NEW Part 9 My Avenging Angel- Part11 posted LINK - Page 19

Originally posted by: umamashahid

wow i liked it. but a bit too fast recovery of arnav. i mean from i.c.u. direct to dreamland with khushi on him.

continue soon

Originally posted by: iluvarnav

Hey Mary!

How have you been!

Wow! words are not enough to praise this post of yours..

i have not yet read the 10th part but will read after commenting here.

How in the world you came up with this story. Its as good as an alternate version or i should say a better version of what is being aired right now. Yes Anjali does deserve someone who loves her unconditionally too. Both Arnav and Anjali craved for Love their entire life. Anjali was too vocal about this fact and was taken advantage of this, because she always displayed that how much she needed her husband's love. Shyaam had put a blind fold on her eyes just because she wanted to turn a blind eye to every logic as she was geting what she wanted, honey coated lies. She led her life in lies bec she chose to.

Arnav on the other hand was sensible enough to know that need of love will make him weak and vulnerable. He did not want to depend on someone whom he did not know. He turned to Anjali for all the love and support he needed. He did not want to trust himself to any outsider but his heart failed him, it overcame his brain and he suffered. So right he was to build his walls. He got burned as they were breached by Khushi. He burned himself in his insecurities, and his lack of confidence in himself.

Poor duo of bro and sis...

Ohh i so wish that they can heal and start their life afresh. Khushi being the pillar of strength for both of them. She will heal Arnav and he will surrender himself to his Khushi.

I read your story and i ended up writing my own feelings. I am so deeply connected with Arnav and Khushi character that most of my day i keep thinking about them.

Yes, Arnav is, a big pessimist when it comes to relationships and so his decision to commit suicide is justified. I loved your portrayal of Khushi through and through. She is the fire who keeps Arnav alive. She is the guiding light who burns herself to give warmth and light to others. She is Khushi, everyone's life's delight and Arnav's Life itself.

God Bless you Mary because when i read your posts i share my own feelings on this forum as i dont make any posts on this forum.I am a silent reader all of the time except when i comment on your stories.

Thanks again.

Love you.

Nidhi