SS kriyaansh tani kriyam swaron krisha part 13 pg71(10/28)

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anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: smileysmi

Yes very soon vl update ... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: anjalijayan

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i am really sorry dear...

i dont think till monday i can update any of my ss..

but still i vl try n update this ss...bt not sure..i am sorry...

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anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: smileysmi

i am really sorry dear...

i dont think till monday i can update any of my ss..

but still i vl try n update this ss...bt not sure..i am sorry...

its ok

we will wait

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Meenal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Awesome story...pls cont soon and do pm me

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

@smileysmi: Nyc SS!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Meesocute
Awesome story...pls cont soon and do pm me

Thanks dear...
Yeah I am updating in few hrs...
Plz buddy me if you want pm bcoz I update my ss through cell ph so sending pms individually is difficult...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: girlz-rule
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<font size="4">Nyc SS!!!!😊</font>

Thank you... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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once again every one for liking my work n commenting...I am going to update the next part now...hope u guys will like it... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 5:

Bb court :

Sw : lets call others also...he msgs the gang to join them (rey n sw) in bb court...he has something to announce...

1Ce the gang receives msg from sw,

Vi : guys plz vl behave as if we dont know anything until and unless either rey or sw themselves shares anything about tani matter...after all she z sw's sis so obviously he doesn't want to share such things about her to every one...so plz guys sab aise react karo jaise hume kuch nahi pata iss barein mein..okay ? ?

All : yeah...u r right...

They all join reyum in bb court...

Sw : okay guys...I want to tell u all something..ki maine decide kia hai that I will help you guys to learn bb...I know very well abt this game as my dad is a bb champion so will teach you guys how to play...infact I will play with you guys...n I am sorry yesterday I didn't support u guys...I have my own reasons to behave like that...sorry..

Rey : such ..??( with wide grin)

Sw : yup (smiling)

All became very happy to hear the news...

Sw : but guys we dont have much tym to practice...even if I teach u how to play that will not be enough...either we need sufficient time to practice which we really dont have or we need some one bb professional player to train us perfectly within this short span of time...

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Beach :

Kr : bolie...aap muje jante hai..? I think I have never met u before...

TanI : haan...hum pehle kabhi nahi mile hai but I know you...I mean main aapko n aapke barein mein almost sub kuch janti hoon...

Kr : really ?? Bt how ?? (Confused)

Tani : forwarding her hand..hai I am tani...st Louis GS...

Kr : " st louis" word was enough for kr to become serious...it was the most hurtful n lovely past of her life...which even if she wants she can't forget...n can't remove those memories...hurtful because those memories are never letting her to move on in her life...lovely bcoz she found her ...everything there...but unfortunately for short period...yes within few months she had lost all those things which she possessed thr n dreamt of always...n along with that she lost her happiness forever...

Tani : kriya...kriya...kahan kho gayi...aap sun rahe ho na...hello...she shakes kr slightly..

Kr : comes to her senses...huh...I am sorry...muje uss clg ya uske related kisi bhi topic pe koi baat nahi karni hai...bye(she starts to leave)

Tani : aapko sunna padega...its very imp...

Kr : baccho aap log chalo main aati hoon...she sends all children with the other lady...then facing tani - dekhie maine uss clg ko chod ke kahi months hogaye hai...muje uss clg se koi lena dena nahi hai so plz dont drag me into any issues related to that clg (kr thought tani might talk about dance)

Tani : okay uss clg se koi lena dena nahi hai...fine...but uss clg ke logo se...?? Aapke frnds se...??

Kr : becomes nervous...this z becoming real tough for her...somehow she composes her self n says - plzzz...muje kuch nahi sunna hai uss barein mein...( looking down)

Tani : sunna padega aapko...otherwise I will send them here..aapke paas...then aap khud unhe face kijie...

Kr : almost in tears...still avoiding eye contact - plz ...y are u doing this to me..??

Tani : bcoz they all need u kr...unhe aapki jarurat hai abhi...plz listen to me once...(looking at kr's tearful eyes) main aapko hurt nahi karna chahti but kuch cheese janna jaroori hai aapko...plz...

Kr : wiping her tears ...I cant...nahi hoga mujse...plz leave the matter here only...

Tani : understood that kr will not listen to her like that...she has to do emotional blackmailing...- rey n bhai need you...iss waqt unko aapki bahot jarurat hai...pplz unke lie

Reys name was enough for kr to look at tani immediately...till now she did not know that tani is sw's sister...

Kr : kya hua hai..?? Rey teek tho haI na ?? N who z bhai..? ?

Tani : (she too had tears in her eyes looking at kr's tearful eyes...the pain was very much clearly visible in them..) smiles n says - haan "wo teek" I mean "rey" rey teek hai...unhe kuch nahi hua hai n bhai means swayam...actually main sw ki cousin sister hoon...

Kr : smiles with tearful eyes...she finds sw, her bestie in tani...kr too was missing him like hell in past 1 month...she tried to call him but every time she lacks courage to face him...she needed him badly...she even thought to go n meet him directly but again she stopped herself thinking that what if he tells others about her arrival to mumbai...

Kr : sw ki sis ho tum ?? Kaisa hai sw..?? Usne tumhe mere barein mein bataya tha..?? Sw bhi mujhe miss karta hai kya..??

Tani : laughs. Slightly...- han bhai teek hai...n aapko kaun miss nai karta...?? Aapkr sare frnds aapko bahot miss karte hai...aapko pata hai aapke waje se muje kitni takleef uthani padi starting mein...? ?

Kr : (sits thr with tani) meri waje se..? (Confused)

T : han actually I was selected as a 6th dancer of team weakling n aapki frnd vishakha ...baapre ..unhonhe muje itna tuff time diya bcoz she never wanted to give ur place to any one else...unhe lagta tha main aapki jagah le rahi hoon so (she looks at kr whoz tears are flowing uncontrollably) aap bhi un sab ko bahot miss karte ho na..? ?

K : wipes her tears...n just nods indicating yes...

T : after a min...kr rey ko aapki jarurat hai abhi...plzzz help him before its too late...

K : q kya hua hai..?? Sab teek tho hai na??

T : kuch bhi teek nahi hai kr...every thing messed up in the clg...n specially in rey n bhais life...aap hi ek ho jo iss waqt un dono ke himmat strength ban sakte ho...plz

K : matlab...? ?

T : narrates avp's challenge to kr..n also about how the gang has shattered now...n sw's personal reason for not supporting the gang for bb match(she did not know till now abt sw has decided to teach the gang)...she also explains how low both rey n sw are feeling..

Kr : oh...she thinks for a while then says - tani I am ready to help them...I have a plan also (thinks for few secs again)..yeah I think I have a perfect plan also but main unke saamne nahi jaasakti...tumhe hi muje help karna padega isme...

T : q ..? Aap q sabke samne nahi jaa sakte ..??

K : no..main rey ya sw ko face nahi kar sakti...main unke life se bahot door ja chuki hoon...n plz tum bhi unhe ye mat batana ki tum mujse mili thi...plzzz

T : ( this was d limit for tani...till now she was happy to c so much love n concern in k's eyes for her love rey n her best friend sw but tani did not understand y k cant come infront of them when she care about them so much...tani even forgot abt reys convo previous night after meeting kr) nahi main aapki koi madat nahi kar sakti isme...jo bhi karna haI aapko khud karna hoga...n naa hi main ye baat chupane wali hoon ke I met u...specially rey se...

K : (understood that tani knows about her n reys love story...she also got it that now every one know about rey n her story...this makes her more nervous n sad) plz tani...rey ko kuch mat bolo...plz...let him move on in his life...(again tears start to form in her eyes)

T : move on ??( wiping her tears) yeah right move on...laughs slightly...aapko kya lagta hai ke rey aapko bhula chuke hai...? ?

K : plz tani dont make it more difficult. For me...

T : wipes her tears...composes herself n says - listen kr...main nai janti aapke side ki story kya hai..I mean aap q chod ke gaye the sabko ya q aap rey se milna nahi chahte jabki aapke aankohn(eyes) mein rey ke lie utna hi pyar dhikta hai jitna wo aapse karte hai...but I should tell u something...its high time...I dont know how u vl take it...bt seriously I need to tell u my story...

Kr: ur story..??

T : yup...then she narrates everything about her feelings for rey till previous night...each n every thing she tells kr...even about last nites incident...

T : tho abb batayiye kya aap sahi kar rahe hai rey ke sath..?? I mean I dnt know abt ur side story bt rey ko ye bhi nahi pata ki aap unke life mein kabhi wapas aayenge bhi ya nahi but still he doesn't want to give ur place to any one in his life...

Kr : wipes her tears...gathers strength n says..- okay will meet them..but atleast till then dont say them that u met me...but u need to do me a small favour...plz call sw n ask them whats going on about bb match in the clg...will do the rest by myself...plz

Tani : smiles...okay..she calls sw n put it in speaker mode..

Sw : hello tani...?? Kahan ho tum? ? Tum teek tho ho na..??

T: bhai main bilkul teek hoon...todi der mein ghar arahi hoon...aachha wo sab chodie
.ye batayie ki clg mein sab kaise chal raha hai..?? I mean muje wahan hona chahie tha iss waqt..avp tho bahot gussa hongi na..?? Aur sab kaise hai? ? Bb match ko lekar tensed honge na??

Sw : welcome back tani...wapas apne normal non stop chatter box mode mein aane ke lie thanks...u know what tum jab bhi aise non stop bolti ho na tho muje meri bestie kria ki bahot yaad aati hai(tani looks at kr with smile)..wo bhi aise hi hammesha hyperactive mode mein chali jati thi baat bat pe...in dino muje uski kuch jada hi yad arahi hai tani...agar wo hoti na tho na rey na main aise low feel karte aaj...she was a strength for all of us...specially for me n Rey...I miss her..but anyways there z good news for you...ki I have decided to join the bb team...n I m going to teach them bb game..

T : wow bhai..thats great...matlab prob solved...?

Sw : nahi tani...prob abhi solve nahi hua hai...I can teach others how to play the game...but we need to practice a lot to compete...n we dont have enough time for practice...agar koi professional player humme miljaye train krne tho kuch hopes hai hummare jitne ka warna I doubt...

T : she looks at kr who gives assuring smile n thumbs up sign...

T : okay bhai main aapko ghar pe milti hoon thodi der mein...bye..
Sw : cool...bye...

Sw thinks " sry tani I knw iss waqt kr ke naam lene se thume bahot bura lag raha hoga but u need to accept the truth...that rey sirf aur sirf kr se pyar karta hai...chahe wo dono sath mein ho ya nahi doesn't matter...main khud rey ke life mein kr ke jagah pe kisi aur ko nahi dekh sakta tho rey kaise kisi aur ko itni asani se kr jagah de sakta hai apne life mein??"

Done..

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago