SwaRon OS - The Perfect Read - Page 7

Originally posted by: swaron_ss

Please write the second part to it.
You said you will

Originally posted by: rani102

thanks😊

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Okay..stil a few RES i see :(

IF you guys comment soon enough may be..may be i will write the next part with Swayam's POV but no promises and it will be only after Dec 18th :)

Thanks Sudha. I'll be surely waiting for it. Btw, where did all the 'Le Grand Vault' makers disappear? Have Rafi, Nidhi and Shalini left IF?

Indeed an unusual piece f work frm ur side yet i dnt thnk i can xpress in words how brilliant dis is! I cud go on nd on prasing dis OS!! Even though d start was painful, ur writing always leaves a soothing effect n me nd today was no diff! It crushed my heart to read d following part -
Even today she looked for answers to her existence, it's been a complete year she did anything that can be remotely called living, all she did the past year was to survive every passing second. Ever since she got back from Delhi, she did everything in her power to find him then later forget him and then finally kill him out of her life.
Lovd how u described dis part -
She heard the music alright, but
today she was dancing in sync with
his heartbeats promising the
promise she made but her body
being the weaker of the two, was
starting to give up!
Dis was my fav part frm d OS -
His touch and presence crushed
her insecurities like a dry autumn
leaf, his love gave her the colors
like the dropping temperature to
the trees and she melted in his
embrace like the first snow at its
place.
Dis part was epic -
Tears were the only answer she had
to all those questions her active
mind raised, her heart failing to do
the job the eyes dwelled by. How
she wished her tears could take the
form of words and reach his heart.
Nd u jst nailed it wid d end -
Interesting read, the voice said,
flashing his signature smile, she
stood their fearing it be the work
of her heart with reluctance
fumbling at her fingers she moved
them ahead and when she hit the
point, the touch caressed her.
Nd dis was d moment of truth -
All she did was flipped through me
hardly reading the lines but
reading between the lines and
essaying the meaning to her self,
book, her life.
By d end f it i was lyk woooaah wat a piece f writing! In love wid ur writing babes! Kip writing dis mindblowingly 4evr :D
Wil u add a next part to it? I hope u do :)