Mayur Os-Ms.Gawky&Mr.Crummy Last Prt,Pg-19 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ...vula_kv...

amazing start shafyy👏




THANK YOU DEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Congrats...
Lovly start.





THanks..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kirti123

congo dear

nice part
continue soon 😊


i am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Cute one di!! Continue soon...


sure i will continue it soon...
thanks for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: additive_monaya

is this really your first work?😲

it was amazing
cont soon
thanx for pm


thanks a lot...

yes it is my first work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fend

awesome os beautiful start loved it👏


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thank a lot dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irum.

WOW!!!! We have another writer for Mayur.

Shaffy congrates girl for ur first OS.🥳
U wrote it so well.It was not felt that u r writing first time.Too good.👏
The concept ws nice.
Waiting for next part.
Do update soon haan.
I m waiting.
Or ab tum SS k liye sochna start kr do.Hum itni aasani nahi chodey ge tumahin😉


Thank you so much..
i am glad that you liked it...

You see it's mayur magic...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Guys.. Due to your immense love i couldn't stop my self from updating the second part of my OS...

Hope you like this one..

Ms Gawky &Mr.Crummy

Part -2

{The Encounter}😆

Oh God!!! You cant be this cruel'You won't imagine he was same jerk,idiot and'.oh god why my vocalbury is so bad ,I need to learn so many words to abuse him'.My temper was at its peak as now I have to help him..Could you imagine''.. him.No never,not in my wildest dreams I am going to do.

Then He introduces himself as"MAYANK SHARMA".

He Marched towards me.OMG!!..is tHis nerd is going to sit with me.Oh yes finally I found a new word in my vocalbury,he came near me give a smirk look and settle down at his space.I was so much pissed out that I just took my seat , take out my pen and notebook and started writing what the person standing beside the board having minimal hair which were dipped in the oil and was constantly rubbing his nose and was tackling with his weird south indian type of english.Yes I am talking about Mr.Vankateshwar.Well Today even he was looking far more better to me infront of this idiot.Oh godji.This is enough .now please no more torcher..please but I think today god was certainly was not me.Oh shit today I forgot to read my horoscope else I wouldn't have stepped out from my house but bygones are bygones I can't change anything now ,Poor me.This smoking smell is killing like hell and this bloody jerk was more and more leaning to me.I was hating his smell it wasn't like armaani or axe,it was something more powerfull..something which could even make angels to fall down for him..Wait wait.Ms.Nupur Bhiuhan what the hell are thinking.His smell,his fragrance is certainly not like drug which getting into my neves and it's certainly not that if I will be sitted here for more time then I end up by kissing this disgusting person passionately.i wont happen cool down.Breathe in breathe out.Omg!!!

Look at his biceps girl..He is so hot,wearing red shirt and blue jeans looking not less than my prince.Oh hello!!!Comeback to earth Nupur Bhushan he is a jerk''he is an idiot'.he is a''.a'.a'. nincompoop

Finally another word.pheww..today itself will open oxford dictionary and would learn atleast 5 words to abuse him.

At last class got over,strange he didn't speak a word to me in a class..well who cares.

I was about to go after collecting my things but as usual my leg got stuck and I was about to fall but again was enveloped his strong pairs of arms and I was again drowned in his eyes.

He pulled me of*to be precise gently this time*and says in his world famous sarcastic smile*you are certainly not MULTITASKING",and after grinning he goes to his way making me blank and speechless.How dare he to say me like this.He was fortunate as that time Gunjan came ."Nupsi!!What happen dear..it seems you are going to kill someone.","Yes!!Dear I want to kill this MAYANK SHARMA","why?? He is so cute.. dear"..cute that to he, Gunjan must be dreaming hahahahah'

"Hy Girls.."Here comes Samrat my very good friend and Gunjan's Boyfriend.

"hy",we both together.Both samrat and Gunjan talking to each through their eyes and it as clearly understood that both were hesitant to ask frrm me,So I Being a good Allows them to go together.God Bless Them.Such cute couple..

Time to go back home Nupsi'Well I prefered myself to called as Ms Nupur Bhushan.

As I moved to the parking lot I observed the same Bike which tries to overtake me and also spoiled my summer coat.I was waiting for the owner of the bike and I had already prepared myself to deal with bloody jerk who don't have manners to drive on road.

To my wildest dreams I didn't know that today my luck is so bad.i means literally so bad'You know the guy turns out to be none other than MAYANK SHARMA.Hell'.

How could a sexy boy like him ..wait wait what are you saying Ms.Nuour Bhushan ,it is obivious that idiots like him could drive such on the road.Well gathering my all courage

I was fully prepared to burst on him .He came and stands very close to me Sending gosebumps to my body'.I am gonna faint right here .

Okay 'com..om you cant do it

"Mr.Mayank Sharma what the hell you think of yourself.You are the one due to which my dress got spoiled.Don't you have manners how to ride or drive a vehicle on road"Finally I could able to complete a little portion of my speech without getting nervous.Great Going Ms.Bhushan.But I don't think so my words has any effect on him as he gave his smirk look to me took his helmet andd rove away.Leaving me shouting behind."Hey!!,..You cant go like this.. come back you coward",But to whom I was saying these things.

I drove to home and straightly went to my room.Throw my bag on the bed went to get the cold shower ,I need to cool down my temper.It's not like that I don't fight or I am a very reserved type.But I don't know what happen to when he was close to me.

All those moments her flashing in my mind'then I came across his eyes..i shy smile went to my lips.I wish the world could stop there.

Suddenly I felt someones breath behind my neck ,I could easily recognise who was it ,I turned around and said"Mr.Sharma please get out of my bathroom, don't you you have manners..seeing a girl bathing", but he didn't said anything and slide his inders fingers from my shoulder to my fingers.My Knees were going week and

Then Everything gone out.It made a few moments to realise that I was bloody daydreaming about him was nearly about to slip and here he was ceratinly not their to catch me.. means no chance of getting into his arms .. means no drowning in his eyes'

Oh God What the hell is happening to me.He is nerd , jerk , idiot, rude person .I hate him.

I am not at all physically towards him.Not at all.I don't need to.

After taking a good shower I called up to Gunjan as I know she was much curious to tell about her date with Samrat' and all'

Ohhh.. what a day today was..while remembring my thoughts were again and again move towards Mayank his eyes ,they are so innocent like a soft pearl ans is completely different from the way he behave.He is a bad boy , a bad boy'..may be..

And soon I slept down wishing god that his dreams won't haunt me but I know this is going to impossible'.

Com on .. it's a time to sleep.

Sleep was almost coming into my eyes when an abrupt noise THUD!!!..

Broke my sleep and as you all know how much I love my sleep'''.

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As soon as Nupur opened her eyes she thought she was dreaming, a cute smile appears on her face which was soon turned into a frown which donot take a minute to turn into the angry glare.Nupur's Eyes were wide open when she saw Mayank,Mayank Sharma standing infront og her in her room that to this late''''.

That's all for today'

Thank you so much ...



Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

fantastic update

thanks for pm



Thank a lot😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh...godji😆 such a beautifull update😳amazing shafyy🤗

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