) kissi ko pyaar karne lagi thi...(opens her eyes...looks at sw expecting frown on his face but instead she observes worried expression on his face)..holding his hand - bhai plz gussa mat hona...I will tell u everything...plz bhai aise blank expression mat do ...main sab kuch batati hoon aapko...

Sw : go ahead..(putting his other hand on tanis hands which are already holding his one hand tightly)

Tani : bhai actually kai mahino pehle se I started liking a boy...usse maine aise hi kisi college site main dekhi thi...I became a fan of him...his talent...slowly uske bare mein janne ke lie uske clg mein padne wale kisi student ke id pwd hack kia...n regularly uske barein mein janna shuru kia uske clg site through...dheere dheere meri routine ban gayi uske barein janna n all..ek din muje pata chala that he z going to goa for some event...tho maine ghar pe jhoot bolkar frnds ke sath goa bhi gayi thi..but wahan usse live dekh kar meri paagalpan itna badh gaI ki wapas goa se jane ke baad usse milne ki aur frndshp karne ki dreams dekhna shuru ki maine..then one day when I felt I cant take it anymore, muja milna hi hai usse kisI bhi tarah...tho I decided to come here ...to Mumbai...where he stays..n yahI wajah thi jo main achanak Mumbai aane ka faisala kia...then yahan aakar usse mili...dosti ki...usse apni feelings ke barein mein batane ki decision bhi lia. But tabhi muje pata chala ki..he used to love someone...jo ab uske sath nahi hai...then I thought chalo koi baat nahi wo ladki ab uske sath nahi hai tho main unke life mein uss ladki ki jagah lungi...uss ladki ke barein mein I mean wo kaisi dikhti thi kaise bolti thi kis tarah ke dresses pehanti thi sab kuch pata lagayi..n ek din ussi ki tarah dress up karke ussi ki tarah unke samne behave bhi ki..muje lag raha tha he was happy..but jab uss din unhone mujpe chillaya tho muje pata chala ki maine unhe kitna hurt kia wo sab karke uss din..pata chala ki wo kitna pyaar karte the uss ladki se. Nahi...correction..kitna pyar KARTE HAI uss ladki se..n kisi ko bhi woh uss ladki ki jagah nai dena chahte apne life mein...but unfortunately main ye bat nahi samji uss din n (silent for few secs...den) n maine uss din pagal ki tarah apni feelings confess ki unse...n as expected (laughs sadly) I mean uss waqt uss situation mein koi kya expect kar sakta hai unse...hurtful baato ke siva mere lie...unhone gusse mein aakar uss din kuch baatein aise kahe jo muje bahot bahot hurt kar gaye...after couple of days he realized that he had hurt me by his bitter words n tried to say sorry to me...but I had already accepted ki that was my mistake...not his...aur phir dheere dheere hum dono mein cheese clear hone lage..hum dost bane fir se...n then the day when shivam announced that he n I are couple, sab kuch change hua mere aur unke beech...again he started treating me like enemy...not enemy but yeah as other's gf...he started hurting me by hurtful words..fir maine jab kaha ki shivam aur main couple nahi hai tho fir se hummare bich sab normal hone lagi...n unki dosti ko fir se ek bar main pyaar samajne lagi...tho fir se unke aur mere bich fights hone lage..then..kal kuch aisa hua ki sab kuch samaj gai main...ki main kitni galat thi..he still loves that girl...n he never wants to accept any other girl in his life..chahe unki first love unhe wapas mile ya na mile..he vl love her only..he himself confessed everything to me yesterday...how he loves his girl...(silent)

Sw : after a min of silence - so u were upset ?? Isilie aise chit chod kar chali gayi thi aaj? (Holding back his tears)

Tani : han..bhai main aaj ghar se jaate waqt decide ki thi kI vl accept the truth that he can not be mine...I will have to move on accepting this...meri galti thi ki bina jane that unke life mein koi already hai ya nahi? Main Mumbai chali aayi..unse milne...unhe paane..muje pehle hi sochna chahie tha ki unke life mein already koi aur special hosakti haI..meri galti thi..but jab aaj beech pe gai, akele kuch time spend karne tho wahan kuch aisa hua bhai ki I forgot everything...I mean not completely but I got a reason to move on in my life...so here I am smiling...original tani is back once again...jiyooo. aur jeene do funda ke sath...ab no more rona dona...no more lady devdas avtaar...I am a free bird once again..(with wide smile)

Sw : par tani aisa kya hua aaj jo tum ek hi din mein sab kuch bhool ke aaghe badne ka decide kia?? I mean...I m happy for u..ki tum kush ho..move on karna chahte ho..but iske wajah kya hai?

Tani : bhai plz mat puchona yeh sab abb...Maine itna sab kuch share ki wahi kaafi hai..I dont want to think on all that once again..jo hona tha wo hogaya...I dont want my past to hold me back from moving ahead in my life...I want to give my life another chance ...a fresh start...so plz bhai kya hua, q hua, kaise hua ya fir ( looking straight into sw's eyes) wo ladka kaun tha (pause for few secs n den avoiding eye contact) mat puchiye ab..plz...it z closed chapter now in my life...I want to start a new one..n han I dont avoid that boy in future...I will be his wellwisher always...after all I am his fan (winks at sw)

Sw : shakes his head smiling...okay tani...but remember ...I am always with u...I support ur decision...muje aur jada kushI hoti agar tumme iss sudden change ke piche ka reason pata hota tho...but thats okay..tum kush tho main bhi kush...I will not force u to tell me on this whole incident in ur life...

Tani : thanks bhai...hugs sw...

Sw pov : tanI I know tumne uss ladke ka naam q nai batayi...taki meri aur uski dostI pe asar na pade...I know u very well tani...u r d best sis...but aisa kya hua hai aaj ki tum back to normal...I mean I am happy for u..muje nahi pata muje kitne din lagte aise tumhe normal banane mein agar tum heart broken ghar laut thi aaj tho..kya hai iske piche reason tani...? N sorry to hide from u that rey had already told me everything...agar main bataunga tho u vl not feel so comfertable with me...u will feel embraced...n hosakta hai tum rey ke sath bhi awkward feel karo...so I am hiding this from u tani..muje maaf kardo..I dont want to hurt u...thats it...

Tani's pov : sorry bhai..maine aapko unke naam nahi batayi...main nahi chahti ke aapke aur rey ki itne dino ke dosti par meri waje se asar pade...I am sorry...n I cant tell u ki meri itni badI decision ke piche kiska hath hai...main apko nahi bata sakti ki aaj main aapki bestfrnd kria se mili...unke aankhon mein rey ke lie itna pyaar concern hi tho hai aaj muje itni badi decision lene mein help ki...unke aankon mein bhi wahi dard tha jo maine hammesha rey ke aankhon mein notice ki hai .. kria bhi utni hi dard seh rahi hai jitni rey unse bichad kar..so I have decided main kriya aur rey ko milaungi...ek baar wo dono aamne samne aajaye tho khud sab kuch teek jojayega unke beech...n bhai aap bhi ready ho jao aapke bestie ko milne ke lie..(smiles n free herself from hug)

Tani : okay bhai main fresh hoke aathi hoon...fir sath mein lunch karenge..

Sw : sure...meanwhile sw calls rey n tells everything...swarey feel relieved..

Later tani n sw have thr lunch talking on rAndom issues...they were about to go to thr respective rooms after finishing thr lunch, thr cell beeps...they receive the msg-

"Heya..u guys bb trainer will b waiting for u all at below address(address given)..plz don't ignore this msg..b thr at sharp 4 pm...- ur wellwisher"

Tani n sw look at each other confused...but sw's cell starts ringing..it was reys call..sw receives..

Rey : hey sw I got a msg which says
Sw : about bb trainer ?
Rey : tumhe bhi?
Sw : kaun ho sakta hai?
Rey : dont know..but what u think? Humhe jana chahie..? 1 min hold kar vi ka cal hai..rey receives vi call n got to know that even he nil rinni simmi have got the same msg. .
Meanwhile sw receives msgs from ne bh aashi n amar about the same msg..
Rey :(unhold the call) sw I think sabko msg bheja gaya hai...
Sw : haan...tho kya kare abb? Ye koi prank tho nahi hai hum sabke against...?

Done...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Res. .
Finaly. .me first. . .
Yupie. . .
Party time. . .
Yuppiee. . . . . .
Unress. . . . . . . . .
Smi,sorry but i cnt give my coment on dis update as it fully containd about dat person jiska mai naam sunna tak tolerate nai ker sakti. .hope u undrstand mai kiski baat ker rahi hu. . .
Waise m happy usne apna dukhda swayum ko bata diya. . . .
And buss woh apni life mai move on ker jaaye and mere kr ke beech mai bilkul naa aaye. . . .
And,agar pure ss mai issko itni imp milegi toh m sorry smi,pls dnt expect mere waale coments in dis thread. . . . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago