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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srijaaa127

Wow khushi kissed him...
Awesome update yaar... Plz plz update it soon..






lol yah she did !!!!!


thank y😃ou
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweta...

Your posts just have the power to instantly cheer me up! :D

Thanks goodness this time I read your update in the morning hahahaha after reading them ant night and making me gasp out loud! :P

The update, what can I say Mushfika, seriously; you have some magic of writing... Whatever you write it awesome, whether it be the update or replies to comments on the update, your so down to earth just like your updates :)
Hahahahahah just loved the way arnav teased her about arnavji, bless khushi! And then how he forces her to call him arnav or he won't let her go; and when he said I didn't know you loved lying on my chest made me blush so khushi must've been well blushing! Gosh so cute, and the way she always adds arnav Ji and he catches her, must be so hard to forget the Ji lol! Loved how when she notices she's in his clothes, she assumed hahaha and he didn't say anything since he found it so funny, bless her what thoughts must've gone through her mind ahaha! Then when he asks her for an ASR kiss, I was like :O oh dear, oh, no like awyhhh blushing! And khushi tries to put of she doesn't remeber but how her cheeks go red he knows she does! So cute! Loved your update ! :) I wait eagerly for it every time and it never disappoints me! :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)



OMG OMG OMGGG!!!



swetaaa!!!!! tumhari muh mein ghee shakkar!

you're the sweetest! do you know how your each and every comment brings a BIG BIG And a BIG SMiLE on my FACE???? do you know how big?? do u ?? do u?? bolo bolo?

THIS BIG!


ok now coming to ur SWEET, LOVELY and heart touching comment...


HAYEEE! I'M DEAD YAAR!

lol thank god u read it in the morning! or your GASPS and screams would make EVERY1 UPPP!!! and then you were deadšŸ˜›

awww!!!! REALLYšŸ¤—?? GREAT to know that my update OR REPLIES (surprised lol) has that😳


hahahah well well! i love making ppl blush you know šŸ˜†

o yah! it certainly IS HARD lol šŸ˜† but he ASR you know...how could he let her go without making her give what HE wants and also WITHOUT PAYING for LAST NIGHT ahm ahm!

lol i thought nobody would get that part of arnav realizing that khushi remembers about ther ASR kiss watching her blush since i didn't specify specify it lol ...

i'm sooo glad you liked this update THIS MUCH!


i REALLY REALLY appreciate EVERY comment of yours! i have been noticing you comments since i started this FF ...and each of them just makes me sooo overwhelmed and emotional ...

A BIG HUG!


thanks a LOT!



Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Your posts just have the power to instantly cheer me up! :D

Thanks goodness this time I read your update in the morning hahahaha after reading them ant night and making me gasp out loud! :P

The update, what can I say Mushfika, seriously; you have some magic of writing... Whatever you write it awesome, whether it be the update or replies to comments on the update, your so down to earth just like your updates :)
Hahahahahah just loved the way arnav teased her about arnavji, bless khushi! And then how he forces her to call him arnav or he won't let her go; and when he said I didn't know you loved lying on my chest made me blush so khushi must've been well blushing! Gosh so cute, and the way she always adds arnav Ji and he catches her, must be so hard to forget the Ji lol! Loved how when she notices she's in his clothes, she assumed hahaha and he didn't say anything since he found it so funny, bless her what thoughts must've gone through her mind ahaha! Then when he asks her for an ASR kiss, I was like :O oh dear, oh, no like awyhhh blushing! And khushi tries to put of she doesn't remeber but how her cheeks go red he knows she does! So cute! Loved your update ! :) I wait eagerly for it every time and it never disappoints me! :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)







OMG OMG OMGGG!!!



swetaaa!!!!! tumhari muh mein ghee shakkar!

you're the sweetest! do you know how your each and every comment brings a BIG BIG And a BIG SMiLE on my FACE???? do you know how big?? do u ?? do u?? bolo bolo?

THIS BIG!


ok now coming to ur SWEET, LOVELY and heart touching comment...


HAYEEE! I'M DEAD YAAR!

lol thank god u read it in the morning! or your GASPS and screams would make EVERY1 UPPP!!! and then you were deadšŸ˜›

awww!!!! REALLYšŸ¤—?? GREAT to know that my update OR REPLIES (surprised lol) has that😳




hahahah well well! i love making ppl blush you know šŸ˜†

o yah! it certainly IS HARD lol šŸ˜† but he ASR you know...how could he let her go without making her give what HE wants and also WITHOUT PAYING for LAST NIGHT ahm ahm!


lol i thought nobody would get that part of arnav realizing that khushi remembers about ther ASR kiss watching her blush since i didn't specify specify it lol ...

i'm sooo glad you liked this update THIS MUCH!


i REALLY REALLY appreciate EVERY comment of yours! i have been noticing you comments since i started this FF ...and each of them just makes me sooo overwhelmed and emotional ...

A BIG HUG!


thanks a LOT!
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Posted: 12 years ago















Originally posted by: -Tintin.

AWWW, Too Hot & Adorable



lol

aur blush maat karao ,mujhe šŸ˜†



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fffan123

Awesome update. Loved it. Waiting for more.




thank you!


will tryna update today 😃
Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Your posts just have the power to instantly cheer me up! :D

Thanks goodness this time I read your update in the morning hahahaha after reading them ant night and making me gasp out loud! :P

The update, what can I say Mushfika, seriously; you have some magic of writing... Whatever you write it awesome, whether it be the update or replies to comments on the update, your so down to earth just like your updates :)
Hahahahahah just loved the way arnav teased her about arnavji, bless khushi! And then how he forces her to call him arnav or he won't let her go; and when he said I didn't know you loved lying on my chest made me blush so khushi must've been well blushing! Gosh so cute, and the way she always adds arnav Ji and he catches her, must be so hard to forget the Ji lol! Loved how when she notices she's in his clothes, she assumed hahaha and he didn't say anything since he found it so funny, bless her what thoughts must've gone through her mind ahaha! Then when he asks her for an ASR kiss, I was like :O oh dear, oh, no like awyhhh blushing! And khushi tries to put of she doesn't remeber but how her cheeks go red he knows she does! So cute! Loved your update ! :) I wait eagerly for it every time and it never disappoints me! :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)









OMG OMG OMGGG!!!



swetaaa!!!!! tumhari muh mein ghee shakkar!

you're the sweetest! do you know how your each and every comment brings?? a BIG BIG And a BIG SMiLE on my FACE?... do you know how big?? do u ?? do u?? bolo bolo?

THIS BIG!


ok now coming to ur SWEET, LOVELY and heart touching comment...


HAYEEE! I'M DEAD YAAR!

lol thank god u read it in the morning! or your GASPS and screams would make EVERY1 UPPP!!! and then you were deadšŸ˜›

awww!!!! REALLYšŸ¤—?? GREAT to know that my update OR REPLIES (surprised lol) has that😳




hahahah well well! i love making ppl blush you know šŸ˜†

o yah! it certainly IS HARD lol šŸ˜† but he's ASR you know...how could he let her go without making her give what HE wants and also WITHOUT PAYING for LAST NIGHT ahm ahm!


lol i thought nobody would get that part of arnav realizing that khushi remembers about ther ASR kiss watching her blush since i didn't specify specify it lol ...

i'm sooo glad you liked this update THIS MUCH!


i REALLY REALLY appreciate EVERY comment of yours! i have been noticing you comments since i started this FF ...and each of them just makes me sooo overwhelmed and emotional ...

A BIG HUG!


thanks a LOT!
Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Buddy,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry for the late comment,maaf kardo pilllejjj😃
That was an bombastic update though a short but koi baat nehi becz that was an amazing updatešŸ‘

Awww! Khushi kissed Arnav!!
Arnav is getting naughty day by dayšŸ˜‰
He made her call him'Arnav'
Awesme😃

U take ur time to update, we will wait 😃
Thnx for the PM😃
Hugs & lovesšŸ¤—ā¤ļø





so you commented at last hm??!!! 😳

lol awww! it's OKIE DOKIES buddy! no worries...i'm happy you finally commented lol don need to be sorry! šŸ¤—


lol he surely IS GETTING naughty!!! hmmm khushi gotta watch out...ahm ahm 🤣

and thnx for understanding psyche! i'm gonna update tpday! 😃

and my pleasure

thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

booo!!! i'm backkk!!! šŸ¤—

First of all i really wanna thank sweta for SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT...i'm overwhelmed girl 😳..lol and those of you who commented...really appreciate it! *flying kisses to all of my readers*

i know you guys needed to wait a lot but what to do...already gave you the cause...sorry! and thnx a lot for understanding and waiting patiently.

After coming from school, the first thing that came into mind is that i need to write the next part and update it or they're gonna kill me! šŸ¤¢šŸ˜†


here's my next part! just wrote it! hope you guys like it!

PART: 19


As they got into the car to reached RM, khushi started to get nervous at the thought of subhandra. She started playing with her dupatta as she was too nervous and scared as well. Arnav noticed her this and realized that something is bothering her.

Arnav: khushi? You're okay?

Khush didn't even hear what arnav was saying as she was lost in her thoughts.

Arnav frowned and shook her: khushi?

Khushi: h'..ha?? *coming back from her wave of thoughts*

Arnav: what happened? You're okay?

Khushi: y'yes'..uh Arnavji, did you inform anyone at home about us staying in the hotel?

Arnav: yes why?

Khushi: wh'.whom did you inform?

Arnav: "Di" he answered.

Khushi: does Dadi know about this?

Now arnav got it. He totally understood that khshi is nervous because of that day. He went AGAINST dadi because of her and from that event dadi is infuriated.

Arnav held her hand reassuringly: khushi, Di knows about this means she must have told it to the family right?

Khushi nodded but then she changed her expression: "but arnavji you should have at least informed dadi. What if she gets'''." She stopped abruptly realizing what she was about to say.

Arnav: what if she? What if she gets what khushi?

Khushi: n'.nothing''I mean what if she gets worried..

Arnav: khushi''.di is the only person who can worry so much *he laughed* nobody can bit her Don't worry about dadi. Okay?

Khushi gave a forced smile and went into her wave of thought again.

Arnav just kept glancing at her wondering why she was so worried about dadi. As they reached RM'

Arnav: khushi, you carry on, I'llpark the car, okay?

Khushi: okay

She got out of the car and was about to head toward the house when arnav called her.

Arnav: oh and khushi!

Khushi: ji?

Arnav: As far as the name you're going to call me concerned, it is supposed to be ARNAV not arnav JI remember *he winked*

Khushi : but -

Arnav: well, it's even more than okay if you call me arnav JI since you LOVE my punishments of lying in my chest and giving me my "ASR KISS" so much! I don't have a problem

He just winked and drove off the car leaving khushi with open-mouth.

as they entered RM, NK popped infront of the door leaving a startled khushi and arnav.

NK: Khushijiii!

Khushi: nanheji! Aap to humein dara hi diya.

NK: oh sorry sorry *holding his ear*

NK: vaise khushi ji, app dono kaha thi raat bhaar? Hm hm?? Boliye boliye? BELATED SURAJ RAAT mana rahi thi kya? Hm hm??

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other and then khushi burtst into laughter.

Khushi: nanheji! It's SUHAG RAAT! Not suraj raat.

NK: oh ha wahi wahi *holding his ear*

She smilingly looked at arnav who was giving her an ASR-smirk. She realized that Arnav was smirking remembering what she did last night and in the morning. She remembered her kiss and arnav's ASR-kiss and blushed at the thought of it.

Arnav in ASR tone: khushi I'm going to my room.

Khushi nodded. Arnav went to his room. Khushi was about to follow him when dadi called her.

Subhandra: eh ladki!

That was it! Khushi started shivering in fear as she heard dadi's voice. She turned to see dadi glaring at her.

Khushi: ye''.yes da'di ji?

Subhandra: mere saath aaa mere room mein

Khushi followed her to her room

Subhandra: what do you THINK OF YOURSELF?! First of all''..

She literally started shouting at her for some reasons which khushi didn't get at all and made her scared like hell when Arnav called her

Arnav fr his room: khsuhi? KHUSHI!

Dadi immediately stopped''.

Khushi: da'.dadi what are you./'..talking '.about?

Dadi: I will see you later. But remember one thing. IF YOU EVER DARE TO TELL ARNAV ANYTHING that HAPPENED YOU AND ME, THE CONSEQUENCE WON'T BE GOOD, I PROMISE.

Dadi left leaving a stunned khushi. She was trembling in fear. She didn't even realize that arnav has called her name thousand times and yet she didn't listen. Arnav came downstairs.

He touched by her shoulder which startled her

Khushi: dadiji?

Arnav: khushi? You're okay? It's me ARNAV!

Khushi: oh sorry arn'..arnav''.i'..nothing.

Arnav: what happened khushi? I have been calling you for a long time and you didn't even hear! Is everything alright?

Khushi: yah arnav,'..i was just thinking about '.thinking about babuji.

Arnav: achha khushi. I need to talk to you.

Khushi : yah?

Arnav: I just had a call from aman. I have to go to delhi for 2 days for an importan meeting.

This made khushi MORE worried about staying back ALONE.

Khushi: KYA? You''you're going to DELHI FOR 2 DAYS???

Arnav: yah''why are you shocked?

Khshi: Arnav'.you'..how can you leave me here for 2 DAYS?

Arnav stared at her for some time. He didn't know wat's up with her all of a sudden.

Arnav: khushi'''khushi khushi! I'm not LEAVING YOU ! it's just that I have a meeting. And I would SURELY take you but I would be busy in the meeting and work so much that you'll get bored and I dom't want you to stay in the hotel ALONE at all for the whole 2 days! It's not good for you.

Khushi: but-

Arnav: khushi, you RISKY IT IS to stay a girl in the hotel ALONe, don't you? Please try to understand sweetheart

Khushi nodded. Arnav caressed her cheek. And placed a peck on her forehead.

Arnav: I'll leave now. Okay?

Khushi nervously: okay.


ok now,...i knwo it'CERTAINLY IS A SHORT UPDATE! but i'm thinking to update on Sunday as well this time IF...IF i get enough feedback by then? okies??

and also, VIOLENCE IS BACK šŸ˜†šŸ˜† i mean since they're back in RM, obviously, there will b VIOLENCE 😭 plus you guys need to tolerate our sweet ssweet hitler dadi for sometime but i promise it won't be long 😃


hope you guys liked this part. i didn't wanna disappoint you guys by this short update, however, i had to make a quick update and came up with this! i truly apologize for that šŸ˜’

but as i said, i'll hopefully update on sunday...😊


please leave your comments behind and do press the like button.

PM: want PMs?? Buddy me pls šŸ˜‰


THANK YOU!!


PART 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66682699

Thread 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3132359/ff-arshi-and-he-returned-part-16-updated


Thread 2 : (page 1)

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what the hell is wrong with asr does he not realize khushi ia scared of dadi even a blind nan can see that and he is leaving her for two days he was gone for a few hours and look at the things she did poor khushi thanks for the pm



Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
how can arnav leave her????? didnt he realised how much scared she was?????

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