'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 7

Originally posted by: huma12.

aawsssmmm andy babyyy 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -Zina-

O My God this Mr. shark is literally after manyata i hate him Kutta Kamina. Bechari manyata ko marnay lga tha lekin Thank God Uday nay bacha liya.
I knew i knew Uday was planning something good for manyata. Aww i loved their date.
Update Soon.
ThanX 4 pm.

Originally posted by: anushruthi

AWESOME Andy

this SS is very good

so much suspense

well written dear

do cont soon

thanks 4 de PM

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I think m in a full reader mood today...😉jus read all three parts together, it's really a mysterious FF..n I love mysteries.😳</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Beautifully written n great characterization..👏👏👏</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">😲Somebody paid to Mr. Shark to kill Manyata OMG...</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I think that person was Manyata's step dad, I've a feeling or may be Rohan...😳</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Uday n Manyata's convo was nice.😳J is really cute in this FF, thanks for making her a positive character here but I don't like this Rohan..🤢</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Mr. Shark a brutal Killer..who wants to kill Manyata ...</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">n now wants to harm Uday also..</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Great updates Andy,👏mysterious but very well written..👍🏼</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for the wonderful updates.😊</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Do update ASAP.😛</font>

<font color="#000099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Good work.🤗</font>

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Originally posted by: khalilshahista

Awesome update dear.

Like the cute date uday had planned

This mr shark is evil personified.

Thanks 4 pm. nice thriller you have going on.

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Loved the update andy😳😳, it was so manveerlicious ☺️. Uday is so naughty, but I like this simple, down-to-earth and humble UV😛, UV here is not a royal right?

Part 1: UV style suprise in store 😳: OMG what a surprise, though I though Business ke bahane he is finding ways to get close to M, but here he directly took her to a date on the pretense of a business deal 😳😳, and the place was also amazing 😳😳

Part 2: Redefining ruthlessness🤢: sick sick and sick! This is the only word that comes to my mind now. This Mr Shark needs medical attention, pura pagal hai yeh.😡. Every inch of his oozes devilry. The brutality with which he killed Mr Sharma was so creepy,very wonderfully depicted andy 👏. You have created a character who is an epitome of devil. Gosh he is all ready to bed M the first chance he gets😡. I so want Uday to save M from his imagined obnoxious touture of whips and chains 🤢.

Part 3: Another victim of the psychopath: Gosh another mystery, who is this now trying to kill M, or was it just a casual driver trying to zoom off in the road. But whatever it is he is so dead now. This makes me wonder will this killer also try to kill Uday, if UV will get all close and intimate to M, and this killer will be keeping an eye on all their moves.😕. I hope Uday saves himself and M .

Thanks for a PM andy, loved the chapter 👏👏, continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">OMG Andy ... that was BRILLIANT👏.

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I knew Uday was planning something special and romantic for Manyata😳. Their date was too cute ... and the setting - JUST PERFECT.

Mr Shark is getting creepier by the update🤢. He is EVIL personified!!! The way he killed Mr Sharma😲 ... was terrifying!!! That was very well written Dear .

Now who is this 2nd person that's trying to kill Manyata😡???

If I didn't love Uday so much😉 ... I'd say it's him , because he excused himself to go to the wash-room ... in that time he may have phoned somebody and set up that "accident" - then he can save her and play "hero" . Anyway - whoever that driver was ... his "end" is nearing😆. He will be Mr Shark's next victim😈 & I'm waiting for that.

Update soon Andy,

I'm getting very addicted to this SS!!!

Thanks for the PM😊.

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