MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 10

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maan is cruel

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H2 - 5

GOA,

Dadi and Rajesh reached Goa and went to ST,Joesph church.

Dadi : Rajesh is tis te church u said

Rajesh : yes Dadi

Dadi was so anxious to see her grand childrens, she was so happy.

Rajesh : Dadi I will ask some one and cum

Dadi : hmmm, Rajesh left

Dadi seeing te church were her grandchildrens was brought up. she was feeling sad that waris of khurana khandan was staying in orphan

Rajesh came : Dadi they saying tat Gurmeet went to nearby beach with te orphans kids

Dadi became so disappointed : ok cum we will go there

Rajesh : no Dadi u were so tired we will take rest in some near by hotels, then we will cum to church to meet them

Dadi : NOOO we will go now, wen I met them only I will look normal, we will go there

Rajesh smiles at her : ok Dadi

Meanwhile Maan reaches Goa with Adi to complete his mission.wen he reached Goa some unknown feeling making him to feel restless.. but he snap all his thoughts, his only thought was to face HIM..

In BEACH.,

Guru , Geet, Ani was playing with kids , they were enjoying themselves

Kid : Bhaiya we will play hide and seek

Guru : ok will tie my eye u are run

Kid : ok

Geet tie te blind cloth around his eyes, and rotates him. All started to run, Guru was trying to catch them, Geet was teasing him by poking and pushing him

Guru : Geet wait till I catch u, then I will show who im

Geet : we will see

Ani : cum on bhai, cum on

Geet wen she poke on Guru's shoulder , he tries to catch, but Geet runs

Geet : Guru u cant catch me

She running and suddenly BANG on some one

Same time, Dadi and Rajesh reached Beach, they were searching them, wen some girl dash on Dadi

Geet : sorry madam and hides behind her

Guru who was chasing her came and hold Dadi : I GOT U I GOT U

Dadi was so happy to see Guru , why cant see recognize as Guru look same like Maan, she had tears in her eyes

Dadi : yes my PRINCE U GOT ME

Guru was shock to hear tis voice, he open his blind fold and stood numb seeing Dadi

Guru : Dadi

Dadi was smiling and crying and nodes her head : yes my PRINCE

Dadi wents and hugs Guru and he too started to cry hugging his Dadi.

Geet and Ani was shocked but seeing them they too started to cry

After some time Dadi broke te hug

Dadi : how are u my child

Guru too smiles : fine Dadi, how are u and how is my MAAN

Dadi : fine, so u know us were we are,

Guru nodes

Dadi : then why u didt cum to us Guru , u know how we missed u

Guru : sorry Dadi, but I thought wen they saw us they will harm u too, so I hide myself and Ani

Dadi : Ani were is my baby

Guru calls Ani, who still now was shocked to see someone as her blood relation other than her GURU BHAI. Ani came and stand beside Guru

Dadi was so happy seeing 6 months old baby standing in front of her as grown up girl

Ani : bhai

Guru : Ani see tis is our Dadi

Ani : Dadi, and start to cry

Dadi : its not te time to cry my baby, its time to smile and hugs her

Ani too hugs her, Dadi kiss Ani's forehead.

Geet too cums and stand beside them , Dadi wipes her tears, and see Geet

Dadi : Guru who is tis girl

Geet : thank god now atleast u all remembers me, and twisted her lips

Guru : ah Dadi she is Geet and

Ani : and she is my would be bhabhi

Geet and Guru started to blush

Dadi : oh my Bahu

Guru and Geet touchs Dadi's feet.

Dadi hugs Geet and kissed

Guru : Dadi how is Maan

Ani : who is Maan bhai

Dadi : he is also ur bhai, twin brother of Guru

Ani : oh so I hav two bros wow,

Geet : twin wow im excited to see Guru's twin, how he will be

Dadi : wen we go to delhi u will see him

Guru : Dadi we will go to home and talk , who is he Ddai

Dadi : he inspector Rajesh, who helped to find u, he is friend of ur papa

Guru shakes his hand with Rajesh.

Then they all reached church, Guru took Dadi to meet FATHER

Guru : Dadi he is our father who saved me and Ani from tat place

Dadi folded her hands : thank so much Father, u have saved my life,. If u were not there, wat would have happen to my kids

Father : no madam all are gods grace, he decided wat should happens

Dadi had tears and nodes her head

Guru : Father im taking Dadi to my home, 2mor I will see u

Father : ok but I have to talked to Dadi

Dadi : say Father

Father : sister I have fixed Guru and Geet's marriage next week, if u have no objection, they marriage can be done in tis church

Dadi smiles : why not Father, here only my kids grown up, im lucky to see my Guru's marriage

Father : one more thing

Dadi : say Father

Father hesitates : Geet is orphan so

Dadi : so wat Father, who said she is orphan , she is my Badi Bahu of khurana family, she is my beti Father I will look after her

Father was so over whelmed to see Dadi , who resembles Guru : ok sister

Guru : ok FATHER we will leave , I will mete u 2mor

Father : ok my son

Rajesh : Dadi im leaving, as my sister's house is here ,I will stay with her today and leaving 2mor to delhi

Dadi : thanku so much Rajesh for bringing back my childrens to me

Rajesh : its my duty Dadi, ok im leaving

Dadi : ok Rajesh

Rajesh : bye Guru

Guru : bye sir

They all reached te apartment, Geet opens te door and all wnet inside. Geet went to kitchen to cook food,

Geet : Dadi wat u like to eat

Dadi smiles : wat ever my Bahu cooks

Geet blushes for te word bahu, and smiles at her

They all had te dinner together

Dadi : Geet food was so tasty

Ani : yes Dadi she will her cooking will be excellent, bhai was so lucky to hav

Dadi : I agreed with u

Guru : Dadi can we sleep with u today

Dadi had tears with her and nodes yes.

Guru : Dadi were is Maan, why he didt cum with u

Dadi : he went to London for some business, I didt said abt u to him still

Guru : how is he Dadi

Dadi became silent : wat to say Guru, he changed so much, he became alone Guru. He is craving for love, but he didt get , I was looking after business , so don't have time to spend with him, he made himself rude , arrogant and make everyone to beg in front of him

Guru had tears , Geet and Ani too was so sad feeling for him

Geet : don't worry Dadi , we will change him

Dadi smiles at her. They wer talking for some time, and slept peacefully.

GURU'S BEDROOM

But another side , one heart is restless

Maan reached to his guest house and went to his room, he got a call

MAAN'S GUEST HOUSE IN GOA

Maan : I want full details of tat person before morning

He wents to his swimming pool and started to swim vigurously

After finishing swimming , he wents to his bedroom to take some sleep but which is very far for him

MAAN'S BEDROOM

PRECAP : DADI , GURU, ANI, GEET MARRIAGE SHOPPING. MAAN BEEN ATTRACKED , BUT BY WHOM?

NEXT PART- H2-6

it was sweet update

it was a lovely update with small family reunion ...

lovely update..

wow so dadi meets her other grandson and her granddaughter after so many years huh
thank god they have met now
but what about maan man
so he will be attacked but by whom
hope in all this the twins do meet each other
waiting for next update
and also guru geet wedding if that will happen which am doubting