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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Well, well well, where exactly do I start from? First of all seein the pm of new thread 2 and he returned by Mushfika just brought one if the biggest smiles on my face, because. Love this ff, just like I love my iPad (literally I'm obsessed) then...


I click on the link and think... Hmmm shall I read the update, or check for relies to my comments... And so I started scrolling up when I saw the red writing before the update, and I read that...

And to see that you were thankin me... Sweta who's not that popular on if! And that to for my comments made me smile even more... (Yes that was possible to smile more haha) I mean its sooo sweet you acknowledged my comments, I'm glad my comments can help you, i mean millions must comment. And for you to notice mine is an achievement in my eyes :D and nothing ever goes past me, I love sme of the wierdest arnav and khushi scenes hahahahah! But thanks for the comment :) really they are special to know you do care what people think of your story, as some jus like it(not saying here's something wrong it that, don't get me wrong p) :)

Next on to your update, we'll guess what once again I read it in the morning thank god hahahah I mean, the emotions into thru reading is amazing :) and the wait for your update is always worth it :) I mean from the start where khushi is nervous, playing with her dupatta, arnav and her tuning is amazing he knows something's playing on her mind, and he true to cheer her up bless, hec changed s much! :) love him :) then when they're out the car... Cute, sweet and hilarious scene LMFAO :) the way he reminds her to refer to him as arnav and he know she ps not, s he has to make her blush, it's ASR after all, loved seriously LOVED how he goes well it's ok if you want to call me arnavji since you must love being punished, hahahahahahahahah with reference to lying on his chest ( BEsT SCENE EVER!!) and the ASR kiss (blushing :)) and his wink mar Jawan :D he's the best, and thus leaving our KKG O mouthed once again classic :) and then nanhejis reference to Suraj raaat lol! So funny he is!

And then dadi I I'm NOOo shits going down rolling my sleeves up! And then she's all like eh ladki, like oooi u wanna refer to her like that again and I'll give you a tight slap :P! And the ways shes talking to her and m wishing kash arnavji sun lete... Lekinpicture abhi baki hai mere dost :)ok arnavs going Delhi fr 2!days leaving our khushi here, but. Know what... That's ok... Why? Cuz when arnav returns and a whole load of god knows what Mushfika has panned for us happens (breathe) lol... Arnav will fight for khushi :) and that's what I desperately cannot wait for... So I'm happy to put with with hitler dadi for a bit, just to see her chotte cuss her off for bushing his khushi :D! Hahahahahahahahah m excited now... Can't wait fr the next part! :) hope you do update on Sunday (praying to god) :) thanks for the pm...

Ps sorry this pm is a rather too long, but what can I do it's the effects of your updates :)




HEY SWETAAA!!!! O MY GOSH UR COMMENTTT!!! u're the sweetest man!

ok now coming to ur ESSAY COMMEntšŸ˜†

AWWW REALLY????? now UR COMMENT BROUGHT A REALLY BIGGG SMILE IN MY FACE


and lol what are you saying?

the way you comment, the way you praise my writing, my FF and all that, HOW CAN I NOT SEE YOUR COMMENT AND NOT REPLY TO SUCH A PRECIOUS COMMENT ?! HUH? HUH? BOLO BOLO!!



AWWW!!! REALLY?? you wait this eagerly for my update?!


and LMHOOO!!! SLEEVES UP?? to give ounches?? tyo our HITLER DADI??

hahahahah!!! ur hilarious girl!!

and thnx a lot for specifying ur likes!!! i'm really glad you liked the arshi scene...each time i write a part of it, i always have to think about at LEAST one arshi scene to impress you guys lol šŸ˜†

you seriously made me blush today...

well you always do...

i donno how to thank you sweta!

THANKS A LOTTT
Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sana11

loved the updatešŸ‘but equally worried for khushišŸ˜”hope she ll be fine..i hope dadi doesn t harm her more...pls update the next one soon😊



thanks thnx a lot! gla dyou liked it

and no worries...😃

and yap will update today!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SPNnIPKKNDlover

i feel like killing dadi anyways nice update and update soon:)



hahahaha PILIJ DO SOOO!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthick

So now khushi s alone...that 2oo with dat dadi...
Dnt kno wats going 2 happn wen Arnav left home
Waitng 4 d nxt part



yesss😭😭


hmmm...


aur kuch ho na ho ...i'm surely gonna be killed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASR6262

awesome story amazing update continue soon and thank u for pm me



awww! thnx a lot buddy! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Wow! Superb update budšŸ‘
though short but not soo much,chalta hešŸ˜‰
khushi is sooo afraid of this Dadi😲
Can i plss kill Dadi😔😔pls pls😭
she is soo nasty yaar, how did she live in an Ashram??šŸ˜•
Arnav_dude_take care of her , this Dadi is surely make ur life a living hell🤢

OH NK! Seriously Buddy-SURAJ RAT??🤣🤣
this was epic,MushfikašŸ˜†šŸ‘šŸ¼

what was Dadi trying to tell Khushi??😲

Arnav dnt leave her,buddy!
take her with u somehow😭

another superb update,yarr😳
loved Arnav's threat to khushi-CUTEšŸ˜›šŸ˜³

THNX FOR THE PM,BUDDY
HUGSšŸ¤—



heyyy!!!!!


my frienddd!! LOL


thnx a lot for such a comment 😳

oh well you're more than welcome to kill dadi dear!!! PLEASE DO KILL HER@!!!! you don even need to ask me!! even I AM WITH YOU@@ šŸ¤£šŸ˜‰

hahahaha i wonder that too...dadi and AHRAM?? šŸ˜•

hahahah thnx ...happy that you liked that "SURAJ RAAT" part!

awww!!! i'm really happy you liked it dear!

and thnx for commenting!!

love ya!

HUGS BACK!!! šŸ¤—


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mariajamal

HEY UPDATE YR PLZ... WHY U GIVEN PUNISH TO THOSE PEOPLE WHO LIKES UR UPDATE... DON'T DO THT PLZ...




awww!!! i'm sooo sorry yaar!!

😭


but thnx a lot!

good to know that you like my FF this much! 😳


sorry again1! gonna updat enow
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Posted: 12 years ago
MUSH UPDATE?



yap! just on my way to update ...😃




Mushfika thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Well, well well, where exactly do I start from? First of all seein the pm of new thread 2 and he returned by Mushfika just brought one if the biggest smiles on my face, because. Love this ff, just like I love my iPad (literally I'm obsessed) then...


I click on the link and think... Hmmm shall I read the update, or check for relies to my comments... And so I started scrolling up when I saw the red writing before the update, and I read that...

And to see that you were thankin me... Sweta who's not that popular on if! And that to for my comments made me smile even more... (Yes that was possible to smile more haha) I mean its sooo sweet you acknowledged my comments, I'm glad my comments can help you, i mean millions must comment. And for you to notice mine is an achievement in my eyes :D and nothing ever goes past me, I love sme of the wierdest arnav and khushi scenes hahahahah! But thanks for the comment :) really they are special to know you do care what people think of your story, as some jus like it(not saying here's something wrong it that, don't get me wrong p) :)

Next on to your update, we'll guess what once again I read it in the morning thank god hahahah I mean, the emotions into thru reading is amazing :) and the wait for your update is always worth it :) I mean from the start where khushi is nervous, playing with her dupatta, arnav and her tuning is amazing he knows something's playing on her mind, and he true to cheer her up bless, hec changed s much! :) love him :) then when they're out the car... Cute, sweet and hilarious scene LMFAO :) the way he reminds her to refer to him as arnav and he know she ps not, s he has to make her blush, it's ASR after all, loved seriously LOVED how he goes well it's ok if you want to call me arnavji since you must love being punished, hahahahahahahahah with reference to lying on his chest ( BEsT SCENE EVER!!) and the ASR kiss (blushing :)) and his wink mar Jawan :D he's the best, and thus leaving our KKG O mouthed once again classic :) and then nanhejis reference to Suraj raaat lol! So funny he is!

And then dadi I I'm NOOo shits going down rolling my sleeves up! And then she's all like eh ladki, like oooi u wanna refer to her like that again and I'll give you a tight slap :P! And the ways shes talking to her and m wishing kash arnavji sun lete... Lekinpicture abhi baki hai mere dost :)ok arnavs going Delhi fr 2!days leaving our khushi here, but. Know what... That's ok... Why? Cuz when arnav returns and a whole load of god knows what Mushfika has panned for us happens (breathe) lol... Arnav will fight for khushi :) and that's what I desperately cannot wait for... So I'm happy to put with with hitler dadi for a bit, just to see her chotte cuss her off for bushing his khushi :D! Hahahahahahahahah m excited now... Can't wait fr the next part! :) hope you do update on Sunday (praying to god) :) thanks for the pm...

Ps sorry this pm is a rather too long, but what can I do it's the effects of your updates :)


HEY SWETAAA!!!! O MY GOSH UR COMMENTTT!!! u're the sweetest man!

ok now coming to ur ESSAY COMMEntšŸ˜†

AWWW REALLY????? now UR COMMENT BROUGHT A REALLY BIGGG SMILE IN MY FACE


and lol what are you saying?

the way you comment, the way you praise my writing, my FF and all that, HOW CAN I NOT SEE YOUR COMMENT AND NOT REPLY TO SUCH A PRECIOUS COMMENT ?! HUH? HUH? BOLO BOLO!!



AWWW!!! REALLY?? you wait this eagerly for my update?!


and LMHOOO!!! SLEEVES UP?? to give ounches?? tyo our HITLER DADI??

hahahahah!!! ur hilarious girl!!

and thnx a lot for specifying ur likes!!! i'm really glad you liked the arshi scene...each time i write a part of it, i always have to think about at LEAST one arshi scene to impress you guys lol šŸ˜†

you seriously made me blush today...

well you always do...

i donno how to thank you sweta!

THANKS A LOTTT
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey there! how's everyone? hope all of you are badiya 😃...


just replied to all of ur comments...hmmm i see a lot of ppl VERY PISSED OF AT ME...well AND ARNAV for leaving khushi under that dadi! 😔ahm! DARA DIYA TUM LOGO NE YAAR! now i'll have night mares...yes esp YOU @Kbtr 🤢🤣...and not only her but you guys too @Dumas @@copervaise and many others


but that's what my FF based on right?? and think it in this way...the more that hitler dadi tortures her, the better penalties she will get šŸ¤£šŸ˜‰ *muhahahh evil laugh* lol

and again! thnx to EVERY one for ur precious comments esp

@SWETA@mimosa@Psyche@Aashima and all of my readers who commented...thank you!


and THIS UPDATE IS LONGGG!!!! 😃 and there's a reason behind it which you will get to know after reading it (do not expect much pls...)



THOSE OF YOU WHO WANT PMs, PLS BUDDY ME!

INDEX OF "AND HE RETURNED" IS IN PAGE 1...

ok no more talks now šŸ˜† here you go!


PART: 20

As Arnav left, Dadi sent Anjali to shyam's place. Payal and akash went out and mami and nani went to the mandir.

As everyone left, Dadi called khushi to her room.

Subhandra: HOW MANY TIMES DO I NEED TO CALL YOUR NAME ?

Khushi: I'm sorry dadiji. Actually I was''

Subhandra: I don't need your explanation. That too from such a girl who doesn't have a CHARACTER.

Khushi with tears just stared at her not getting anything of what she's saying.

Subhandra: YOU TRIED TO DEVELOP A RELATIONSHIP WITH DAMADJI?

Khushi was getting all her questing. Why she hates her this much, why she behaved with her in such a way from the first day she came to RM.

Khushi: da''dadiji

Subhandra: CHUP! YOU ARE A GOLD-DIGGER! First you tried to have a relationship with damadji, A MARRIED MAN, my Anjali bitiya's HUSBAND.

She grabbed her hair into his feast.

Subhandra: and when you saw arnav who had the whole property in his name, you trapped him?

and married him?

Khushi: aahhh!! Dadi'.dadi ji! Mera sarr'..my head is spinning''.ah

Khushi literally cried out''.it's been only 3 days with dadi's violence and now this.

Subhandra: I'm OBVIOUSLY doing this to give you PAIN'..you didn't think a BIT when you started a relationship with damadji. You didn't even think about ANJALI! It's good that I got to know these from damadji.

Khushi: aahhh ! dadi yeh''yeh sab jhooth hai''.shyam ji ne HUMEIN dhoka diya hai. I didn't'..

She couldn't finish her sentence when Dadi hit her back with her elbow.

Khushi fell on the ground facing her back towards subhandra.. Subhandra got out a stick. She came towards her.

Subhandra suddenly hit her back with the stick so hard that khushi just screamed her heart out in pain

Khushi: AAAhhh

Dadi: now ADMIT THE TRUTH.

Khushi kept crying.

Subhandra hit her back again: ADMIT IT! And YOU NEED TO ADMIT IT INFRONT OF ARNAV AS WELL!!

Suddenly the door bell rang which made subbhandra stop immediately.

Subhandra: sun ladki! You WON"T LET ANYBODY HAVE EVEN A DOUBT ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TODAY! I WILL SEE YOU LATER! Meri Anjali ki ghaar barbad karne chali ayithi na tu! Now you'll yourself ADMIT THE TRUTH AND LEAVE THE HOUSE!

She went downstairs to open the door leaving a badly hurt khushi.

Khsuhi slowly started to get up from the ground but fell again as she became too week. Her back was started to pain so much that she felt somebody has cracked her backbone. She finally got up and went to her room.


OOo


As she reached her room, her phone started to ring. She picked up the phone.

Khushi closing her eyes in pain: h'''.hello

Arnav: hi sweetheart

Khushi jerked open her eyes: ARNAV!

Arnav worried: What happened khushi? U ok?

Khushi: ARnav wo''.

Bu he remembered what dadi say''' ". IF YOU EVER DARE TO TELL ARNAV ANYTHING that HAPPENED YOU AND ME, THE CONSEQUENCE WON'T BE GOOD, I PROMISE"

Arnav had started to get worried more and more: khushi? Khushi what happened?? Are YOU ALRIGHT??

Khushi started to laugh with tears in her eyes to avoid his questions: oh arnav! You get worried so much! Of course I'm okay. What'.ah! *she cried out in pain*

Arnav: khushi?

Khushi: what would happen to me?

Arnav: DON"T YOU EVER, EVER try to do this kind of FUN with me! Do you get that?

Khush with tears: ohkay ! sorry! Why did you call?

Arnav: do I need a reason to call my wife now?

Khushi: no it'..it's not like that. I was'..actua'..actually WORKING.

Arnav: so now you don't have time for you husband ha?

Khushi: uh'.an''arna''.i'..no'..it's

Arnav laughed: khushi! Why do you get so nervous? I was kidding! Ok I'll hang up'..will talk to you at night hm?

Khushi: okay

As soon as they finished talking, khushi got ready with a cover back and full sleeves salwar kamiz to cover her wounds and went downstairs/.



OOo


Nani: khushi bitiya?

Khushi turned: j'ji nanni ji

Nani got worried seeing her

Nani: khushi bitiya! You look so week!

Khushi: I...i actually'.i don't know ! I'm totally okay ani

Nani: are you sure?

Khushi: yes!

Nanin: by the way Where are you going? That too in a full sleeve outfit? It's quite hot outside dear

Khushi: wo'..actually, nanii I thought of wearing some full sleeves outfits from now on. Doctor told me to wear the full sleeves since I just recovered from fever.

Nani: oh okay then. But where are you going??

Khushi: oh I was going to mandir actually.

Nani: oh okay.

Khushi left and went to the hospital.



OOO



Doctor: hello Mrs raizada.

Khushi: hello doctor.

Doctor: what's the problem?

Khushi: I actually got hurt'..um in my back and arms.

Doctor: Can I see it?

Khushi showed her arms and then her back.

Doctor: well Mrs Raizada, these wounds won't heal very quickly as it's been infected badly. And it seems like you have been hurt way before?!

Khushi: yes actually

Doctor: how did you get these wounds though? Seems like someone has'.

Khushi interrupted: NO! *she almost shouted* I mean no doctor. I just'.i just slipped in the washroom and got injured.

Doctor: but Mrs Raizada! It doesn't seem like that! It's okay if you tell me. I know Raizada family from ages. I can talk to them about it if you're afraid of someone. Did Somebody'.

Khushi: I said NO! NOBODY did anything.

Doctor: are you sure?

Khushi: YES!

Docotr: ok then, I'm prescribing some medicines and anticiptic cream which you'll need to apply every night.

Khushi nodded and left.

As khushi came out of the hospital and was standing outside, her cell phone rang.

Arnav: hello sweetheart!

Khushi: oh hi arnav...*she sounded tensed*

Arnav: what are you doing?

Khushi: nothing''I'm just lying in my bed'''..

Ooops sorry! had to stop there šŸ˜›šŸ˜†


hmmm i know i know!!! you guys must be thinking ki aaj suraj kaha se nikla as i have update this LONG update...long tha na?? hm?? LOL šŸ˜†


and finally got why i made this update long?? YES ! so that you guys do not RAGE ! lol i know you were already pissed off at ME FOR the previous update and this update has surely made you feel like breaking every thing infront of you


i know and THAT"S Y I MADE IT LONG!!!! PLS BE PATIENT@@@


i PROMISE THIS DADI TRACK WONT BE LONG okies?? and there are a LOT MORE COMING UP !


PLS PLS PLEASEEE DO COMMENT AND PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON...each comment of yours means a LOT TO ME!


THANK YOU!

PART 21 A: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67234547

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago

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