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my long fasinated with manveer has previously resulted into a story that gives me great joy to write.

PROLOGUE

Six days before Manyata 's marriage her life turned hell. But that is a buried matter , today she felt herself so helpless .The entire Jaigarh palace was crammed with guest and relatives and everyone seemed busy doing different works. Few were looking after the guest and few were cleaning up the mess after the marriage .As like any other girls she had also waited for this auspicious day and she dreamt of her prince charming. Her marriage was India 's most awaited marriage ,the media reported it as " FAIRY TALE WEDDING" .The marriage had ended a long ago and she sat on her husband 's bed with mangalsutra on her neck and sindoor on her head.She was in a gorgeous gaggra with heavy jewellaries.Everyone was happy except for her .She picked up the marriage card which was lying on the side table

"the royal family of Devgarh and Jaigarh family cordinally invite you to the wedding of the crown prince and the crown princess

RAJKUMARI MANYATA SINGH WEDS YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH"

A thick stream of tears rolled into her cheeks with more flow and a series of question whirled in her mind as ' "how will I manage my life without him? Why didn't he stop the marriage? Who will care for me the way he used to care?" her hands moved wiping the tears rolling down her cheeks as she realized that now there was nothing despite accepting the fact that her world has already been shattered down and now Udayveer is everything for her .She clenched her heart " I have to forget him'.i have to be firm for the sake of my family ,relatives and mostly importantly for the person who is now my husband" her dried tears seemed mingling into crisp wind.

CHARACTER SKETCH

YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH [26]:He is the crown prince of Jaigarh and also the owner of Jaigarh Industries. He was send to London when he was six ,after completing his graduation ,he opened his companies sector in London .For 3 yrs the stock has been high and he made profits of millions. But now he have returned to India for three reasons .FIRST : he have to handle the newly opened company which was a joint partnership with the Devgarh industries .SECOND : he had to be crowned as the new king of Jaigarh .THIRD : to marry his long time fiance Manyata. Inspite of being educated in the western cultures and having numerous girlfriends ,he was committed to her .He neither saw her nor spoke to her but all he knew was his heart belonged to her . He is a very brave and possess all the qualities of a Rajput warrior prince.

RAJKUMARI MANYATA SINGH [23]: she is the crown princess of Devgarh. She is a bubbly ,playful and sweet girl ,she is loved and pampered very badly by her family .She was only three when she got engaged with Udayveer and not being in contact for so long she totally forgot about him .She is very close to his family and she is very must attached to her childhood best friend Augustia

YUVRAAJ AUGUSTIA SINGH [25] :he is the younger brother of Udayveer .He loves his elder brother Udayveer and his younger sister Unnati dearly. He is very much attached with Manyata

THE OTHER CHARACTERS ARE SAME AS SHOWN IN DEK BUT HERE JAI AND VIJAY IS IN A POSITIVE ROLE

Chapter 1 : Fierce with wanting

At the royal bar in Jaigarh palace gossip swirled around wild on eddies of whiskeyed breath Udayveer was surrounded by his small group of friends ,they were with drinks sweating in their big hot hands. Udayveer looked at the wall clock which clearly mentioned it was 1 am. He made a mental note that he was being increadibly late for his first wedding night .A sudden urge arouse in him to see his wife as throughtout the ceremony a thick red dupatta covered her face ,he did not even speak to her as the journey till Jaigarh palace there was an akward silence .He had to hurry as he wanted to pick her dupatta and see her face .

"just look at our little prince dying to meet his newly wedded wife" said one of his friends while UV face was flushed with laughter and liquor. They got indulge in some more drinks. Suddenly Giriraaj came and peered around at the partygoers .He said " app loog abhi taak ehaa hai 'humei lagta hai app logo koh woapass ghar chale janna chahiye" "ji uncle" all his friends answered in chorus and they left. Giriraaj and UV bide each other goodnight. Delight gleamed appeared in UV 's brown eyes. He raced to his room and took a deep breath before entering the bedroom. There were actually butterflies in his stomach! 21yrs and his waiting were over .He opened the door and entered the room lacting the door his back was turned to her as he said "I am sorry for being late actually" he turned towards her and his eyes meet a pair of dark hazel eyes .And there she was.

[manyata wedding dress]

He stood there like a statue staring at her face ,he saw her bitting her lips .Drinking in his first sight at her ,Udayveer had imagined himself ,falling in love with her fully and profoundly .His heart beat pulsed in his hands with the desire to reach out and touch her .She looked up suddenly and saw him .She saw the lustful look in his eyes UV couldn't look away from her .Her eyes were pale gray and they were haunted and lonely .She slowly realized her lower lip from between her teeth as she stared back at him. She was feeling under the vivid gaze of Udayveer ,that she had stepped out of a fog and been seen clearly for the first time .He stood inmobile for a moment "princess" he breathed "you look ravishing" he was flustered and couldn't keep his eyes from straying down to her white shoulder ,he wanted to cup her shoulder with both hands and whisper in her ears so close his lips touching her whole body would shiver like a flower petal in breeze.He wanted to kiss her .Looking up into his eyes and seeing the radiance in them ,seeing the future in them ,she was so full of worries .She got up from the bed and grabbed her pillow and said silently "yuvraajsa bohoot deir hogayi hai mujhei lagta hai ki abh humei soijana chahiyei" saying this she made her way to the enourmous coach ,and slipped inside while he stood there stunned at said to himself " What the hell is she doing?why is she not sleeping on the bed? Why is she running away from me I am her husband? Let me teach her a lesson for trying to test my patient" he marched to her but then he pulled a blanket over her slowly so that she does not get disturbed .She slept like an innocent child as he smiled and said himself "I am a fool'. I have the world's most beautiful girl as my wife'maybe she is just shy'if these is what she want I am ready to take baby steps" he went back back to his bed swiched off the lights and went off to sleep .

He looked up and could see a streak of saffron light up in the sky .The cuttons had been drawn and the sun rays hit the royal bedroom of the newly wedded couple .He sat on his bed and his eyes searched for Manyata ,the coach was emptied and the pillow and blanket was neatly folded and kept in the bed .He collapsed back into the pillow when suddenly Manyata stepped out of the bathroom in a red suit

She stood infront of the mirror appling sindoor and adjusting her wet hair while UV was busy gazing at her ,he slipped out from the bed when she noticed it .He went towards the mirrow while she totally ignored him and went to thw window putting the flowers in the flowervase. He went to his wardrobe ,the whole room was smelling of her sweet flowery fragnance ,which tempted him to want her more more.He started hunting for his shirt as he said " tumhara chocolate bodywash bohoot acha smell karta hai .You know princess jab hum dono chotei thei hum dono ko dadisabh inseperable bol tei thi..hum dono hamesha ek saath rahetei thei..aur yaad hai princess" he turned back but saw Manyata already left the room .At that moment he felt like a fool,he was very frustrated and he got mad on her .He said to himself "aisii kya baath thi joh woa humsei thori deir baath bhi nahi karsakti'.eishei woa binna bataya kaise jasakti hai" Then to cool himself he took a shower and got into his favourite turtle neck shirt ,black jeans and pointed leather shoes.He still had a charm which could make girls fall on their knees.

He went to down to the living room ,as he saw one of his chef being kicked out from the kitchen ,as he the next moment he hears Manyata shouting , "nikal jao edhar sei" UV was stunned at the sudden anger in Manyata 's voice. He called the chef and asked "kya hua Manyata tumpei aisee chila kyui rahi hai?" The chef looked down and said politely "darasaal ajj yuvranisa shahii pakwaan bana rahi thi aur unhonei ek sabji mei kuch zadaa hi namaak daal dia that oh meinei jab unsei apni galti kei baremei wakif karnei gaya toh woa mujhpei baraak gayi" now UV 's frustration grew more wild as he hated someone misbehaving with labour class people he always respected them and this misbehavior of Manyata grew on his nerve .He said "tum jao" the chef left and he marched to the kitchen ,Manyata stood there near a huge black vessel kept on the fire .Every second she rubbed off the tear caused by the smoke .UV stormed to her ,grabbing her upper arm and turning her towards him.There was a dangerous gleam in his eyes while his fingers pierced into her soft milky skin. He gritted his teeths together and screamed "TUMHARI HIMAAT KAISE HUI SHAHI KANSABHEI SEI UCHI AWAAZ MEI BAAT KARNEI KI" he pressed her hand harder ,tears had already started to swell up in her eyes as she said innocently "paar unhonei"

She tried to speak but he pressed his index figure on her lips and said "not a single word '.tumhei agar humarei shahi khansabei sei toh tumhei shai packwaan bana kei koi zaruraat nahi GET OUT" he screamed and lossened his grip .She gave him a helpless look and ran to there room.She locked herself inside the bedroom laid her body on the bed and started to cry .After sometime she heard her phone beeping ,it was Jai .she answered it as Jai said " hi jiji good morning" she said in a cheerfull manner while Manyata fought back her tears and said "haah..paar teri subha etni jaldi kaisei hogayi hai" "kya karu jiji apkeh bina ehaa needh hi nahi atti" " kyui mei kya teri sleeping pills hui haah nahi toh" "aisha hi samaaj lijiyei toh kya jijisa nei apkoh kaal raat entertain kia ?" Jai asked with a mysterious tone as Vijaybana snacted the phone from Jai and said "mbhai abh theek toh hai na" "ji vijaybana hum bhilkul theek hai" "mbhai woa kaal aya tha'.apkeh paas abhi bhi waqt hai" [by that time Jai had gone to antoher room] Manyata wipped her tears and said " vijaybana menei decide kar lia hai ''." "paar mbhaitum ushei pyaar karta hai" "aur woa apnei riasaat sei pyaar karta hai vijaybana mujhei kuch kaam hai bye"

Saying this Manyata cut the call and kept the phone on the side table and said in a voice broken with sorrow "kyui bhagwanji'..kyui apnei mere saath yei kia ?eshei toh acha mei khud khusi kaar leti'..mei sabkoh dhokei mei rakrahi hui'mere pariwar koh'aur sabsei zaruri mere pati koh..nahi woa mera pati nahi hai'..mere pariwaar nei meri zindigi already bhikhaar kei rakh di abh aur nahi" she wipped her tears and looked at her henna decorated hands. .On her left palm ,UV 's name was written beautifully .A sudden anger arose in her and she stormed to the bathroom and poured the whole handwash on the name part .She scrubbed it wildly and at last gave up as this name was written in her destiny. She sat beside the bathtube and weeped .On the other side UV was in his study as Unnati stormed inside and said "dada did why did you tell that chef to stay back..when manyata already ordered him to go ?" "kya matlaab hai tumhara chotti?" he asked confusingly while she said " dada ajj subhei eii chef drink karkei rasoiyei mei ayya tha aur bhabhisa nei eski condition dekh kei eshe janne ke liyei kahaa aur phir eii batamizi karnei laga" UV realished his mistake and said "oh no chotti humei laga ki woa rudely behave kar rahi hai aur humnei usei bohoot bura bartaab kia" Unnati rolled her eyes and said "apkoh na dada shahi khansabei sei hi sadhi karleni chahiyi thi" both were silent for sometime as they heard someone saying "manyata kei haat sei eii phehela piakaar hai joh marra nahi"CHAPTER 2:THE CAGED BIRD

PROMO OF CHAPPY 2

UV gave him a cold stare ,UV always hated him as he had everything for which UV had always longed ,UV was very jealous'royal dance party at udaynivas...manveer dance... pic of manyata's dress in partyThey both turned and saw a him, Unnati went and hugged him and punched on his chest lightly saying "toh abhi apkoh apnei pariwaar ki yaad ayi" soon Unnati broke the hug as he went to UV and said giving him a hug "Happy married life bro" and then UV gave him a cold stare ,UV always hated him as he had everything for which UV had always longed ,UV was very jealous'he had both his mom and dad ,after UV went to London he became close Manyata and became her best friend .This were a solid reason for UV to hate his cousin brother Augustia the yuvraaj of Ramgarh .UV broke the hug and said " why were you not present for the ceremony?" UV was least bothered about his presence still he had to behave nice as Augustia always loved them as there own siblings and Unnati also considered him as her brother .Augustia said "woa humei kuch kaam tha by the way kahaa" "augustia tum abhi kuch Manyata kei barei mei kahe rahe thei" "oh haah woa UV uskoh sarrab ke smell sei bhi allergy hai and she hates drunkyard they cause her a terrible head ache"

UV said to himself "eshiliye kaal raat woa sofe paar jakei soa gayi thi'..humnei unkei saath bohoot bura bartaab kia'.humei apnei ghusei paar kabu rakhnaparega'paar sabsei phehele toh humei unsei maffi maung ni paregi" his chain of thoughts were broken as Augustia said "kahaa hai Manyata mei uska mood abhi theek karkei atta hui" UV grabbed his wrist and said "nahi hum ushei manaleyengei paar phehele tum jaldi sei taiyaar hojao'tumhei ajj humarei saath office jaana parega" "jo hukoom" he joked while Unnati escorted him to his room .UV just could not bear Augustia being near to Manyata , UV said to himself "nahi augustia tumnei phehele humari best friend humsei chinlia paar abh she is all mine aur mei tumhara sayaa bhi uspei parnei nahi dunga" saying this he raced to the bedroom and took a deep breath and placed a knock at the door .The knock brought Manyata back to her sence ,she got up and placed her hands down the wash basin letting the water wash away the soap. The knock continued and she opened the door .She saw a flicker of guilt passing through his eyes .Her beauty had made him forgotten everything and all he could say was "rasoimai mei tumhari zaruraat hai" then he drew aside to let her pass ,noticing with an ache of remorse how she didn't seem to see him. He continued into the room and got inside some black and white files but his heart was drown in her dreams. Minute by minute a strong smell took over the palace .A smell that even made UV 's stomach grumble .His wating was over as the maid informed him that he was called for breakfast. He went down and joined Unnati ,Giriraaj and Augustia for breakfast ,while Manyata stood beside Giriraaj 's chair .The servants placed the food on the table ,while Manyata took each bowland served on Giriraaj and then Unnati 's plate .As she served in Augustia 's plate they were indulge in an eyelock but it was Manyata who broke it first .This eyelock was noticed by UV but he did not pay much attention to it .Then Manyata moved to UV 's plate ,she served the food while his eyes were fixed on her .After sometime she asked softly "kya apkoh aur chahiyei? He finally took his eyes off her and looked down at his plate which was already flooded with food .He said "nahi" as she went back to her position.Giriraaj was the first to start and the other followed. The food melted in there mouth as it was soo delicious.Then Unnati said "hats off manyata eii khanaa bohoot delicious hai atleast ush shahi khansabe kei khanei sei toh bohoot acha" she ended taunting at UV ,while Giriraaj opened a velvet box and handed to Manyata

And said in a nostalgic tone "eii udayveer ke ma ka tha unki echa thi ki eii woa khud apnei hatoo sei tumhei khilayei''joh bhi ho khanaa bohoot acha tha" she took Giriraaj 's blessing as he asked "toh udayveer party ke sari arrangement hogayi?" "jii dad" .Manyata was confused and asked "konsi party papa" [she had a habit of calling Giriraaj papa since childhood] Then Giriraaj turned to UV and said " udayveer tumnei eshei bataya nahi" he was interrupted by Unnati as she said coldly "ajj kaal dada eii shahi khansabei kei piche bagh tei baghtei saab bhul jarahe hai'.whatsoever Manyata ajj sayam Udaynivas mei ek party hai tum dono reception party...so chalo breakfast kei baadh hum dono shopping karnei chalege'" "ok" "aur haah tum jai aur vijay koh bhi bulalo'we are gonna have lots of fun just like before"

at this Augustia stood up snd said "excuse me mujhei kuch zarurri kaam hai" saying he turned to go but before going he said to Manyata "khanaa acha tha" to which Manyata looked at him helplessly and continued to stare till he left the room. After sometime even Giriraaj excused himself having finished with the breakfast .UV kept gazing at her and suddenly he realized that she has not eaten anything , he has an urge to ask her to join him but then he shook it off and send a sms to Unnati "chotti khanei kei liyei bahet nei bolo" after sometime he gets the reply "dada why don't you ask you so called shahi khansabha to do it" Then she gazed at him angrily while he looked at her helplessly and finally she melted for the sake of her hungry friend .Unnati asked , " manyata why don't you join us for breakfast ?" she nods in a yes ,UV pull' s the near while sitting expecting her put she sits next to Unnati and Unnati says "Manyata tum jaldi sei jai aur vijay koh hum logo keh plan keh baremei bool do " "haah mei abhi unhei bbm kartihui" she typed and after sometime she got a reply and she said to Unnati "jai toh arahi hai paar vijay banna koh kuchh kaam hai sooo" "its ok at least jai toh arahi hai na.." Unnati turned towards UV and asked "dada apnei abhi taak nahi bataya apkoh kahnaa kaisa laga"

" he was about to compliment but shook it off as he saw his phone beeping ,he answered the call and than said "excuse me humei office mei kuch zaruri kaam hai" and drove away 'Unnati noticed sadness had taken over her face but then Manyata passed her a fake smile. After sometime even they left for shopping and the three girls had lots of fun

IN THE EVENING
UV returned from the office tired and exhausted ,the worst part was he had to drive back with Augustia. Inside the Udaynivas 's pub everyone was watching for UV .The DJ was playing soft music others were dancing and laughing .Manyata was in UV suit 's suit getting ready ,Jai and Unnati had already gone down.Unnati was dancing with Vijay while Jai patiently waited for him, for her the party would not start till she meets him .Suddenly she saw him and rushed towards him and they broke into a hug as he said "woa someone 's lookin hot tonight" "shut up Jagaat aur bolo tumhei etni deir kaise hui" "kuch kaam mei pash gaya that by the way where is Augustia?" "jagaat 5 saal sei hum tumhare gf hai aur eii puchnei ki jaga ki hum kaise hai tum ush moron ke baremei puch rahei ho" "oh sorry dear hum bhul gayei thei that you dislike him" "no jagaat you are mistaken i do not dislike him i hate him...you got that HATE HIM" "take the devils name and he is here" said Jagaat they both turned as they saw Augustia and UV heading ,they greeted them although Jai had no interest to greet Augustia just then UV asked "where is Manyata ?" "jijisa she is getting ready..i guess by now she is ready" "fine i am bringing her down" .Manyata was looking at herself in the mirrow ,she wasnt a girl anymore ,she was a lady now a lady who was UV 's greatest possesion . She wore a black sariiher shoulders were bare too and she felt daring and sultry and alive.She saw UV 's reflection in the mirrow and she turned He had just come to in and was looking for her. She watched as his eyes swept the room ,passing over her twice before finally fixing on her face with a flash of suprise .His brown eyes dropped to her shoulders ,then down to her ankles and darted quickly back to her face .He was flustered and she asked silently "kya hua". and all he could mummer was "niche chale" she shook her head in a yes while he offered his hand and she caught it.His heart missed a beat as her soft milky hand touched his .They walked down hands in hands and they joined Vijay ,Unnati ,Jai,Jagaat and Augustia .Everyone complimented ,manyata except for Auustia ,he seemed to busy in his phone soon Manyata got into a conversation with Jai and Unnati while Jagaat , UV and Vijay discused there own stuffs UV 's gaze was fixed on Manyata while they had a way of robbing the boys of amusement of their own vivid talk ,UV watched Manyata laughing so freely forgetting the world around her and talking endlessly.Suddenly Jai popped up with the idea "lets have a couple dance" so soon Vijay took Unnati and Jaggat took Jai to the dance floor .UV wanted to dance with her so he would touch her .He took her habds and lead her to the dance floor while she smiled .They toched for the first time ,first delicately and decorously ,fingertips to waist and hand to shoulder the pose of the dance.

Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan.. (Mere saaiyaan..)

Mere saaiyaan re
Saaiyaan re
Sacha bole na jhoota mahiya re ho
Mere saaiyaan re
Saaiyaan re
Jhooti maya ka jhoota hai jiya re ho
Ab kis disha jao
Kit mein basera pao
Tu jo tha main sanbhal jao

the streamers were streched over their heads , and people gossiped but they did not pay much attention to it. Not even missing a step

Ho saaiyaan
Mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan.. (Mere saaiyaan..)

Mere saaiyaan re
Saaiyaan re
Sacha bole na jhoota mahiya re ho

Daman mein samete
Andhera layi hai
Behroopiya roshni
Ho o loriyaan gaye
Toh neende jal jaati hai
Lage kalsuri chandni

they were lost in each others it was like one soul one body...time had paused for them She closed her eyes as she felt his breath stir the fine hairs at her temple and his lips brushed softly against her earlobe ,she blushed furiously at the intimate touch and a look of wistfulness and hope could be seen in his eyes.

Mere saaiyaan re
Saaiyaan re
Dil sheeshe ka toota aashiyan re ho
Ab kis disha jao
Kit mein basera pao
Tu jo tha main sanbhal jao

Ho saaiyaan
Mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan

the eyelock was broken as the song stopped Manyata pulled herself apart and looked down while UV smirked at her blushing beet cheeks .CHAPTER 3:THE KISS
PRECAPE:UV SCREAMED AT THE TOP OF HIS VOICE "how dare you kis her she is my wife"
chapter 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=5
CHAPTER 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=6
CHAPTER 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=8
chapter 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=10
chapter 7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=15
CHAPTER 8 PAGE 18 AND 19https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=18
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=19
chapter 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=20

chapter 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire?pn=22
CHAPTER 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire
chapter 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire
chapter 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3290539/the-beautiful-fire
chapter 14:
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ye ye i am the 1st one!!!!!!!!!!😊 its lovellyy!!!!!!! plz do update soon!!!!!!!😊 and pm me if possble
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Really lovely !
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loved the concept.
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Wonder full concept anesha 👏👏, I loved it, I guess I have read ur work fro teh first time 😳😳, and instantly feel in love with your writing 😊. IS Akasah/Aryan a part of this ff if not then I'm guessing here that probably Manyata was in love with Augustia. But Anesha if Augustia is UV's younger brother and UV is the yuvraj then Augustia has to be Rajkumar not yuvraj I guess, unless, he is the cousin brother and Yuvraj of some other estate.

Loved the whole concept, so eagerly waiting for this story to unfold, and see Manveer journey of finding each other and their love for each other😳
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