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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

plzzz up soon😭😭😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2...



its basically about Mallik family...Gupta family...in the next part...as i want to sum up this first...



Sameer and Dhruv : Gud morning Sir...


Sujal : Gud morning...sit down...waise tu aj aapka off tha...but a new problem is there...a new case has come...n u both r gonna work on it...


u guys might have heared the name of the famous surgeon n dean of Sanjeevani... "Dr. Manek Gupta" well his daughters life is in danger...n u both r gonna protect them...as u r the FBI secret agent...n many dont know abt u guys...so u'll have to look forward that no one harm them...they r after Dr. Manek's money or what other motives they have...n they want it through his daughters...so now its ur tym to show some action...u both r going to India tomorrow...n wll join Sanjeevani as interns...n dont trust on anyone...so i hope u guys dont have any problem wid it...im i clear...


Sameer and Dhruv : yes sir...


Sujal : ok so i'll tell u more about the case as its progresses...waise mere sheron...nalaik bachoon...kya haal hai...


Sameer and Dhruv : Dad... "said together pouting...n sujal laughed loud"




Sujal: kya yaar tum log bhi na...




just then there was a knock on the door...n after getting permission a person entered around sujal's age...he was quite good looking...a bit long hairs...perfectly build body...eyes glittering wid determination...wearing black shirt...wid first few buttons open...n blue jeans...entered wid a file in hand...




Man: gud morning sir...




Sujal: gud morning Rishi...so mein ne jo details mangi thi...sab mil gaye...




Rishi: yes sir...hey bacha party...




Sameer: buddy...hum bacha party nahin hain ok... "he said showing his fake anger"




Dhruv: yeah we r big boys...




Rishi: yeah yeah...i know...big boys..."he said rolling his eyes"




Sujal: guys...u r in my office...infront of my ur senior u r doing all this...




Sameer: bt dad he started this...y he always call us bacha party...




Sujal: ok ok...enough of u guys...so let me remind u..tum log wahan as interns ja rahe ho...so plzz agar gun carry karo tu bhi bohat sambhal kar rehna...kisi ko tum logon pe shak na ho..kyunki zara si baat leak hui...tu may be jo bhi in sab ke peeche hai sawdhan ho jae...got it...




Rishi: waise guys...mujhe ek baat samajh nahin ayi...tum logon ne medicine study kiya...tu y u guys entered FBI..tum log bohat ache doctors ban sakte thae...fir iss field mein kahan se agaye...



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Dhruv : woh kya hai na buddy...mom was a doctor tu we both got influenced by her...unke saath jab hospital jana...n see that hw she treats her patients n all...tu humara bhi mann hua medicine study karne ka...



Sameer : aur fir humein dad ka kaam samajh aya...ke woh kya karte hain...bachpan mein bhi we use to see him doing some research making plans...we liked it...but we know they'll never agree for us to do this...but then after medicine we helped dad in one of his case...so we opt for being a cop...such an amazing job...anyone can get crazy...n i sooo love it...haan woh baat alag hai ke mom ko her dum tension rehta hai...but its quite interesting n u can enhoy doing this...




Rishi: tum do shaitatoon ka tu kaam hi yehi hai...har dum kuch na kuch ulta karna...ok so tum logon ko koi problem nahin hogi na wahan ja ke...as u r already aware of everything...




Sameer: rite buddy...it will be fun doing it...




Sujal: babu i know u love doing this work...n handling difficult cases but i dont want u to repeat wat u did at the tym of Max case...




Rishi: wat he did...


Sujal: this little idiot of mine...got hit by bullet in his chest in order to save me...as that guy Max he was a goon n has stalked some women n we handled that case...i didnt knew that he is gona fire on me...as my back was towards him...n he saw that...n came in front of me...n the bullet hit him...n he was hospitalized for 2 weeks...as the bullet was gone deep inside his chest...bt thnx god nothing serious happened...n Kashish was sooo worried for him...but he doesnt stop doing all those stupid stunts of his...


"he said but wid a fear n he was feeling lump in his throat...eyes filled wid emotions...as he was about to loose his little boy...he still remembered the tym...when their parents died in a car crash...Sameer was just 2.5 years old... n Dhruv 5...Sujal was about to get married to Kasish...in a month or two...but this news broke him...but he has to be strong for his lil bros..who dont even knw wat happened...


their dad Jai Mallik was a FBI cop n he got to know abt some important drug deals gonna happen...n he planned everything to caught them red handed...n in order to not to let him caught them someone failed their car breaks...n Jai n Ananya...died in that car accidents leaving 3 of them alone to face this harsh world...


sujal was not Jai Mallik's son...he was Jai's elder brother son...but after he died Jai adopted him...n educated him as he was not having any children of his own...Ananya also love him alot...n when he was around 18 years old...Dhruv born...n Sujal was sooo happy...that he got a bro to play wid...he love him alot...n then after 2-3 years later...the lil master of the family born..Sameer..apple of everyone's eye...


all love him alot...n pamper him as well...during this tym...Sujal met Kashish n it was like love at first sight...they were in the same college...same class...they become friends...then best friends...n then it turned into love...Jai n Ananya also love Kashish alot...n after the courtship of around 5 years...they thought to get married...


Kashish parents were more than happy...to have Sujal as their son in law...but they want to become something first...n then get married to their daughter...so they did their engagment...Kashish loved both Sameer and Dhruv alot...but Sameer more...as he was the small one...n babu for everyone...they love him alot...


but destiny played its game...here Sujal joined FBI...n on the other side..Jai n Ananya died...before breathing the last breath..Ananya took promise from Sujal...to take care of
Sameer and Dhruv ...as they r so small n would never be able to understood...wat happened wid them...n Sujal promised to take care of them as their own children...


Sujal was completely broken...he lost his parents...once again...n he was left wid a huge responsibilty...Kashish became his strength...n promised never to leave his side...n will be there for him always...


they got married as Kashish was amandant to take care of the lil boys...though her parents were lil sad abt her decision as they want her to give some more tym to sujal to settle down...but no she just want to get married to Sujal...




after wedding...Kashish took care of the boys n joined Sanjeevani...n Sujal started his work in FBI...


Sameer and Dhruv use to call them bhai n bhabhi...where as for Dhruv...she was his bha...as he couldnt say bhabhi...but then he started calling her mom...she was soo happy...n told Dhruv also to call him mom n sujal dad...they decided not to have any baby...as
Sameer and Dhruv might feel left out...n from that day onwards...Sujal n Kashish r their parents...n loved them more than anything...nothing in this world is more sweet n beautiful...then the relationship they all shared...


Sameer and Dhruv knew abt their parents...n also knew SK r their bhai - bhabhi...but that was the beauty of their relation...SK always were more than parents for them...there to help them in studies...sports...n even if Sameer fight wid one or the other guy...who tease his elder bro...there to support them..when they feel down...Sujal was their best buddy...n Kashish more than a mom..."




some one click infront of Sujal..n he came out of his thoughts...



Sameer: dad...kya sochne lage...



Dhruv: kya hua dad...r u alrite...



Sujal: kuch nahin babu...Dhruv...im fine...ghar chalna hai...yah yahi rehna hai...



Rishi: r u alrite...



Sujal: im fine yaar...dont worry...



Rishi: Sameer he is rite...dont do something stupid ok...




'n Sameer nodded...n wid that they moved out of the office...to go home...again all three of them...doing race...ending up Sameer as first again...coz of his shortcuts...




he went inside n hug his mom from back who was busy cooking food for them...



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Kashsih: agaye babu...woh donno kahan hain...




Sameer: atey hoon gae mom...aj fir har gaye... 'he said n kissed her cheek...where as she gently patted his face...widout turning n doing her work...' love u mom...



Kash: luv u too babu...




Sujal: hey that not fair...meri biwi hai,...chal hat... "he said..entering wid Dhruv"




Sameer: kyun dad jealous haan... "he said smirking"



Dhruv: Sameer sudhar ja tu samjha...



Sameer: tu mein bigda kahan hoon...waise pata hai mom...bhai mujhe bol rahe thae...that he is gonna get his dream gal...n he also dreams abt her...




wat he said...yeah...sweet...confident...helpful...bubbly... "he was also moving aside...coz he know wats coming next..."




Dhruv he was embarassed...n shocked hearing him..." ache bache tu rukh tujhe mein batata hoon...n the cat - mouse game begin...wid Dhruv chasing Sameer...hitting him wid cushions...




Kash: ok guys enough...chalo go fresh up...n come for lunch...




after sometym all three come back down...n settled on the dinning table...wich was laid wid all thei favorite food items...




Sujal: Sameer Dhruv ..u'll get ur tickets from the airport only...so after lunch...pack ur bags...u have flight at 9 in the evening...




Kash: where they r going... " n sujal explained her everything..." Babu...u know... "she couldnt find words to say..."




Sameer: i know mom dont worry...aisa waisa kuch nahin karunga...



Dhruv: dont worry mom mein hoon na...isko line pe rakhoon ga...




n then they had their lunch...wid teasing...pulling each other leg...doing masti...n all...


Sameer and Dhruv ..packed their packs...n after bidding bye to their parents...board the flight to Mumbai...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
ha i got it first,ise kehte h udate hue panchi k par ginna...ha ha ha just kidding
ok the update was mast...so kash n sujal r bhai n bahbhi of sam n dhruv...ho reality
loved convo of all four in office n sam got shot while saving his bro cum dad...oh ho hero ji hero...
this whole update was full of only mallik's but plz let us knew about our heroine in next part...specially her name,are hero a gaya to uski heroine bhi toh ani chahiye na...jaldi se
update soon
luv u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
loved it. what a cute family.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Interesting concept!
I just read the other Saviour with Arhi.I am a little confused. Is there any link between this two story? i mean Kashishi and Sujal are there in both the stories.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice update
actualy i loved this ud
i liked the past segment vry much
such a sweet n small family
sujal n kashish not having their own child becoz of sam n dhruv
so sweet...i like the name babu
lovely update
so hmare 2 sher india ja rhe h
ud soon
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Amazing👏
Loved it..
Thanks for the PM..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Brilliant chapter!! Loved it!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
beautiful update!!
liked whole part!!
read story of sujal n kashish n all
sujal n kashish made gr8 sacrifice!!
loved bonding between all
loved rishi calling both as bachha party
n babu name is too cute for rt!!
so our saviour going to meet gals!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@anumeha_rajat: Awesum n fantastic!!!!!!😊

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