SwaRon OS - The Perfect Read - Page 3

Sudhz you are back with an OS with a difference🤗Yaar even before sending pmz i had read your OS but couldnt make head or tails out of it. But today i came in read your OS and lo

beautiful work sudha...speechless...the emotions wre so strongly depicted...cud feel the pain...this is who actually swaron is all about...hope they at least show one percent of this depth...the inner turmoil what you have presented for sharon...makes me believe yess...sharon do cares abt swayam...vch i dint felt during the last swaron scenes...felt it so haphazard...now dont want sharon to get all punishment sorta thingiee...but these kind of inner conflicts is of sharon and it shud be shown...which was neglected...

beautiful OS sudha...plzzz cud you continue

Sudha di..M really sorry for the late reply I just got back from college

This was just AMAZING..That's the only word I can use for this..It was beautifully written..U included all those dialogues said by them. And you made it so believable and natural. Just loved it. Sharon's pain was evident in this one! Wow 👏

Thanks for the PM 😊
Do PM me next time as well 😛

RES, read it but could not comment..now also half asleep..will UN-RES ASAP!..cnt leave such a beautiful peice of work :)

Originally posted by: Rutu

RES

UNRES

Sudha 🤗this piece was indeed different from your other works,I really loved the way you started the update with Sharon reading the lines from the novel and she was hardly interested doing the same, but still a unusual way to start the update. Me like it The way the update was formatted with the series of events , took me time to have a hold on it. You nicely described Sharon's inhibitions, her denial in the beginning and overall how much did she miss Swayam. And also loved the 'the end part' and yes it was indeed the new beginning. Fab work!!

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

hush now i can breath a sigh of relief!!
sudha sudha sudha!! 🤗
i am so happy that you didnt stop and i got to see this OS!!😳
your crazy idea is pretty creative ...i liked it!!👍🏼
wonderful...ok now i am short on words..so bear me till the end!
the way you described sharon's journey till her seat ...the thoughts...wooowww
super nice!!
and the way you described the SwaRon break-up in words!!OMG!this was like a PERFECT description i've ever read!!till the goodbye 😳
He carried her to the car and whispered in her ears, please don't keep me waiting for long.
awww 😳😳😳

She got in the back seat and raised the sad window, which took away the best view of her life, the last view to her life.
ONE OF THE BEST LINE WRITTEN BY YOU!!oh!gosh!!am in love with this!!
the DEEP content which it has got makes me 😭😭 to the CORE!!
n then what happened during the DANCE to THE MOMENT!!😳
lovely description !!
"Your Promise", she reasoned
awww sharon i love you more!! 😳😳😳
Swayam Shikawat is important to Sharon Rai Prakash and always was and will be. Her emotions echoed the place and reached his, breaking his reluctance as he took her in a loving embrace.

How she wished her tears could take the form of words and reach his heart.
:') 😭😭
The smile acted as her personal drug to soften the rough surface of all her loss at love at once. ❤️
lovely OS sudha...though a crazy one...and a new SwaRon with more of Sharon's POV!!your writing skills are way awesome sudha 👏⭐️
beautiful WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!can be the word for this PERFECT OS!!
wonderful!!please i need the UPDATE OF THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!SOON!!if you werent planning for one...now you have to!! it's a request!please sudha..n i didnt even think you'll go into editing...come soon with other sudha-licious WORKS!!!please please dont leave writing and i am there to remind you about this ..i know i didnt remind all this time.but from now i will!!😳
i guess this OS was my PERFECT READ!!😳

Originally posted by: sandhu89

very nice os...keep it up