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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating friends.,...if u are awake...give me ten minutes..,.it shall be on
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Originally posted by: mtina0207

Updating friends.,...if u are awake...give me ten minutes..,.it shall be on


tina,

i am waiting will go to sleep only after reading your chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends,...
Thank you.all for the comments...i really appreciate the effort. It really gives me a motivation to keep u guys upated. the very reason why i kept the imp work aside and am updating this.
am gonna apologise right now...that i cant promise a regular update as i am running really busy and cannot neglect work anymore. sorry... friends
Please bear with me
Here is the next chapter...I am banking on every reader to comment and tell me how was this...writing mushy romance is something i am never sure i can do...so pls pls pls let me know,..how was it.,,did u guys like it...and friends pls do comment along with liking it,,,atleast for this chapter...
and i swear is a long one...i will commit suicide if u say it was short 😳😳😳😳😳
enjoy friends

"BY THAT STATEMENT UR BOSS MEANT THAT HE IS A PERVERT. With capital P AMAN"

"Really?"

khushi whipped around at the familiar voice to see Arnav at her door in a relaxed stance and smiling walking slowly towards her.

"Last I checked, calling a guy at midnight and telling him about the sexual pursuit u plan to carry out is what one would call pervert khushi, how was I pervert there?" if anything I was being a gentleman asking if all was good"

Khushi eyes were ready to pop out at the sight of Arnav singh Raizada standing in all his glory at her door shutting the door and walking to her. She had a very restless night. She was still in her nighty. The same pink knew length, luckily she had her peignoir on.

Shock, pleasure, anger, smile, bliss, shiver and fear.,'all these emotions walked past khushi at the sight of Arnav.

Saturday morning, she hardly expected to see arnav, she was shocked to see him. Pleasure at the site of the person, whose one small sight she wanted to catch. Anger, for the torture he put her through and that hasn't yet ended, smile'.coz her eyes were blessed with peek of his beautiful being, bliss at the calmness being near him, shiver due to the anticipation, fear of being out of control and the calm stance that he portrayed.

Khushi didn't know what to say, she wanted to ask hundreds of questions to him, had 100s of things to say, but not one word escaped her mouth. She just kept looking at this god's beautiful creation who fluttered her heart just by being alive.

Her mind was mushed. Something was nagging Khushi, and then it struck'."How did u get in Arnav, the door was locked?"

Arnav was now face to face with Khushi,

"Shhh shhh'..No Khushi'.U not asking me any question'u just gonna answer me." He closed the distance between himself and Khushi. Khushi got a jolt at the tightness in his body. She realized the calm was a faade. He was seething inside. He had a newspaper in his hand. What could have piqued him so'she had never seen such anger emanating from ASR.

"so khushi, wasn't I a gentleman, when i asked Aman, to ask if ur fruit was enuf for u, or u needed more?'

Khushi turned red. "Arnav please," she couldn't meet his eye and tried turning away from him, but Arnav, caught hold of her shoulder and pushed her to the wall'trapping her between himself and the wall. Khushi had no escape.

She was now a tad scared of what Arnav had in mind.,..not coz she feared physical damage, no all these time she had known Arnav she, knew that he wasn't capable of physically harming anyone. But there was something in his body language that sent warning signals to Khushi, that this visit wasn't playful or wasn't a "walking past hence thought shud catch up with u visit either". She feared that the equation as gonna change. Something earth shaking to happen.

"Arnav?"

"I said shhh shhh khushi, don't talk unless I ask u to. My strings are pulled really tight'.one wrong word from u will crack me'.so pls'quiet"

"Arnav u are scaring me?'

Am glad ..coz khushi'u shud be scared'.right now'I can wring this beautiful neck of urs'

"Arnav'please"'

What were u doing with Astitva ydy Khushi? " he dangled her photograph with Astitva in front of her eyes, "tell me khushi, was that banana not enuf'..or u went so desperate that u had to seek it from" '..hufff '."why khushi'.. "

"Was Astitva good'.u guys looked pretty familiar with each other". Arnav brought his face closer to hers caught her face between his palm, and looked straight into her eyes. He was breathing heavily. Did u enjoy the evening with him.Did he touch you here"'he moved his hand across her cheeks'slowly caressing it , eyes looking at her in an awe as if she was something precious' he moved to her neck'.with his fingers'."did he touch u here khushi'did he ? Arnav'kissed her cheeks and then trailed his lips to her neck. He followed every place he mentioned first with his hand feeling her and then with his lips. Khushi's breath hitched.

Did he khushi'did he mark u with his tongue here, "here was khushi's neck , the sensitive pulse beating there'Arnav bit that spot "ohhh?" said Khushi,

and then licked it placating the pain. Or did he do it this side khushi..and he trailed it to her other side of the neck.

Did he bite ur ear lobes and lick it too

Khushi felt suffocated but Arnav was not ready to spare khushi yet'.or did he kiss these petals 'and he covered her lips with his'first just flicking his tongue as if to taste and then fully covering her'Khushi wanted to hold him and let him have her fill with him'she had been waiting for his kiss.,'but arnav simply bit the lower lip, sucked at it and retracted. He looked down at her face, trying to see something in her eyes, or did he touch u here, he touched her breasts and khushi forgot to breathe.'.Arnav's eye were now shooting fire'.saying u better not answer me affirmative'.he cupped her and felt her'Khushi closed her eyes at the sweet torture this man was bestowing on her. His other hand curled into her hair and he pulled her hair, bringing her face up. He trailed kisses to the length of her silken neck biting them licking them. Khushi could feel him harden and her excitement increased. He undid the knot on her peignoir and pushed the right side off her shoulder. He went down from her neck to her shoulder kissing it licking it biting it with one track mind to reach the target, the soft swell of her placing wet kisses.,'khushi's hand automatically went to his hair curling into his hair holding him to her breasts . Her head went back and she gave a small moan'Arnav Please'."

The cry of the feeling that came from her, stilled him . he looked at her aroused state, looked at her breasts, they felt heavy, she had her eyes closed and she was definitely aroused. In trance of their chemistry, their passion. She was his to take, ready to go all the way with him. He twitched his jaw' , anger again taking hold of him'passion taking a step back'.tell me khushi'he was now roaming his hand all over her body'her bosom, her feet, her back.. sending sizzling current to her body. He again pulled on her hair'"Look at me Khushi?"

Khushi opened her eyes, the torture, the desire evident there. "Were u as aroused with him. Did u make these noises with him. Was he able to push u this state the way I am doing it. Tell me khushi, did he taste the sweet nectar that ur lips keep promising. Was he able to read what ur body sings"

When those lips quiver at ,my touch , it says make love to me

When those eyes touch me'it says make love to me.,

When those cheeks turn red, at my words, it says make love to me,

When those eyes turn down with a shyness of a bride, it says make love to me.

Tell me khsuhi, did u sing the same to him.

When these hair flow unkempt, the tendrils kissing this face, it says make love to me

When the pulse at the base of ur neck run thousands mile at the touch of my eye, it says make love to me

When these breasts swell and get heavy with just me in the vicinity, it says make love to me'

When this heart beats so loud that I can hear it. It says make love to me

Tell me khushi, did he do that to u'.made ur heart race

When these hands try and touch me and then retreat before feeling me'it says make love to me

When u walk two steps and back off hesitating the outcome it says make love to me'

When ur skin breaks into goose bumps at my touch, it says make love to me

When those eyelids move up saying please u are killing me, now make love to me, it says make love to me.

"So khushi did ur eyes tell him to make love to you.

Did u allow him the pleasure that I let go the other day. did u also tell him to 'Damn khsuhi, he pushed her back and stepped away from her

We decided, that if u ever wanted anything I was ur man'.then why were u with that Boy? Why the hell did u not call me. Get one thing clear khushi, I don't share khushi, women with me are exclusive'..as long as they are with me 'stay warned Khushi. he had fire in his eyes"

this piqued Khushi too'.again he was toying with her'bringing her to the brink and then letting go "Oh YEAH'How Dare U'How Dare U Come Here And warn me against ur hypocrisy ASR. U want exclusive, is it? WHO THE HELL DO U THINK U ARE? 'U REALLY THINK I AM SOME DUMB HELPLESS FEMALE, WHO WILL SIT RIGHT DOWN THE CORNER WAITING FOR U TO THROW BREAD CRUMBS AT ME, AND SEE U EATING ALL THE PIES AS AND WHEN U WANT. U FORGET MR. RAIZADA, I OWN A BRAIN'. .AND THEY ARE OILED ON A DAILY BASIS, I DON'T LET IT RUST. When we agreed we would get to know each other, and as u put it u would be my man, ASR, I accepted it. I was exclusive, till the time u gave me the indication that was not the game. It was an open relationship. U went out with Tanya first Arnav, u had another woman on ur arms'so tell me arnav'was she able to hitch ur breath the way I can do'.the way as u so eloquently put it'my lips sing to u'were hers singing too'..did u give her the pleasure what u denied to me the other night.

SHUT UP KHUSHI, IF U HAD ISSUES U SHUD HAVE COME TO ME, CONFRONTED ME, U SHUD HAVE OBJECTED, IF U DIDN'T LIKE IT.

U forget ASR, I am learning the game and the rules. I am not aware of how is this run. I am not aware that u can object. That u have a right on a man and u can exercise them and that u will not be rebuked.

U COME HERE ALL MIGHTY CLAIMING UR RIGHTS OVER ME'.BUT DAMN U ARNAV, WHEN DID U TELL ME THAT WE HAD RIGHTS ON EACH OTHER. LAST I HEARD OF U IS U TELLING ,ME U WERE NOT INTERESTED IN HAVING ME.

DO U HAVE ANY CLUE, WHAT THAT MADE ME FEEL. U DID NOT CALL ME'.AND THEN THE 3RD DAY U TAKE A SEX BOMB TO ANOTHER PARTY. DOES THIS EINSTINE BRAIN OF URS THINK, IT COULD SEND ME THE SIGNAL THAT TURNED U OFF PERMANENTLY AND THAT U WERE NO MORE INTERESTED. U DID NOT CALL ME FOR THE WHOLE WEEK. I WAITED DAMN U'.BUT NOTHING. U ONLY CONFIRMED MY BELIEF IN HOW FICKLE MEN ARE. I WAITED ARNAV BUT U DID NOT SO MUCH AS TRY TO CONTACT ME.

So what the heck'.there was someone who wasn't repulsed of my company so why cudn't I enjoy'who enjoyed my company and wasn't averse to ..spending time with me'who was not turned off my me'who wanted me'..

"SHUT UP KHUSHI, DON'T U DARE GO THAT LANE'I DON'T THINK I CAN '.WHAT THE HECK'"

Arnav turned, pulled khushi hard, hitting his chest and kissed her. He speared his fingers through her silky hair and cupped her neck. He wasted no time with preliminary get to know you pecks and instead plunged into her mouth.

The stiffness drained from her spine and she kissed him back '.

Precap'

"Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne sone na diya"

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Edited by mtina0207 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I AM SO HAPPY!!!!!

ME FIRST...THAT ALSO FOR ONE OF THE BEST UPDATES!!!

IT WAS AWESOME... THE HEAT, THE CHEMISTRY!!!!

AND THE PRECAP HAS JUST SENT MY BRAIN IN AN OVERDRIVE..

PLZ UPDATE THE NEXT PART ASAP!!!
Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...way to go :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved the confrontation totally agree with khushi he started it first went out with another woman and here he is playing like he is her owner awesome update loved it thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwh that was sooo emotional and loveed the ending cant wait to for the next part plz update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee updatee...
daamn again fightingg ufff ...
both are J of eachotherr uff why cant they accept they have
feelings for eachother
update soon
thnx 4 pm😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
So nw i can sleep:)thnx for pm nd dis super awesome update...luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!! that was so intense, passionate, filled with jealous anger and hearts hurt because they don't want to accept what they really want. At least one doesn't want to do so and Arnav is waiting for her to trust him but couldn't stop himself when he saw the pic.

WOW!!! so they did take a step forward...lets see where it leads them???

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