SwaRon OS - The Perfect Read

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Amazing...very beautifully written...u have described sharon's pov very perfectly.

Thnx for pm.

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Priyambada Subudhi

@pri_tanvi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Amazing...sharon's pov beautifully described😊

sorry for being late

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Sudha this was amazing..

Loved the feel...

The way the POV was stated and how she missed Swayam..was really worth reading..

Thanks for pm..

Sorry for delay in readinng..

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

So I finally read.

You exhibit creative genius and a desire to incorporate new ideas and concepts in your writing, and that's the highlight of your authorship. The beginning of this OS is very engaging and that sorta vouches for an equally engaging actual-thing. It got confusing at places and I blame you for that. For you make no use of quotation marks to enclose dialogues. Stop doing that! Rest everything is pitch-perfect for a bringing this idea to life. This is more of a Sharon-and-a-book OS than SwaRon and I really like how it is penned. Exact yet descriptive, also the best part really has to be Sharon's musing. She delves far too deep into her thoughts and so much thinking always leaves a dozen questions as a byproduct. So yeah, that's that.

Great read, this one.

-Kanks

Edited by Savage - 12 years ago

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Sudha, you are undoubtedly brilliant in all your write-ups and this one was no exception. Superbly penned down. I often assume your works to be ample fountains of emotions. Awesome characterization Sudha. I loved the way Sharon recounts all her experiences with Swayum. The ending was anything but charming.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay but I guess you must be used to be my late reviews now :(
The Perfect Read appeals extensively as a title.

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey sudha!🤗 As promised i took time out for this, though i shudn't really brag about it cos an os of this stature in no way deserves such a late comment! It was a total change of style n that's precisely what made this an interesting read! I loved the way we got the concept a little better with every line. Few lines were beautifully penned.. my favourite is the one where u mention crushing of dried autumn leaves, summer hues n melting snow-- all describing the various effects his presence had had on her life..

U know since swaron-as-we-know-it has ended i can't bring myself to read much on them.. but ur works will always be among the few exceptions since in every os of urs we have swaron as we know them.. n for this i can't thank you enough..😳

It was a lovely piece of work, this one.. my focus was not as much on the writing as on the concept n the overall feel of the os.. so once again good thinking! keep it up! update soon!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

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Edited by Ananya.SwaRon - 12 years ago

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

hey Sudha sorry for beung late for reply..:)

as alwya soo sweet os & spsly when sharon sys swayam Shekhavt impotant he loved d wy u hv describd it
nice OS
Thanx for PM..:D😃

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

That was a perfectly awesome OS Sudha!! I have always said that you are a brilliant writer with a level of her own and you maintained "that " level in this "crazy idea" of yours!! I loved how it started with few lines from a book and then the ending which was actually the real beginning. It is always such a pleasure to read whatever you pen down. This was indeed "The Perfect Read"!!😊

Love,

XOXO
Amrita!!