Mayur Os-Ms.Gawky&Mr.Crummy Last Prt,Pg-19

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Guys ..
Here in the four years of mine in India Forums
This is my first and formost attempt..
So I am trying it with a Small OS...
I hope You will like it..
It has been divided into parts.
Just 2-3 Parts..
I badly need your all support.



Ms.Gawky & Mr.Crummy
(Part 1)

TRINGGG!!!...

The Alarm clock ringing at its peak and waiting to be stopped by its master who was sleeping covering her face in the red and white flower work blanket'

"What the hell is this'Can't in this world,anyone could let me sleep properly",She groaned loudly and switched of her alarm in the most annoy manner.She took out her beautifull creamy brownish white hands fom the blanket and switched of the alarm.Slowly removing the blanket from her face so that the beautifull sun outside could get a chance to touch her angelic face.

She was Nupur Bhushan .Who loves her sleep more than anything in this world.She can sacrifice anything but not her sleep.

Nupur's P.O.V

"Oh!! God..I am again late'","Ms.Nupur Bhushan ,You better get ready fast else you will get late for your class".

I quickly wore a white colored sleeveless funky top and a blue coloured which was perfectly fitting my curves showing me neither to fat nor to lean,the I wore white coloured with pink lining gliders, and a silver bracelet on my right hand which has a very unquie design and is very close to my heart(Reason will be told afterwords) and wearing my watch I came down running,Greeted to Dad,had my breakfast ,Grabbed my Activa keys and rushed outside.

Damm This traffic it just hate it.It has to be a traffic jam when I am getting late specially for those boring and extremly monotnous "Special Computer languages" course.Arghhh!!! I just hate it'just hate it to the core.God please spare me from this torcher.

I was mumbling some to gods to make the traffic clear and as soon as the traffic goes clear I just run my activa to it's fullest without caring anyone.Since my whole mind was occupied in reaching the institute on time still I could manage to see that someone was trying to overtake me.Slowing that person was beside me ,his face was cover with halmet was driving Royal enfiled Bullet.Oh my gosh!!..My favorite bike but now I have to concentrate on reaching the institute.Ms.Nupur Bhushan Pay attention.

Soon that bike overtook me spreading a mud on my clothes which was enough for me to raise my temper,I speeded my activa and shouted on him on the top of my voice"Hy!!. Are You blind !!Dont you know how to drive!!Hy..I am talking to jerk."I was shouting on him and he was completely unawre of mine."How dare hi to ignore me".Again I was about scream on him but he was far away from me till then.Alas!! How could my activa could complete from his Royal Enfield ,But I also promised myself that I wont leave that idiot,jerk at all.

Finally my journey overed and I reached to my instution "hurray,I am on time".I removed my heltmet,my summercoat,my goggles ,my gloves and was paking them to kept inside it.Luckily my dress

Doesn't spoiled only it was summercoat which was full of mud and little bit on my face.As I turned I saw Gunjan Was fuming on me,Well I actually I know the reason of that.

*Gunjan is my Best Firnd .

Guys actually I promised her to meet her 1 hr before but you all know na why I got late*

"Gunjan Jaan!!I am so sorry .It's because of that stupid alarm it didn't ring on time due to which I got late !!I am sorry dear"*I made a cute puppy face and I know Gunjan will soon melt down**This was actual happened*.

She smiles and says "okay , but this for the last time ,next time I will charge you a high treat got it."

"Got it mam!..Now let's proceed we are already getting late".

Saying so we moved,But as usual my key got fallen down from my hands*why on earth can't anything be stable in my hands for sometime,if it is in my hand,it intend to fall down from that**sigh*

I moved down to pick up them and as soon as turned to walk I bumped up with someone..

Gosh he has a such a broadchest*hey!! Don't take me wrong the way I got bumped it seems he spends most of his time in gym*.I had prepared myself from falling down and due that fear I had already closed my eyes.But after some moments I realised that some pairs of arms around my waist and I didn't let me fall down,Slowly I opened my eyes .My eyes met with deep hazal coloured eyes..Oh God Iwas drowning in them when suddenly I was pulled of with a jerk!!Ouch !!That pains.

I was about to thank him when suddenly he burst on me."Can't you see!!because of you my cigrette has fallen down.Can't your perform multitasking?"I was like Blank'Why the hell on earth he screaming on me and what does he meant by sayibg multitasking ,Seeing my question look he himself explained me that"I mean , can't you see and walk properly."Before I could retort back to that jerk,He was out of my way.Stamping my foot I proceed towards my class fuming with anger.As soon as I reached class ,Only one seat was empty as Gunjan was sitting with Samrat.I know Samrat is a very good boy but still this time I nedd my friend.With heavy heart I seated my self on the empty bench I wish I could get a partner then at that time Our Teacher Mr.Vankateshwar Introduces a new class fellow.Though he is coming in the middle of the course and blah blah..!!!who cares who is he and what he do..!!Well my whole mind was occupied by that jerk,idiot,bloody smoker.I just hate smoker.I just can't tolerate them at all and he touched me.Ewww'..I felt disgust.I was so engrossed in My Self when Mr. Vankateshwar called me and says to help his new Student.I says okay as don't' mind in helping people ,its just that they don't seek my help as instead of jelping them I usually increases their work*oops*.When the new student entered in the class my whole breath got stop.

Oh God!!! You cant be this cruel'You won't imagine he was same jerk,idiot and'.oh god why my vocalbury is so bad ,I need to learn so many words to abuse him'.My temper was at its peak as now I have to help him..Could you imagine''.. him.No never,not in my wildest dreams I am going to do.

Then He introduces himself as"MAYANK SHARMA".



phewww...That was soo long part...

i hope ypu were not get bored...

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ready for all type of critization and chappels..😆

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Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo shaffyyy
yeee we got a new writer 4 our mayur.
i m really happy hun
i dont know whether u believe it or not but i was thinking to ask u 2 write mn ff as u already made many VM on them..
today i got it.. thank u so much


wow it was awesome start.
heheheh nups was nautanki as usual
and mayank- bapre what an attitude- totally killing yaar

veryyynice start
plz do cont. it
and more n more ff/os/ss on MN

All the best
TC


note:wowmefirst 1 to comment..:D

Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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congo for first one shot 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

congo for first one shot 👍🏼




ThanKs A lot Dear..
You I was Hell nervous while posting...

God Knows How are you going to like.. it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratss dear for writing and posting your first OS*hugsss*
really a sweet one
i must say well written too
i loved it
do make more*hugs*
God Bless you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Congo shaffyyy
yeee we got a new writer 4 our mayur.
i m really happy hun
i dont know whether u believe it or not but i was thinking to ask u 2 write mn ff as u already made many VM on them..
today i got it.. thank u so much


wow it was awesome start.
heheheh nups was nautanki as usual
and mayank- bapre what an attitude- totally killing yaar

veryyynice start
plz do cont. it
and more n more ff/os/ss on MN

All the best
TC


note:wowmefirst 1 to comment..:D



Thank you so much Faria Jaani..
You know these comments are so precious and important for me.

Thanks a lot dear.
I donot have words to describe.I am becoming emotional.
thanks*hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maria.

congratss dear for writing and posting your first OS*hugsss*

really a sweet one
i must say well written too
i loved it
do make more*hugs*
God Bless you..



Thank you so much Didi..
I was so waiting for your comment..
You know you was my inspiration ..
By reading your FF
recent days i thought why not to give a try.
Well there are many.. you are at the top then
Fiza di,Sujaji
Preethi,Mehak
Anila...

and many mnay more...

thank you so much

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooo after wndrfull VM's nw ths amazing OS awsm plzz update next part soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafyyy



Thank you so much Faria Jaani..
You know these comments are so precious and important for me.

Thanks a lot dear.
I donot have words to describe.I am becoming emotional.
thanks*hugs*


u r most welcome dear
u know na how much i like MN, MN FF and MN writers
all MN writers r fabulous and awesome in my eyes...
i wanna HUG u 4 writing on MN
i hope u will write more...
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Congos dear 4 ur new MN OS!🥳
interestin start!😃
wud luv 2 read more! update soon!😳

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