'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 10

Originally posted by: andy.a

i felt that seeing ur short comment maybe you must have felt it so
sorry sorry sorry my mistake wanted ur analysis on manveer scenes it is the first time iam writing such scenes
once again a very big sorry if i had hurt you
with my silly question

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font size="3">T<font color="#0000ff">here's 2 reasons for the short comment ( & both has nothing to do with your story being boring) :</font></font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">1) after hearing the news about the forums lock-down ... I'm feeling extremely depressed😭!!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">2) my net is running terribly slow 😡!!!</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">See ... no fault of yours OR your updates😉. </font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">I enjoyed all the chapters and I loved the Manveer scenes😳. </font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">PS ...JUST SO U KNOW ... if there's something I don't like - I WOULD TELL U as I am a very straight forward person😃.</font>

Originally posted by: andy.a

thank you navi
me and my stupid doubts

Originally posted by: Archi02

Very nice. Loved them.

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

nice chaps...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">WOW Andy,

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<div>I just read chapters 4/5/6 ... it was fantastic. SO INTERESTING. Because of Manyata ... Uday's life is also in danger. Rohan turned out to be a traitor😲 ... hope he is found out soon!!!

Please update soon,

I'm dying to read more!!!

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Originally posted by: arna753

<font color="#660000">awesum chapters. it shoukd be brijraj/ jai who had assigned mr shark to kill manyata. ty so much for giving us three nice chapters andy.</font>

<font color="#660000">cont.soon.</font>

Originally posted by: -Zina-

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wah ka bat 3-3 aik sath
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This a a great treat 3 chappies together...i loved them to the core ManVeers first kiss was so passionate...i could just imagine it...*dreaming ManVeer*
btw i am a bit confused did they have sex that night...are they gf/bf or friends i am confused...
over all the chapters were amazing...this rohan is after manyatas wealth...OMG this sharky is a bit scary...he after my ManVeer... 😔
update soon...

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Hey andy🤗, today I guess I have hit some jackpot I am getting amazing updates from one after the other😆😛.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Chapter 5:</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: Agitated Mr shark: Lol it feels so good to see this polished, composed killer who always thinks and plans from his calm mind, getting all angry andgoofedup😆, here is when he will make mistakes. Mr Shark is like anencyclopedia😆, you name the person and he seems to know every effing thing about that person😕. There seems to be something fishy, was he behind killing off UV's parents too or is it a general info that he knows about. Cant wait to see this unfold.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: Manyata in Udayveer dreamland: Awww Manyata is so much in love with UV. She's acting like a teenager here😆.The way she was checking her cell phone for some message, and rushing to office and asking about UV's message😳😳made her look so adorable. And someone from her family wants this cute adorable girl dead😡. I have a feeling it is Brijraj. But Manyata is also smart shechangedher will to give just 35% to family and rest of it all to charity😉, nice one intelligent girl she is.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 3: Possessiveprincess: Lol I loved how she mis-interpretedimportant meeting😆, does she evenrealizethat how deep in love she is with Uday😳😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Chapter 6:</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: Manveer in Manveer dreamland:😆😆OMG loved this scene, gosh both of them have not proposed to eachothernor said I Love you, but they are so mad and deeply in love😳😳. I mean here andy Idon'tget this why the "Ok friends then" thing you got, they both know they aremorethanfriends, it is just that they are not comfortable going tooaheadphysically till they name their relationship as it is too soon for both of them, butseriouslyandy that "OK friends" line just cracked me up, it was a like a teenager trying to fix things up that he has messed😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: The Mystery Man: now is this Mr shark who is calling her wh***, and this time he is waiting to finish up UV and somehow Manyatacomingand saving him, or is it rohan . Anyways will wait to see this unfold in the next update😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Loved boththe updates, but andy the 6th chapter was too small, you could have just merged it into chapter 5.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00ff">Andy I just saw another ff of urs, will go andcatchthat up to😆</font>