NEW Part 9 My Avenging Angel- Part11 posted LINK - Page 17

Originally posted by: lilmzsunshine

awww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Firstly, thanks so much for the dedication!!! Your writing calls for raving comments :)

About Part 9 -

His 'I'm sorry' so had me mooning over it!!! I could visualize the whole scene!!!! Silence, and letting it all sink. In her mind, in her heart ... hai...

Beautiful ending. I liked the climax, but I'm glad you didn't drag it. The humor was well placed, and the symbolism between gold-heaven-his rings on Khushi - very well thought out!!!!

Is this series over? If so, I'm looking forward to the next one ;).

I'd write more, but it's 2 in the morning here and kids have an early day tomorrow at school, so gtg. Will come back and read again, and comment again.

Love,

-S

The series is not over, there is a part 10. A lot of people have been asking about Imad and Anjali's love story too. So I am not sure if I will make a separate FF for them. I do think though that it will not have too many readers. So I will have to think about it.

I am glad you liked like one. It is hard to write the climax scenes in a way that speaks to people. The scene is not over yet, we will see how it goes 😊

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

The reunion was typical of Arnav and Khushi. Lots of shouting and swearing and guilt and smirking! Loved it!

And Imad taking care of the baby.. Interesting! :)

Oh I just loved this part, didn't expect the confession so soon but I guess when you almost lose someone you finall realize what's really important to you.