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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you dear :-)
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Chapter 5

Mr. Shark was listening to the conversation in manyata's office

He heard a period of silence, the only sound was the changing of the slides

Then came the sound of kissing

Button being opened

The fabric being lifted

Again repeated kissing

And manyatas moans and that fellows grunts

Finally he stopped the conversation hearing the voice say sorry

Mr shark was very irritated .he wanted to kill that guy at that instant itself

The guy was giving him one one reasons to kill him

No that fellow was digging his own grave

Yes, he had to die and I would have the privilege of finishing him of

Mr shark fished the photo that rohan had sent him

It was a lovely photo. A young dashing fellow was posing by the side of a lake

He knew who that person was- udayveer singh ,age 25 years

A self made man, a business tycoon

Owner of many industries, factories , hotels, malls ,cinema theaters and many others

His latest venture ' a joint collaboration with manyata kumara to start a school for illiterates in that city

Mother and father dead rather killed by underworld dons

Yes there was many more to that past

Yes he knew that past as well as udayveer

Mr shark took another photo of his soon to be victim and pinned it beside manyatas picture

Manyata woke up that morning with a smile on her lips . she blushed remembering that previos night. She had visited heaven during that kiss- her first kiss. His lips felt too good too yummy. She craved for more.she cheacked her mobile to check if he had sent her any messages.

No, nothing

Maybe he was busy to send her a message

She showered and wore a lemon yellow frock that reached just her knees. she added a simple diamond earring to it and lo she was ready

She joined her family for breakfast

M: ds, I decided to invest 3 crores for the construction of a school for illiterates in this city.

Ds: what are the profit levels in this deal dear

M: ds, this is a nonprofit venture between devgarh group of companies and uday veer international Company pvt ltd . ds we are earning a lot of money though our many businesses so why not start one were we get satisfaction of helping the needy rather than crores of profit

Jai: right di , I agree with you

M: thanks jai

Komal: I am proud of you beta , you are so kind, jeete raho beta

M: thanks ma

Brigraj: beta have you thought properly about it, its consequences,legal issues and other things

M: don't worry dad, I have asked mr kapoor to look into the matter, you know I wont do anything that would effect this family or our riyasat

Brig raj: I know beta, I know . all the best for this venture

M: bye guys I need to get going .iam getting late for office

All: bye

As that person watched manyata leaving , the person thought

Its nearly 3 weeks since I have paid that fellow 50 lakhs to that mr whale or shark or whatever his name is and till now I don't get any result . She is still fit and healthy and happy. She is busy donating all that money of my to charity. Not any longer. Soon it will be mine, all the money and riches will be mine. Oh god please bring that day pretty soon pls

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Manyata reached her office and first thing she did was search that office, expecting a bouquet like in all hindi movies where the hero gifts the heroine a bouquet after a wonderful night. She didn't find any. Oh she was stupid to think in that way

Manyata called her secretary and enquired wheter she had messages

S: mr naidu called to ''''.

M: (cutting in between)next

S: mr rai wanted to know''.

M: (interrupting again) did uday sorry mr udayveer sent any message

S: no mam

M:(sadly)ok you can leave

Manyata just couldn't concentrate that day on her business . she continuously was checking her phone, but was disappointed

Later she couldn't wait any longer, she decided to visit uday in his office

She asked her driver to take her to udays office

M: bhai, pls go faster

Driver: mam if I go again, then I would be arrested for over speeding

M: ok , bhai but try to go fast

D: gi mam

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Manyata literally ran the way to udays office. She reached the reception panting

M: can I see mr udayveer now , please its an emergency

Receptionist: mam, do you have an appointment

M : no, but cant you understand English, I want to see uday now

R: sorry , the boss is having a very private meaning in his conference hall and asked us not to disturb him

When manyata heard the word private and do not disturb ,she imagined the worst. she felt so upset. She visualized uday in the hands of a dazzling scantly clothed sexy girl and uday enjoying himself, or otherwise why would he not call call her this morning. Was that girl more beautiful than her, he shoud have informed her that they had broken up did he feel yesterdays night as a mistake?

Manyata ran to the conference hall in a temper wanting to catch that cheat red handed . she opened the door in a hurry only to see uday having a conference with two old men . all were looking at the intruder

Manyata felt embarrassed and said

M; sorry, I will wait in your room

U: ok

Manyata was sitting in uday's cabin feeling very embarrassed. How how she hated her imagination run wild . she just jumps into a conclusion without thinking, she felt utterly disgusted with her own behavior

chapter 6 on page 12

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Chapter 6

Uday entered the room after half an hour

U: what was that for manyata ?

M: I am so sorry uday, you didn't call today so I thought that you must have felt that last night was

U: was what , say it manyata

M: looking down, was a mistake

U: holding manyatas hands in his and looking straight into her eyes

U: last night was the best day of my life

Saying this he kissed her on the cheeks

Manyata went red

Uday asked his secretary to bring tea for them . uday started to mix the tea when manyata stopped him

M: uday it's a womans job to serve tea

U: ya so if I serve wont it be tea, will it be coffee

M: uday

As manyata was serving the tea the tea pot slipped from her hand and fell on uday , some hot tea fell on his chest

U: owww

M: oh my god what have I done ,iam sorry uday so sorry.pls let me clean it

U: its ok princess the first aid is on the shelf

Manyata takes of udays shirt and asks him to lie on the coach

She stress at his clean shaven chest and remembered last night

U: what happened princess, your staring like a child who just saw chocolate ice cream

Manyata blushed hearing this comment,she quickly put medicine on udays chest. His skin felt so soft under her finger tips

Manyata soon put a plaster over there and uday became fit

Uday soon became mischievous

He pulled manyata on top of him and started caressing her waist

Manyata was shocked but soon started enjoying his caressing

He pulled her for a kiss it was even better than the last nights kiss . soon it reached the point of no return.

manyata came to her senses she backed away

M: iam sorry uday but it is not right

U: its ok princess, iam happy you hold to your culture and not like other girls who would open their legs at the first instant.ok then friends

M: yes friends

They soon chatted of many other things

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Someone was waiting outside looking at the watch

Its 3 hrs since she had gone over to his room

What the hell are they doing

He fumed with disgust

She is such a wh**e

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That brings us to the end of chapter6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited...

This a a great treat 3 chappies together...i loved them to the core ManVeers first kiss was so passionate...i could just imagine it...*dreaming ManVeer*
btw i am a bit confused did they have sex that night...are they gf/bf or friends i am confused...
over all the chapters were amazing...this rohan is after manyatas wealth...OMG this sharky is a bit scary...he after my ManVeer... 😔
update soon...
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW Andy,
I just read chapters 4/5/6 ... it was fantastic. SO INTERESTING. Because of Manyata ... Uday's life is also in danger. Rohan turned out to be a traitor😲 ... hope he is found out soon!!!
Please update soon,
I'm dying to read more!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum chapters. it shoukd be brijraj/ jai who had assigned mr shark to kill manyata. ty so much for giving us three nice chapters andy.
cont.soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">WOW Andy,

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<div>I just read chapters 4/5/6 ... it was fantastic. SO INTERESTING. Because of Manyata ... Uday's life is also in danger. Rohan turned out to be a traitor😲 ... hope he is found out soon!!!


Please update soon,

I'm dying to read more!!!
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navi a small comment
is the chappy boring ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: andy.a


navi a small comment
is the chappy boring ?

WHATShocked!!!! Are u serious???
It's NOT boring ... not at all !!!
Why???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...



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<font color="#ff0000" size="4">WHAT😲!!!! Are u serious???</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">It's NOT boring ... not at all !!!</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="4">Why???</font>


i felt that seeing ur short comment maybe you must have felt it so
sorry sorry sorry my mistake wanted ur analysis on manveer scenes it is the first time iam writing such scenes
once again a very big sorry if i had hurt you
with my silly question

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