THE BEAUTIFUL FIRE - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsomee...chhpy dear
urghh...this manyata😡her soo call love might be tha jerk agtsya
but i hope in this six months manyata realise uday love her so much
plzz..update soon and do PM me.

Edited by Ashish.Holic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are ye kya,ye to micromini update tha😳😳 btt jitna bhi thaa suprb thaa,so manyta thnks uday s a nice guys,his touch is sending shivers through her!!!!!!!!! lovellyy!!!!!!!! do udpate soon and badawala😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

awsomee...chhpy dear
urghh...this manyata😡her soo call love might be tha jerk agtsya
but i hope in this six months manyata realise uday love he so much
plzz..update soon and do PM me.


AMMOINII LATER AFTER SOME CHAPPY U WILL START UV
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awww!!! I lv ur concept...but whoz this bloody kabab me haddi??? Manveer in paris...wooowww..lets see what happens nxt...update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

The next day manveer left for their honeymoon ,manyata started to get her monthly bleeding. They reached and boarded for their morning flight to paris . on the plane manyata sat on the window side while he sat beside her gazing at her anglelic figure which looked so beautiful in a black anerkali . but she was not noticing him so he wanted to make her jealous .he started flirt with the airhostress but it got backfired as an airhostress said sternly to him

"sir please from next time if you need anything please push the button instead of screaming for us as it is disturbing the other passengers " and walked off leaving a shocked uday back but soon he heard a giggle .he looked towards manyata as she looked towards him and giggled and asked mischeiviously

"mr udayveer singh if from next time you need anything what will you do?"

"push the button " he replied innocently and she patted on his cheecks saying

"that's like a good boy" then she looked away while he kept looking at her .after sometime she landed on his shoulder asleep and he kept admiring her but unknown to himself even he fell asleep .when manveer woke up they found themselves wrapped in a blanket uday looked towards the blanket she winked at him and he passed her a sweet smile .the plane had reached its destination and a car was waiting for them to take them to there holiday house [Edwards house in twilight] which was named udaynivas .manveer settled in there and manyata cooked dinner ,they had I the rooftop .After dinner they changed manyata was in a red netted nightie while uday was in his black plants and vest .they sat on the bed and started to chat about there lives .uday was boring with only books or works while manyata life was full of excitement and happy moment mostly with augustia .after long time uday decided to make a move and started to caress her arms as he proceeded towards her waist she said

"uday please I am not feeling well"

He got his hands off and asked

"why ? whats the matter with you?"

"my stomach is aching very badly "

He sat on the bed and said

"wait let me fetch you some medicine"

"uday I am fine"

"you are sure princess"

"yes uday I am fine"

He laid back beside her and asked

"but there must be a reason behind your stomach ache did you eat some wrong thing"

"no uday its nothing like that it happens"

"how can it just happen"

"ok uday its personal problem"

"you can share it with me princess I am your husband'

"uday I can 't try to understand it is a girl thing and it happens every month"

He understood what she meant and asked her

"you need something?"

"no I wish mom was here"

"ok tell me what aunty komal used to do?"

"she used to message my stomach and tell me bedtime stories"

She made a puppy face and he clearly nderstood her intentions .he started to message her stomach and started

"once upon a time there was a handsome charming princess named udayveer and a princess named manyata"

"just that much for manyata?" she complained

"ok fine a sweet princess .now the prince was very famous and popular among the girls" he started to boast as she cut him and said

"and he used to get scholding from the airhostress "and started to giggle

"princess she did not scold me" he complained while she kept giggling and finally said

"its ok prince she did not and thank you so much for the message now we shall sleep"

"that is what I am saying pincess let SLEEP'

"uday do you want to spend the night in the balcony"

"goodnight princess"

"goodnight uday"


Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome super duper but too short
Please update soon
Loved this part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awseum update aneesha.
thanks for the pm.
cont soon
Edited by arna753 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome
loved this part
but it was short
do cont soon thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awsm update...luvd manveer nght scene...their convo was super cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsomee...update
very nice
its too short
plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.

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