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y.c.yetikaroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

awesome just loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz continue it

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Nandalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Mary! Mary! Mary! This chapter reminded me in part of your other OS, Poolside Love..except this time it was Arnav in the hospital!😆 Khushi's angst and internalizing what had happened to Arnav was very touching! I could totally see this happening on the show as well. I found it interesting that she was being consoled by the Nawab and Dadi rather than her jiji (in fact, Payal is almost a bystander in the entire series...) I also adored the Imad as a father figure to Anisha! Your description of the two of them together was spot on! Beautiful! A blessed baby, indeed!

I would never think Arnav would want to kill himself! He knew it, too...even though he wanted to...his mother would be disappointed...her parents would be disappointed...it was not meant to be! His imagining he's in heaven, see the shot of bright gold-Sunshine😆-- which happens to be his wedding band around her neck...the mangal sutra which was still housed in his pocket...an apology served, and their love declared...what a brilliant way to bring the lovebirds together! I loved that he called her 'Princess Khushi of Awadh'...For she is his Khushi, his happiness! 😊And her emotions were so raw once she got inside the hospital room; what a formidable consort to him in every sense! I almost imagined it was Arnav talking, not Khushi!😆Enjoyed their dialogues thoroughly!

I do hope there is a part 10, even though judging by your note this may not be possible...fingers-crossed! Maybe some cousins for Anisha!?😳 😃

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arhi__4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

awesome and amazing update loved it

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Really incredible update!!

Love is the only thing that tying them together!!

*Sorry for the ubber lates comment but my schedule is getting busier day by day. Easter break isn't going to do much help either!

**I know how it feels to not have people appreciate your work!! take your time in updating but could you please drop off some hints for future!! Please!

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Asmita88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

hey i have gone crazy for looking forward to ur update... plz give was a hint if u are updating or if we are close to persuading tu to update..

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Asmita88
hey i have gone crazy for looking forward to ur update... plz give was a hint if u are updating or if we are close to persuading tu to update..

I put it up for Areeba and you 😊

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2914455

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

A preview of part 10 and some notes for the readers have now been posted. See the link on the first page.

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

awesome update

thank god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! arnav is alright

loved khushi's possessiveness

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Neyha Walia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Good One Mary ! 👏

My heart is swelled with joy!!! Darya knows to twist his arm and make him submit to her desires ! Amazing ! It's very pleasant to see love conquering everything again !

Thank you! 😊

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

OMG OMG OMG

caught up to the FF and i love it love it love and LOVE IT with all my heart and with each and every bone in my body! All the pain and the suffering.. right now my laptop is filled with my tears. The words and the emotions were written so beautifully and are so strong in your stories that im just sniffling like a baby right now.. sorry cant stop the tears.. butanyways this is a masterpiece honestly i just love it.. wow im jut breathless in trying to say all the emotions and everythign right now inside me of the pain yet intense love they have.. and when he had the accident i thought i was gonna die along with khushi. i absolutely loove it!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆 i give this story five stars specially: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!

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