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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7:
sw's cell starts ringing..it was reys call..sw receives..

Rey : hey sw I got a msg which says
Sw : about bb trainer ?
Rey : tumhe bhi?
Sw : kaun ho sakta hai?
Rey : dont know..but what u think? Humhe jana chahie..? 1 min hold kar vi ka cal hai..rey receives vi call n got to know that even he nil rinni simmi have got the same msg.
.Meanwhile sw receives msgs from ne bh aashi n amar about the same msg..
Rey :(unhold the call) sw I think sabko msg bheja gaya hai...
Sw : haan...tho kya kare abb? Ye koi prank tho nahi hai hum sabke against...?

Rey : may bhi...but kaun ho sakta hai sender??
Sw : pata nai...kya kare abb?

Rey : I dont know y but sw I have strong feeling that its not a prank...itz something positive for us...

Sw : achha..?? Tho jate hai then...letz c...

Rey : yeah...waise bhi aajkal life bahot adventurous banti jaa rahi hai...ek aur advanture samjte hai iss msg ko..

Sw : philosophy...?? Not bad...accha asar ho raha hai mere dosti ka tumpe...(smiles)

Rey :huh...yeah I know...(with serious tone)

Sw : sab teek tho hai na rey??

Rey : haa teek ?? Meri life kaha ja rahi muje kuch pata nahi chal raha sw...I m blankly moving ahead in my life...infact mentally I am moving ahead but my heart ...(pause for almost 10-12 secs) my heart is still on those 2 tearful eyes...which I recognized very lately...

Sw : silent for few secs then - rey i think we should have tried n find out where she went?? Y she left the clg suddenly?? Y she never tried to b in touch with any of us?? Y that day her mom said she z suffering from food poisoning she needs rest but aftr few mins she came n performed? Y she said she used u she never had feelings?? Y she said she had feelings for me when she herself always used try to bring me n sh close?? N there are so many questions like this for which we dont have any answers...n my heart says always that uske life mein kuch na kuch jaroor hua tha uss waqt jiske waje se wo aise bina bataye kisi ko bhi chali gai...

Rey : clears his throat...with low voice says - dont know sw...ye bb match tak dektha hoon..then I am thinking I should visit dehradun ...hosakta hai wo wahi ho abb...hosakta hai itne din bad milne ki kushi mein ya phir muje dekh ke gusse mein hi sahi kuch tho bole...I dnt know y sw...bt muje last 2- 3 months se bahot bure dreams aarahe hai uske barein mein...I mean jab wo chali gai thi tab bhi muje koi bad dreams nahi aate the kabhi but recently I have observed that I am seeing only bad dreams about her..

Sw : bad dreams as in..??

Rey : matlab...jaise wo akele bait kar ro rahi ho...wo dance karna chahti hai but something is stoping her to dance so she had tears in her eyes...she wants to meet u but something z again stopping her to do so she z crying...she z in hospital bed..she z crying...she wants to talk non stop like b4 but she has no 1 to speak with so she z crying...she meets with an accident she z in hospital in a bad condition eyes shut but tears are slowly making thr way out...she...she ...she z

Sw : shut up..shut up rey...1 aur word bolana tho maar dalunga tuje main aaj...ye...ye kya ...kya. bakwa..bakwaas. (line dc)

Both are crying badly...they dont know y suddenly all these things happening in thr lives...its not like they never used to miss her when she left...but past couple of months both sw n Rey missed her like hell...they did not share it till today...they thought the other will get hurt if they express thr pain...not only rey, even these days sw got many times dreams where kr z silently crying...hurting herself...he tries to help her, go near her but next moment he wakes up n realises its a dream...same happened with rey also..but rey got some more painful dreams like kr committing suicide, kr meets with an accident , kr z i n hospital bed etc...they both cried many times when they woke up early morning because of bad dreams...but they did not have the courage to express it to each other...

After half an hr sw receives msg of rey which z sent to all gang members

Msg - I am going to the address in that msg...meet me there in 30 mins...but its completely u guys choice whether u guys want to come thr or not...but I will go...

Sw - huh...taani

Tani : haan bhai..

Sw : I am going to that address...u wanna come with me?

Tani : han bhai jarooor..(with ful excitement) chale..??

Sw : shaking his head...yeah lets go...

By the time every one reaches thr, a boy facing back to the bb court entrance standing thr...he was not tall not short..medium height ...well built body...tattoo on his right arm...

The gang looks at each other...confused...they dont know who z he...they still haven't seen his face...

Sw : excuse me...

The boy turns around...the gang starts whispering who z he ? We never saw him before...how does he know us?

Sw : armaan...armaan malik...

The boy smiles...he thought atleast kisi ne tho pehchana usse...when he smiles, all girls starts drooling over him..

Rinni :(whispers) look at his dimples...aww soo cute
Simmi : he z so handsome
Ne : cool dude he z...
Aashi : tattoo. Wow

Boys give disgusting look at girls for which girls show attitude n looks away crossing thr hands ...

Rey : looks at sw who was still staring at armaan...; armaan kaun??(whispers)

Sw : huh...haan...he looks at the gang who are staring at armaan strangely - guys ye armaan malik hai bb champion...he z captain of our indian bb team...he runs few NGOs also...I think (looking around) ye ngo office bhi inhika hai...

Armaan : smiles - thank u...thank u sw for giving my introduction ...but yar (putting hand on sw's shoulder) mai NGOs nahi chalAta..they are my dads ngos...main bas 2 yrs elder hoon aap logo se...itna bhi bada mat banao muje..

Sw : smiles - sry

Arman : no no datz ok..I was just kidding...

Vicky : to tum jante ho inhe sw?

Arman : isse..." isse" not " inhe"...

Sw : nahi..I mean Vicky I just know he z a bb champion n Indian bb team captain thats it...I dont know him personally...

Rey :tho aap...I mean tum hume kaise jante ho??

Arman : I heard that u guys need bb player to train u guys so called u all

Rey : tho wo msg aap ne bheja tha..?

Armaan : yeah...

Sw : par aapko kaise pata chala hume trainer ki jaroorat hai...??

Ar : scratching his forehead whispers kitne sawal puchte hai ye log? In earphone ans comes " bolo tani mili thi usne bataya tumhe...tani ko bataya tha ki I only sent that msg so she vl manage the situation"

Ar : whispers back - are u sure? ...ans comes " han...wo bahot acchi hai...sambhaal legi sabkuch"

Nil : dude we are asking something to u..

Ar : thinks " ab inme se tani kaun hai? Chal beta arman lele uska naam..badme jo jawab degi...wahi tani hogi"

Sw : armaan hum kuch puch rahe hai...

Tani : thinks " ohh.. kr tho aap khud samne nahi aane wale abhi bhi...main bhi dekhti hoon kitne der tak chupe rahenge aap...bhai aur rey ke sawalon ka kaise jawab denge aap chup ke"

Ar : taani (observing at girls reaction)...tani ne bataya muje

Tani : thinks "maine?? Arrggg kr...aapko kaha tha na maine main isme aapki koi help nahi karne wali..."

Ar : got who z tani...bcoz ryt now all are staring at her for answer

Tani : maine?? Main kab mili thi aapse??...muje nahi pata ye kaun hai aur kya keh rahe hai ye

All again looks at armaan

Armaan : whispers " yeh tho party badal di...ab kya kare??" Ans comes " bolo usse ki subh (morning) mili thi beach pe...she vl understand"

Arman : aarre tani bhool gaye mrng mile the hum beach pe...tumhi ne kaha tha ur frnds need bb trainer...remember??(hoping she vl understand this time)

Tani : beach pe?? Main tho beach pe gai hi nai aaj...(sorry kr...aaj aapko main sabke saamne laakar hi rahungi...they need u)

Arman : (frustrated) whispers " come out now...she z not co operATING.." ...answer comes " but main kaise?? Plz" ...ar whispers "ok 1 last tym I vl try...but if I fail again u have to come out.."

Ar : haan hum nahi mile the tani but u met some lady to whom u said u need bb trainer for ur frnds...tho bas ussi ne muje bataya...

Tani : (very smart...but not today) ohh haann..han yaad aya ...but maine tho sirf "mere frnds ko" bola tha uss lady ko tho unhone aapko mere frnds ke naam n contact no kaha se dia...??

Ar : shouts on earphones. Come out now...I cant tolerate this hide n seek game...(controlling his frustration) dnt wry main hoon na...plz come out..

All are confused...all have already observed that ar talking to some one on ph through earphones...

Sw : plz batao arman tumhe hummare no n naam kaise pata...who z behind all this...

Voice comes from behind them " main hoon ...Maine bheja tha wo msg"

Tani silently says " yes yes wo agayi "...arman saw this n glares at her ...she mouths sorry to him...to which he smiles n winks showing tumbs up signal...she too smiles...

All recognized the voice...all turned to c her except 2 people rey n sw...they froze hearing that voice...because past couple of months they missed her like hell n those bad dreams made thr situation even more worse...infact a hr back only they shared those dreams to each other...now she z here...infront of them...is it really happening with them or it z also a dream they could not understand...thr chain of thoughts broke when

Ne : kriyaaa ...goes n hugs her tightly...

Soon bh n amar too join n hugs kr...

Kr just hugs back them n gives a sad smile n looks at sw n rey...who had tears in thr eyes...they are angry on her...not because she left them without telling anything...not for she never contacted them after that day...but they are angry because of those dreams...they both were very much worried about her...they had a feeling that kr is in trouble...she z not well...they did not express it too each other till an hr back but they were worried about her...many times they cried when they used to wake up in the morning...

Kr slowly walks n stands infront of reyam...she already had tears in her eyes...seeing those tearful eyes, rey forgot whatever she said to him on pre Valentine's day...

Rey : sw ask her kahan thi wo itne din?
Kr smiles slightly though tears are flowing from her eyes

Sw : chod rey wo nai batayegi...batana hi hota tho jane se pehle nahi batake jati kuch?
Kr smiles again wiping her tears...

Rey looks at her...she was smiling...which makes him more angry...

Rey : dont u dare(showing index finger)...dont u dare miss kria gai...agar fir se smile kia na , u vl have to pay for that...(his eyes have become red now...because of tears...because of pain...because of all the fear he has suppressed within him from past few months)

All others are confused...they knew reyam were the 2 who missed her more...but y they are angry on her now...?

Sw : (shouts) has rahi ho?? Maja araha hai tumhe hum dono ko aise dekh kar?? Bata kar...(wipes his tears) bata kar nahi ja sakti thi akhir hua kya tha tumhare life mein??

Rey : laughs (though he was crying) kisse puch rahe ho sw?? Ye tho the gr8 kriya gai hai...jisse sirf logo ki prob solve karna pata hai...logo ki kaise Sath de jab they needed ye pucho...batayegi wo ...khud ki kabhi batayi hai jo ab bolegi...??
Hummesha se aadat hai uski apne feelings, apne dard aur apne probs chupane ka...nahi batayegi wo... puch bhi...

kr hugs him tightly...she was weak already...she could not bear reyams pain n tears...



Done...



Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
== Edited ==

Finally kriya bahar aa gayi all thanx to taani! 😛 😆

Awesome update 😳
Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
un res after 26 march🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kria is back in front of gang
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Posted: 12 years ago
update sooon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow super awsum update
finally kr hug
pls update next part soon
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
finally kriya is back...
armaan is bb player wow...
totally loved it...
thnx fr d pm...
update d nxt part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was superb and awesome and amazing... loved it...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome blossum update yaar

reyam finally let out their pain nd fear hiding in their hearts
both of them expressed about bad dream they getting abt kriya
then everyone meet armaan bt taani too much smarty due to her kriya has to come out

reyam knew she was here nd when she came infront of her.
They started scolding her by let out all d pain they hide in their heart
lovely yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part..
.reyam finally let out their pain nd fear hiding in their hearts
both of them expressed about bad dream they getting abt kriya
armaan is bb player wow...kriya is bk in front of gang
They started scolding her by let out all d pain they hide in their heart
lovely yaar
totally loved it...
thnx fr d pm...
update d nxt part soon...
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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