'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 8

Originally posted by: preya_radev

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Chapter 4

Rohan was feeling very elated remembering the call he had got that morning.

Person: the job is done, he is no more

Rohan: really mr shark, what about the body?

Ms: that has being taken care of, he is buried rather melted into a steel cuboid

R: that's nice,so

Ms:( cutting in between), the remaining balance should be posted in my account in 2 hrs, is that clear, I don't have time for pleasantries

R: that will be done,

R: there may be one more job coming up

Ms: ok ,let me know the time and person

Saying this Mr. shark had cut the phone

His secretary had entered the office to give him a file.

S: sir, this is the file you requested, the naidu's file

R: ok dear

Rohan took the file and went to mayatas cabin. He was having conversation with manyata when that uday had entered, and manyata had excused themselves.he was totally shocked, she had put him out for some idiot she met 2 weeks back

Later when he had felt that uday had left, he went to meet her, only to find an empty cabin

Her secretary informed him,that manyata had gone out with uday. He was fuming with anger, as he looked of manyatas cabin he say that they had arrived,he went down to confront them

U: so princess, here we are back, I have a dream project- to start a school for illerates in this city,

I just want to educate those underprivileged kids who are brilliant but don't have money they will be given full scholarships and if they are interested a job in my group of companies

M: that's wonderful, is this venture under partnership or ?

U: no its my private interest

M: if your considering a joint deal then iam ready , even I want to do something for these kids

U: but this venture wonnt bring you any profits

M: see I may be seen as others a a bit** in business. That doesn't mean iam bad or I am not interested in helping the poor. Pls uday pls let me to join this venture

R: who had just come that time, uday don't you think yur car is a bit out dated ,man yur a big business king and your riding this?

U: a bit hurt, I love this car so didn't change it, just because your rich that doesn't mean I need to display it right?

M: right, so we havea deal na

U: yes

Rohan was burning with hatred watching uday leave

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Uday was riding his car when he saw a lady selling roses he remembered manyata, so he parked the car and went to buy a bouquet of red roses. Ha was looking for the perfect one when his instinct said that he was in danger, he looked up he saw a speeding truck(that truck you saw in the ending part of final destination) he immediately jumped into the store by the side shattering its window. The truck crushed his car and hit the flower stall then it quickly left the place. A lot of people gathered around there as uday looked he saw his favorite car crushed into rubble and and the flower lady lying in a pool of blood ,if uday had not moved he too would have died

Mr shark anger knew no bounds, the person was still alive, no he woudnt accept defeat so fast

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Its was late evening Manyata was speaking to her lawyer mr kapoor about her will

M: so I want you to draft a new will, once if I die unmarried 25% of this fortune will go to my family and the rest to charity unlike the present will that gives the entire lumpsum to my family' and remember a word out and you are dismissed, is that clear

Uday knocked the door

M: yes, oh its you uday come in come in

U: iam not disturbing any meeting no?

M: no uday, mr kapoor you can leave

M: oh uday what happened to your face?these plasters

U: nothing to worry its just a small accident

M: I feel sooo sorry

Saying this she stoked udays cheeks uday felt a strange happiness it was the first time that he was feeling this way. He say undiluted love for him in her eyes

U: composing himself. I came to show some slides of the school we are planning to build

they sat and watched the slides but no one was actually watching it as they felt an dying thirst for each other, the electric currents passing between them was attracting them. They slowly came near, the darkness around aiding them soon they were in each others embrace

manveer shared a beautiful eyelock

uday held her slender waist and manyata held his neck

udays head lowered to meey manyatas pink lips

manyata blushed and closed her eyes anticipating that heavenly moment

she felt his hot breath on her neck

soon that moment came its was first a slow kiss as each was looking in to the oyhers reaction soon it turned too passionate that it burned the office down they moved towards the coach

uday's hand went under manyatas shirt and started moving up

manyata was busy trying to remove udays shirt button

both were in the seventh heaven

they continued to kiss each other on the neck ''''

uday started to lift manyatas skirt and manyata was kissing udays chest when

suddenly the lights went on

both were shocked . facung them was a cleary shocked rohan, he had come to pick manyata home ,

rohan was too shocked seeing the scene in front of him

r: sorry and he excused himself and left the room

manyata and uday separated soon, both were embarresed to look into each others eyes, uday quickly put his shirt buttons and left the room

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rohan was boiling with anger

this uday he is behind my girl

my riches ,that is to be mine after I marry her

no he must die

I want him dead

Manyata is and will be only mine

He took his phone and dialed a number

Ms: hallo

R: mr shark I have an assignment for you; name uday veer

The photo will be sent soon ,it must be done immediately

Ms: ok

Rohan was happy he was so elated

He called another number

R: anna now I want you here

A: now?

R: yes come soon and entertain me darling

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That bring us to the end of the chapter

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Originally posted by: andy.a

thank you for your reply

yes uday is not a royal here

mr shark is angry that his plan is being affected

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

andy I guess even u must have heard about the rule of DEK forum getting locked, we stil have 3 months but I have a humble request please by the end of these 3 months try to move your ff to the fan fiction section so that we could read this ff😊. Talk to the current mods of dek, 'LoveRosh' and 'ZoyaAsadKhan' (the other mods are no longer active)to move your this ff thread to fan fiction section.

even i heard about it

Originally posted by: andy.a

even i heard about it

iam trying to end this in about 4 updates

most probably by this month

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">OMG really andy😕, is the rule the reason for ur rushing with theseupdates. I mean we still have 3 months, so u can take it slow😕. Anyways its ur decision, but I love reading your work😊and wish to read more from you</font>

ok iam not rushing my update
i will try to slow down
i have my final degree exams coming up
now i get some time so i am updating
but till now i havent rushed
thank you for liking my story

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Andy the update wasfabulouslyand soeventfultoo👏, loved it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: The curtain raiser: Finallythe real culprit is revealed and it is Rohan, though I has doubts on him as well after Mr Sharma's suddendisappearancebut this revelation did come as a shock. He is planning to marry M and get her property, but then why did he assign Mr shark to kill her😕. I mean If irememberright then it was MR shark who said he will take 3 months to complete this work, so if Rohan had plans to marry M and then kill her, then this 3monthstime constraint should have been placed by rohan right?😕And seriouly what an idiot Roahn is, he isnt even aware that the killer whom he has hired is lusting over M🤢</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: UV in danger:😲😲OMG now UV is also in danger, Rohan is planning to get UV killed as well. thankgod UV is smart enough for the killer and her saved himself from his first attack. Again I have a doubt, Rohan has not yet asked UV to get killed then why is Mr shark behind him. Does he think that the car which tried to kill Mpreviouslywas sent by UV or something.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 3: hot hot manveer😳😳☺️: OMG I never expected that we would be getting manveer so soon and such a hot scene between them right in 4th update. But as u said u r trying to end this soon😕.The manveer scene was oosome, and gosh Rohan witnessed their make out session😡. Doesnt he know how to knock?😡.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 4: MR Shark's nexttargetUV: Gosh now Mr Shark is hired to finish off UV, well I'm sure accepting this task is going to be MR shark's first and last mistake😉😆,becauseUV is our hero😳😳, butseriouslythis rohan is also sick, he is planning to marry M for money and also calling somerandomgirl to ease him out of his tension🤢</font>

thank you chitra for this long comment
first some one in manyatas family strictly family wants manyata dead as her will allows them to get the whole riches
rohan doent know abt this he is also behind manyata to make her his wife just for her riches he doesnt know abt the other deal
uday was in danger because mr shark was irritated with uday saving manyata and becoming close to her and wanted to kill him
its only later that day rohan arranged to kill uday so a double reason for mr shark to finish uday
manveer loves each other dearly it was just accidental it was dark and their hearts took control of their brains
hope this satisfies ur doubts
more clarity will come in the chapters ahead

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Ok all my doubts cleared😆, my comment must have been a full on questionpaperfor u right .sorry for that</font>

no dear i just love your comments
it allows to know how my readers understand my story
it helps to improve my story