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Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Yay me first!

Okay so evidently they live a routine whereby the less social interaction they share, the happier they are. Or is it so...?

From their behaviour & the subtle hints of the conversation, it seems like they crave nothing more than to be open with each other again, but this mysterious something holds them back.

Why did Geet make the first move towards him, I wonder? I guess only time will tell...

P.S. I'm loving these regular updates. Keep them regular if you can before I torture you with barfi mwahahahaha

may b cz she ws feelng guilty... n deep in hr conscience she wntd to apologise...or wntd to have their breaKfst as per their routine which once usd to exist n s ovrshadowd wth eerie thickning silence...n may b tht ws the reasn MAAN too reciprocated...until amusement ws replaced wth bewildrment...

love

SANJH

Read all d 4 parts as it was quite interesting

Such a boring routine these ppl have...

It seems like even though their relationship isn't as beautiful as it was before, they do want to make it the way it was. I wonder what happened that has such a great impact that they cannot be very comfortable with each other now...

As far as i got in this both of dem are pretending smthng,hurt smwhere by each other but dunno what happened in past.So pls update soon to let us know.

nice update and a very mysterious story but like it. but y dont u make the update a bit longer plz plz plz

Thank you all so, so, so much for your comments! Each and every one of them mean a lot to me - I actually did a little bhangra dance while reading them today 😆

I hope nobody is offended that I don't always reply to comments individually - it's just that I've found that I don't like spamming my thread with the same old 'thank you's. Rather, I'll try to show my appreciation in other ways (hello, regular updates 😉).

Longer updates are not something that I can promise, however. I write as much as my creativity allows and I fear that if I try to force words out of myself, it will ruin the continuity and feel of the chapter/story/what have you. For example, I have to admit that I was overall very dissatisfied with the previous chapter and if I had tried to make it any longer, it may just have finished with Geet and Maan hitting each other with rolling pins and ending up at an early demise 😆

Thank you once again for your wonderful comments and for generally being a lovely bunch to write for :)

Originally posted by: sanjh89

FOOLS...

tht ws the wrd tht cme in my mind whn i cmpleted...
secnd tme ..wht i felt ...i sensed ws dt dey do wnt to go bck on their regular routine which used to comprise of chattng n bickerng( I assumd tht on the ground of MAAN's reactn whn GEET initiatd...
... n GEET mst hv felt guilty abt hr behavior lst nght which appeard rude on frst imulse( wht ws the reason s still undr ur veil) ... their conversation ws simple...an e.g. of one which generally happens btw our parents...let alone the youngr couples...
my take thus s... smthng which s still unknown s stoppng thm(e.g. suddn chnge to bewilderment) n tht cn b removd if only..."DID THEY...JUST GET ALONG?" happend few mre tmes...

pretty lng ...eh? wht to do ... culdn't stp myslf...

love

SANJH

I really like your take on the chapter, Sanjh, especially your initial reaction of 'FOOLS' :) That would probably be my reaction too. I appreciate the long comment :)

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Yay me first!

Okay so evidently they live a routine whereby the less social interaction they share, the happier they are. Or is it so...?

From their behaviour & the subtle hints of the conversation, it seems like they crave nothing more than to be open with each other again, but this mysterious something holds them back.

Why did Geet make the first move towards him, I wonder? I guess only time will tell...

P.S. I'm loving these regular updates. Keep them regular if you can before I torture you with barfi mwahahahaha

The less social interaction, the happier...sounds like you're describing me 😆

BARF-I?! 🤢 *Waves white flag* I SURRENDER, I SURRENDER! Although, if you ever decide to change tactics and try bribery instead of threats, a box of kaju katli is what you should have in your hands ;)

And speaking of updates, Missy, when are we going to see Chitti getting karate chopped?

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

The less social interaction, the happier...sounds like you're describing me 😆

BARF-I?! 🤢 *Waves white flag* I SURRENDER, I SURRENDER! Although, if you ever decide to change tactics and try bribery instead of threats, a box of kaju katli is what you should have in your hands ;)

And speaking of updates, Missy, when are we going to see Chitti getting karate chopped?