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Posted: 13 years ago
Man ..that was ome update but u said something about arnav wanting khushi in his life but here ASR is saying that he does not want her anymore...I hope arnav also gets it from khushi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Friends ...thanks so much so much ...for the comments...
First of all i am a goldieee. now/...Ahem ahem...
I just wrote ydy that whenever i update the post i get goose bumps...whether the readers will like it or not and i keep updating the link to my post to know the verdict...its so scary...But end of the day...love it when i get such positive comments and response...
A sincere
here is the next post...Hope u enjoy it..,..pls do let me know how was it...

U had me'I almost applauded'she is right under my nose. And then u know what khushi, the day u were in my office, u actually looked into my eyes'a moment, but u did 'and that's when the mystery girl came in front of me'those eyes gave u away'..those eyes that mesmerized me the first time I saw into them'.whispered ASR.

I thought why does she hide behind the glasses and the next instance I was like no'good she does, else she will keep killing people with those killer. ASR looked deep into her eyes'.I was being generous thinking, I need to give her a chance to get to know me, to understand me, I want her to come to me willingly, to reveal her identity. But that was not to be'was it? Had I not come today, u guys wud have carried on'Funny I could actually see the relief in ur eyes when I said I won't be there at the party. One thing'just one thing I wanted to ask, why? why wudn't u come and tell me'.But u know what khsuhi like I said earlier'.tchhh U do not hold the spell any more on me'the mirage was exactly that'a mirage'the reality Is disgusting'.and I am not interested'ANYMORE'

Saying that with fire and disgust in his eyes, arnav turned to walk out. He was on his way out when he heard, "JUST A SECOND MR. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA".

He turned around, and what he saw surprised him completely. Khushi's eyes were red but not with tears. They were red with fire'.there was a mass of anger emanating from her being and she was walking towards him. She said, "what happened Mr. raizada, said ur piece is it, and the ASR that u are, u wudnt have time for the shit that others would want to shell out. Do u? Of course u don't, but u know what, for a change u are gonna take all the shit that I am gonna shell out MR HOITY TOITY MIGHTY RIAZADA."

"SO WHAT WERE U SAYING WHY DID I NOT TELL U, SO TELL ME ARNAV, WHY DIDN'T U TELL ME? AFTER KNOWING WHO I WERE WHY DIDN'T U BRING THINGS OUT IN OPEN, WHY STAY QUIET, NOW I WILL TELL YOU WHY, COZ U WERE ENJOYING PLAYING THE CAT AND MOUSE GAME WITH ME. U WERE ENJOYING DANGLING ME ON THE WIRE WITH YOUR INNUENDOES, AND AS U PUT IT THE MIGHTY RAIZADA KNOWS HIS EFFECT ON WOMEN FOLKS, U WERE ENJOYING THAT EFFECT U HAD ON ME'U MACHIAVELLI, U SADIST."

Arnav could not believe that this girl was trying to turn the tables on him. He was stumped.

"U HAVE THE GAL TO TELL ME WHY I DID NOT COME CLEAN WITH YOU,, TELL ME WHY THE HELL SHUD I HAVE DONE THAT. " continued Khushi "For ALL I KNEW U WERE STILL SEARCHING FOR THE GIRL FROM THE SHOW. The entire nation knows about mr. Raizada's thrust for the mystery girl. That news-paper article, that Private detective, asking people around, threatening Aman and la with their job, pulling out ur rank on them. U think I am not aware of that and like I said u were getting ur kicks, however Cheap they were.

"I was getting a kick, I was ''" raged Arnav,

Yes ASR u were getting ur kicks'."

"How dare u Khushi"

"Yes I dare'.and I dare coz I know I am right. Talk of being just'..shall we Mr. Know it all SINGH RAIZADA'"'Arnav gave her a ferocious look, his hands were now closed into a fist, letting khushi know that his anger was on a thin line But khushi was beyond caring,

WHAT DID U SAY, WHY DID I NOT COME CLEAN, WELL'.lets go back and see when did u give me the comfort that i could come clean to u, shall we,. .so when was it, the first time, when I am against the rich, and u did exactly what a rich spoiled kid would do'I need the lollipop and I need it at any cost'U threatened the AR group account with A&A'u played ur money, well shud I have come clean then ASR that myyy'this man is a stubborn kid'he gets what he wants

or no was it the second time, when I come to ur office and all u could talk about was getting me interested in you. Having an upper hand over me'.when u clearly tell me that u have three things in mind'.two of them being finding the mystery girl and getting me interested in u./..was it then ASR? I shud have come to u'..well why wud I do that'.OH yes'..Man this is the man'.U likes to be on top'literally'.and is interested in two females'.knowing the interest in 2nd one is only so he can find the first one.

Or was it the third time when u called me to blast at me for not listening to you and having the courage to walk away'what shud I have felt ASR'..the comfort that man'this guy is amazing'.his ego is a wow'he can't even take a girl walking away and gives a buzz to let her know he is angry with her over something as silly as that'..yes I shud have come clean then ASR isn't it'.u wud have taken my piece so peacefully.

Or no not even then'it was the fourth time when I came to ur office with a wonderful solution to take ur brother in law down but all u could think of was revenge,'..I shud have been like.,'My he does not forgive easily'so what khushi'am sure he will be different with you isn't it'or was it when again u were threatening me with Aman's job..'with A&A account ruin their reputation just to prove ur might'.that shud have given me comfort isn't it'.man if he can ruin his friends firm'he won't have any such thought for the girl'when he will know that he has been dealing with her for past over a week'.he will take it in his stride'even though he threatens me with no loyalty towards his friend'.or later on ASR,'.."

Shud I have told u then'..or when u were throwing ur puns at me'..that man he thinks me worthy of sharing his jokes'.

WHEN ASR, AM I THAT THICK'WHY CAN'T I SEE ANY SCENARIO CONDUCIVE WHERE I COULD COME AND CONFESS'HAVING A COMFORT THAT U WILL BE RATIONAL ENOUGH TO UNDERSTAND THE SITUATION AND NOT TAKE UR INFAMOUS WRATH ON ME'.WHEN ASR TELL ME JUST WHEN'????

Precap: Some more fireworks and both are unhappy away from each other'

Hi Huys to keep the post short.,...but i did not want to dilute Khushi's POV...
pls bear and do comment how u liked it...See you
Edited by mtina0207 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me iind to comment loved it to the core dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
first off a really really really BIG sorry i keep having to only like and not comment due to the amount work load i have 😳

second off thanks for the consistent pms i do read every update and i love ur story

third off 😲 loved how khushi back talked and showed asr his place

LOVED LOVED LOVED this update
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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked the update
Nice
Looking fwdvto next now
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think you have done complete justice to Khushi's thinking and yes that was awesom she really gave it back to him and he deserved every bit of it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERLIKE!!!!

she really did turn the tables on him...i was suppoting atnav all along the confrontation thinking khushi was playing with him...but she just made me rethink!!! she did justify herself really well...

do update soon...i my dying to know how their life goes on after this confrontation
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear
khushi's POV was very apt and showed the mirror to the mighty ASR, in fact before this face off, i had mentioned that both were in a way right in their angle but now after reading khushi's POV, i mean she is fully justified by not revealing her identity as attorney and showstopper is herself, OMG, the instances she gave why she did what she did, was really a tight slap on the mighty ASR's face. now she is so hurt and expressed herself being brutally honest to him, she showed his face to himself which no one dared so far,

ASR is going to feel even more hurt because when the facts are shown in a brutal way like what khushi did, a character like ASR's ego will get wounded big time, but in this whole scenario, you also portrayed the hidden love blossoming between the two in a disguised form, i.e the hurt they are showing to each other as if they have the right to say what they said to each other, you dont get angry or show your rage to this extent unless and until you treat them in your heart to close to you.

A love blossoming through hurt feelings, so beautifully written dear. loved it, i will be eagerly waiting to read the next chapter. cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm...

YES!!!

You tell him Khushi!!!...All laid out for him by a first class lawyer ...chronological and logical...his position--indefensible...you go girl!!!

Can't wait to see if Arnav is able to rebut any of her arguments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
GO kushi...show hiom girl...fantastic update ...loved it

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