|RT-MC FF|Saviour...|Part 2|Page 6|Pm l8r|24/8/12

Hi guys...

i know some of u have read this story..but i thought why not to have it in our RT-MC version as well..

so i really hope u guys liked it.

Saviour...

Index

Part 1..page 3..

Part 2...page 6...

Prologue

Mumbai sapnon ki nagari...jahan har kisi ke sapne sakar hote hain...har koi apni hi duniya mein masroof (busy) hai...kisi ko kisi ki koi fikar nahin...koi jiye mare kisi ko is se koi lena dena nahin...har samay har waqt har koi bas apni manzil tak pohnche ki jaldi mein hai...

isse shahir Mumbai mein hai ek jagah...jahan har koi tayar hai dosre ki madad ke liye...ap bhi chal kar dekhna chahiyen gae...tu lets go...

We can a beautifully architecture building...the area around is fully covered wid flowers n grass...on one side their is parking area...n the other has basketball court...

the main entrance of the building is beautifully build making it more exotic with its huge n large glass...main people are running here n there...men n women are going in n coming out...a completely different atmosphere is there...

the lobby n reception area is furnished wid orange shaded couches n the gal behind the desk on reception is busy guiding people were to go n also taking phone calls...

men n women wearing white coats r running here n there dealing wid people helping them...the pungent smell of medicine is making the atmosphere more that of the hospital...

that's wat it is...hospital...SANJEEVANI...

the men n women in white coat are the doctors who r running to help ppl...n to give them proper medicine...

today the climate is bit cloudy...n seems like its gonna rain soon...all the doctors busy going their duties n soon its tym for them to leave as it already 8 pm n they should go home to come again next day for their dutoes...we can see someone standing near the entrance of Sanjeevani...wearing black long shoes n pants...wid black overcoat and a hat...he is looking for someone...but when he see four ppl coming out of Sanjeevani...he hid himself behind the car n keep his eye on them...

the four ppl came out...3 gals n 1 boy...they exchanged pleasantries...biding gudbye...move to their respective cars to go home...2 in one car n the boy n gal in another...

After the left the man come out n took his cell fone calling someone...

the bell ringed n someone picked the fone...

its completely dark n nothing can be seen...the person was sitting on a rocking chair n was rocking it back n forth...

Man in black at Sanjeevani : Sir gals just left from here may be going home...

Boss: ok gr88...keep ur eyes on them...i want them at any cost...did u get that "he shouted...

Man: y...ye...yes Sir 'he answered afraid from his masters anger...

Boss: Manek Gupta now i will see who is gonna save ur daughters from my clutches "n laugh an evil laugh"

waiting for ur comments...

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Originally posted by: ridzzi

nice start...loved the prologue sounds interesting,,,,,,,,,,,,,👏

loved your city discription,,,,,,,,,,,,,so someone is behind our mugs,,,,,,,,,are yaar story suru hui nahi ki villians a gaye,,,,,,,,,,,,gadhe,,,,,,,,,,,

continue soon...

luv u...😊

thanks alot dear..

glad u liked...

thnx for the lovely comments..

arey dont worry our hero is there to save his heroine...

Originally posted by: Freethinker

nice part...

thanks alot dear..

glad u liked...

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di, jo apne sabse pehle mumbai ka description diya na, usese ek dum spirit aa gyi mujhe,
ek serials wali,
strting bhott achi hoi h...

hmm..
tho we a sanjeevani here...
doctors h yaani humare hero heroine,,
cute lagte h aise rtmc...

o no, yeh ganda man kaun h, he is behind some gals,
kahin unme se ek humari mugz tho nhi...

o no, jaldi se next part ud kijiye plz...

thanks alot dear..

glad u liked...

well cant say much now..

next part will explain it all..

next part coming...