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Posted: 12 years ago
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well m a virman fan but also v boys fan too...i have written an os on v boys...it will be in 3-4 parts or more thn tht or less thn tht depending upon the length of update... here is first part nd on seeing the response i will continue...m not good at writing but still tried no this is not my first time...have written os on virman too nd yes this is not my first writing on vboys i have written an os before also...here u go...nd yes tittle not decided wen will get appropriate one thn will edit it

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part 1

"virat kaha hai tu...aaj tere album ki success party hai aur tu hi gayab hai"

"arre bhai yeh Manvi ke chakkar mein aana padha...usne apna dress alter karne ko de rakha tha usse hi lene aaya hoon"

"arre wah mere bhai...joru ka gulaam haan...mera shirt toh kabhi lene nahi gaya aur biwi aate hi teri saari kya kehte hai reputation gayi bhad mein"

"mere bhai mujhe tease na karo...mujhe sab pata hai app bhabhi ke liye kya kya lene jaate ho...list banau"

"chal chal thik hai...zyada na bol aur jaldi se ghar aaja"

Party was going very smoothly everyone was enjoying the party of upcoming superstar virat vadera's success on his release of his first album...before anyone cud know even virat, viren from his sources got to know tht album was superhit not only in india but also internationally so widout thinking twice he threw biggest party of Chandigarh...everyone knew if one gets hurts other automatically cries nd if one gets success other already had started celebration...wen viren won his first case virat even threw party in house...he was so excited about his elder bro success tht he even forgot to tell his family tht he has thrown party...now it was same wid viren he too was so excited tht he forgot to mention abt party it was wen jeevika asked just 1 hr before abt virat thn viren informed everyone including virat tht he has thrown party for his brother cum child...

Party was going on nd both brothers as usual were pulling eachother legs...but neither of them knew tht this night may be last night together...fate has planned something else...both brothers being life of eactother have to face most difficult phase of their life...at end of the party wen everyone was started going then from no where a man appeared and pointed gun towards virat...everyone was frozed...nd viren for him as if his life is passing out as if sand from hand...he cudnt move a inch...but wen the shooter was just about to shoot viren came infront nd bullet directly hit on his chest...viren fall on floor...blood oozing out, everyone shouted for viren except virat...he was standing numb as if his senses have stopped working...his brain stopped working...tears escaped from his eyes which was just uncontrollably flowing...it was wen viren called out his name virat came back to his senses and without thinking twice he took viren to hospital

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"doctor...doctor"virat bought his wounded brother on stretcher shouting on top of his lung

"ek doctor nahi hai itne bade hospital mein...where the hell is doctor" viratshouted...he was having some strange feeling he cud not explain tht but he was sure it was the same feeling wen he saw his father dying nd he was scared of this feeling...he was very much scared...

"virat relax see doctor came...everything will be fine kuch nahi hoga viren ko"inder chachu pacified his nephew...he knows how it feels seeing ur elder brother who is like father lifeless almost covered with blood...he too have faced this situation...difference is tht...tht time he had his father nd now virat has only viren as his father...doctor took viren in OT nd red light was on.


thnk you

sam

part2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68716064

part3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3249601/v-boys-os-part-3-updated

my another os on v boys

v boys os:happy birthday
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/2961570/os-happy-birthday


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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww,it was soo sad,i too m a vadera bro fan,loved this os of urs,continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Sabia... Loved it... Continue soon... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh wooow wmotional plz continue sooon and pm me babe would love t read the rest.. xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweety1234556

aww,it was soo sad,i too m a vadera bro fan,loved this os of urs,continue soon



thnk you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Awesome Sabia... Loved it... Continue soon... ❤️



thnk you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eee!! Sam.. ur OS!! Loved it bey.. do continue.. TY fr d PM 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

ohhh wooow wmotional plz continue sooon and pm me babe would love t read the rest.. xx



thnk you 😊
will surely pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was enjoying the story happily and then suddenly Viren is shot???
Whats gonna happen now??
Plz don't let Viren die...😭
Please pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandana123

I was enjoying the story happily and then suddenly Viren is shot???

Whats gonna happen now??
Plz don't let Viren die...😭
Please pm me when you update

will surely pm u

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