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anushruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Triple update
great I loved it superb updates
this Rohan he is after M ' s fortune
i hate him
Love UV !!! ( dont v all ?😉)
do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks andy for 3 awesome chapters
One after another. really enjoyed it.
Written very well from the spontaneous
First kiss 2 finding out rohan is evil
And that mr shark... needs 2 to hanged to death, lol
Love the mystery. keep it up and thanks 4 pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Triple update

great I loved it superb updates
this Rohan he is after M ' s fortune
i hate him
Love UV !!! ( dont v all ?😉)
do cont soon

thank you dear😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khalilshahista

Thanks andy for 3 awesome chapters

One after another. really enjoyed it.
Written very well from the spontaneous
First kiss 2 finding out rohan is evil
And that mr shark... needs 2 to hanged to death, lol
Love the mystery. keep it up and thanks 4 pm.
Continue soon.

thank you dear
happy that you liked the updates
mr shark will not be hanged as something else is in store for him
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 7 "DANCING WITH MR DEATH"

Manyata, uday and Rohan were discussing about the new project ' the school for illiterates. Rohan after much persuation from manyata agreed to invest 1 crore for the development of the school.

U: the construction must start in about a month. We need to finish construction in about a year

M: ranpat builders have agreed to construct the builing , they are asking an advance of 25 lakhs

R: that can be done; the advertising will be done by my company

U: that is a good idea it will reduce the effective cost of this venture

They were busy talking when there was a knock on the door. Manyata asks the person to enter. A tall man in his 30's, dark, tall and well built, with a killer look on his face entered

M: oh , its you mr ajay sinha, what brings you here?

A: manyata, still irritated with me for stealing your last deal,(noticing others)am I disturbing any private meeting eh?

M: no

A: oh my good friend uday; how are you?😆

They share a hug

U: long time since I saw you, so how is everyone at home?

A: they are fine

M: you know each other?

A: then what he is my childhood buddy

U: ya we were good friends

A: oh rohan, you have put on some weight

R: so its time to hit the gym

A: guys I just came to invite youall for a party at my restobar"samanta" .its just a ordinary party so no dress codes. Everyday we work hard so why not spent sometime enjoying life, carefree and full of drinks and cute girls and manyata for you hot boys like me

M: that is a good idea, iam in

U: so am i

R: even I am ready

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Manyata was getting ready for the party . she wore a beautiful black dress that fitted her curves well, she left her hair free .she looked just gorgeous

Uday and rohan were waiting for her , as she descended down the stairs both their eyes popped out

she just looked their open mouths looking her

m: (waving her hands in front of them)hallo, where are both of you

u: you look gorgeous princess

r: you are so stunning

m: enough of this praise lets get going😳

uday took the wheel, rohan sat on uday's side and manyata on the back

the listened to songs and joked. Anybody watching them at the road would feel that they were college students enjoying out and not prominent business tycoons

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mr shark got ready. Today was a BIG DAY

he wore his best suit a brown colour one , he looked like perfect gentleman, handsome and well built

today was HIS DAY, THE BIG DAY

the moment he heard manyata was going for a party and there would be a lot of people, he decided to join the company. The people around would be a perfect cover. If he was lucky he would be able to dance with manyata, their bodies may touch during that dance. He looked at himself in the mirror. He looked perfect. He was VERY VERY HAPPY as he drove away, singing songs

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The party was a perfect place for youngsters to hang out . The dj's played all the popular tunes and youngsters were enjoying themselves. Manyata and rohan sat on a table decorated with white satin and a rose boul at the centre. Udayhad gone to get their drinks

Mr shark saw her seated on the table, she looked so mouthwatering, delicious , he decided to go to that table

Ajay approached that table were manyata was seated , he looked at manyata and said

A: manyata, you look so breathtakingly beautiful

M: thanks

Uday reached the table and placed the drinks on the table

U: it is a nice party ajay

A: thanks , manyata will you dance with me

M: sure

A: guys, you too join us for the dance

Uday and rohan too join the crowd dancing on the floor

The dj was playing a fast number everyone was dancing irrespective of of their partners.

Mr shark felt this was the perfect opportunity for their first dance. He soon moved close towards her .she was so involved in dancing that she didn't notice his presence. Soon both were dancing wildly to the hit number ,his hands at times touching her waist and arms they did a twirl and manyata landed in his hands . manyata soon moves out of his hands

The dj changed the tune to a slow number and asked them to form pairs . manyata was paired with mr shark

Mr shark placed one hand on her slender waist and in the other hand took her hand.manyata placed one hand on his shoulder

They started dancing to the tunes of the song, each move he pulled her close to him, though manyata kept backing of. She was not comfortable dancing this close. But he didn't accept defeat so fast and pulled her close and danced. Soon he pulled her away from the crowd , all were busy dancing that they didn't notice their absence. Manyata continued to protest 😡 but then he pushed her to a dark corner of the dance floor. He started kissing her neck passionately .manyata was trying to push him away but failed he continued to stoke her back and kissed her cheeks. Manyata pushed him and went away. This was ENOUGH FOR NOW. A PROMO BEFORE THE ACTUAL SHOW

Manyata later sat down , uday approached her, he had finished dancing with a sexy hot girl

U: princess

M: what was that for?

U: what princess, the dance, I really enjoyed it. My partner was a mirch masala

M: uday you so shameless😲

U: I know princess , I know😉

M: that ajay was disgusting😡

U: why?

M: nothing I hate his attitude

They then went for a dance and later midnight they returned home

Manyata had clearly enjoyed her time

Uday had to enjoyed his time

So did rohan and ajit

Last but not the least our MR SHARK TO ENJOYED HIS DAY

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Promo:

Police officer: man I want you to identify the body. It may be'''''..

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Manyata walked along with him to the crime scene. She just couldn't face the scene in front of her

Lying in a blood pool was a body

its body severed from its head

the veins of the arms were severed

fingers cut away from the body

witnessing this horrid scene in front of her she held the hand of her best friend and let out a short cry

UDDAAAYYY

And she fainted

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Guys you have reached the end of another chapter

So how was it?😉

The promo especially

Mr sharks cruality is rubbing by me so I decided to murder" you know who"

If you guys don't want this scene do tell me

If majority wants this scence we will go by this story plot

Press the like button as each vote and each comment counts😃

Less likes mean uday will remain dead or else I will drop this

Do give your comments please

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting update ...
Is Ajay Mr.Shark ??
de suspense is great
Kya promo tha !!
Plz dont kill Uday ...
please save him


Thanks for de PM do cont soon
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update bt plz dont kill uday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was amzing!
dont kill uday! instead kill that rohan!
i have a feeling that mr.shark is ajay!
continue soon and plz pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter Andy. I don't like this Ajay (sorry I dont have a reason for the dislike). The party scene was great but MR Shark ... is giving me the creeps😡. He called Manyata "mouth-watering & delicious" ... DID HE THINK SHE WAS A PLATE OF BREYANI😆??? Mr Shark dancing with Manyata , then taking her into a corner and getting "cosy" with her, was ... DISGUSTING. This character YOU created Andy is a REAL MONSTER🤢 !!! I don't know if he's more scary or u are😕 ... because all his evil deeds is coming from your head😉!!!
Good job with this update Dear 👍🏼.
PLEASE DON'T KILL UDAY😭😭😭!!!
Thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. But please don't kill uday. And mr. Shark is disgusting.;->

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