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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

wow...so many developments in one little part...love Imad's character, got hit pretty quick & playing with Anisha, so cute!

A/K are together... accepting each other!

-Sona

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

I loved it. I am so happy that all is well between them. I loved the inad and baby scene. Please continue soon.

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swara.saxena

@swara.saxena

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

wow!!!! beautiful ending.. finally together!!! 😍

I loved the whole narration with Imad's changed side... He taking the baby and then putting her off to sleep, convo with the baby... Loved tht part a lot!!! 👍🏼

But I wish there were some more dialogues between Anjali and Chotte... I mean it was just Khushi blabbering out with him... wat abt the rest of the family?? 😕

As always thank you for the PM!!! 🤗 I hope you will continue...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: swra.saxena
wow!!!! beautiful ending.. finally together!!! 😍

I loved the whole narration with Imad's changed side... He taking the baby and then putting her off to sleep, convo with the baby... Loved tht part a lot!!! 👍🏼

But I wish there were some more dialogues between Anjali and Chotte... I mean it was just Khushi blabbering out with him... wat abt the rest of the family?? 😕

As always thank you for the PM!!! 🤗 I hope you will continue...

It's not finished yet. Any does a love confession always lead people to think it is the end? Real life starts after that 😊

Everyone asking about the family...remember no other saw him conscious yet.

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Fatuma

@Missbantu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

brilliant update as usual, gotta say love your preview outline, loved our beautiful arhi conversation it was amazing, finally no more hurt feelings.

Edited by Missbantu - 13 years ago

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Aaliya

@Sna1288

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Man u r such a fab writer.. I had a clear picture in my head simpally brilliant 👏 👏

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nyans

@nyans

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Everytime ur updates come n i read i can clearly visualize it ...its lyk m watchin it...hope there isnt anything lyk he is gonna die or sth...omg seriously wont be able to visualize nymore...hehhe..

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

There is nothing like staring death in the face to show you what is truly important in your life!!!! Wonderful chapter!!!

Many thanks for PM

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

This is indeed the best one, Mary.

The image of Imad holding Anjali's infant daughter in his arms,awww, my heart melted.

Arnav even thinking about taking his own life, scary, but I am glad that it was just a passing thought.

I loved the interaction between Arnav and Khushi, thats so real. This is how a real person would react on seeing his or her loved one coming back from the jaws of death.

Thank you for writing this.